Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 81

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Hey Hinna- happy you loved Raavi’s bucket list. I’ve posted it (except the ones still to be revealed) right after your post.

No more Mature content- ye kab bola maine? 🤓

Just that this update won’t have any 😆

Let’s see how many of the 4 left get mentioned in the next part!!

She didn’t have that particular song in mind- she just wanted to be serenaded. But it turned out to be her favorite- so it was an added bonus for her!

Yep Raavi only wanted to go with Shiva! He’d better take her on a fancy date to make up for the disappointment of this one! 😆

Thanks for reading!

He knows her so well...he sang her fav song

Date ka kya boloon main...wohi hoga jo manzoor e Lizzie hoga!🤣

Riya🤗loooooooved the update🧡🖤🧡

Now both have realized that this is more than physical attraction..

Shiva being a gadheda freaked out the moment he realised his feelings and came up with the bucket list crap and on top of that he is trying to set up her with tushar..someone smack him on head with a brick

Her bucket list is definitely gonna bring them closer..the list is intriguing..I am hella excited for no.7 and 8😆 and now there is an addition to it..can't wait to know what it is

how he thinks that 7 and 8 are out of his bounds.. if only he knew😆

Now whats in that e mail..is he going somewhere

Awwww he is such a cutie..he sang for her😍😍and also apologized..How can someone help falling for this charmer..no wonder she is falling hard

How easily he opened up to her about his dreams and wishes..these two haven't realized it yet but their feeling are way more deeper than what they think..they are so comfortable around each other.

Would love to see her helping him in fulfilling his dreams and in completing his education.

Yaaay they are dance partners..they will set the stage on fire🔥🥳🔥

Is she back??🥳..gadheda.. chipkali..Is she the one I think she is??🤔😆 ..can't wait to know who she is....eagerly waiting for the next one

Originally posted by: Coleus

Riya🤗loooooooved the update🧡🖤🧡

Thank you!!

Now both have realized that this is more than physical attraction..

Shiva being a gadheda freaked out the moment he realised his feelings and came up with the bucket list crap and on top of that he is trying to set up her with tushar..someone smack him on head with a brick

Well, to be fair he started to fulfill her bucket list before he realized his feelings for her. Then he got eaten up with the guilt that he 'ruined' her first kiss. Then with his convoluted thinking he decided he would ruin her first date as well if he went with her! Which was stupid, tbh because he ended up ruining it for her by setting her up with Tushar. Homeboy has a lot to answer for! 😆

Her bucket list is definitely gonna bring them closer..the list is intriguing..I am hella excited for no.7 and 8😆 and now there is an addition to it..can't wait to know what it is

how he thinks that 7 and 8 are out of his bounds.. if only he knew😆

Yeah, if only he knew! 😆 She isn't letting anyone else do those for her!

And yes the bucket list did bring them closer!

Now whats in that e mail..is he going somewhere

Oooh full marks to you, Alisha for noticing this little detail. No one else has asked me about this. And yes, the email will come into play soon!

Awwww he is such a cutie..he sang for her😍😍and also apologized..How can someone help falling for this charmer..no wonder she is falling hard

Phew! Someone thought he was irresistible when he made that gesture! 😆

How easily he opened up to her about his dreams and wishes..these two haven't realized it yet but their feeling are way more deeper than what they think..they are so comfortable around each other.

Would love to see her helping him in fulfilling his dreams and in completing his education.

Yes! He felt comfortable sharing his thoughts about his dreams and also about his dad. That's what close relationships are all about. They also shared a lot with each other during the game!

Yaaay they are dance partners..they will set the stage on fire🔥🥳🔥

Is she back??🥳..gadheda.. chipkali..Is she the one I think she is??🤔😆 ..can't wait to know who she is....eagerly waiting for the next one

She probably is who you think she is! 😆 But wait until I reveal it in the next update! ❤️

Thanks for reading, Alisha! 🤗

Please dont tell me that was Disha in the end

Originally posted by: evilxbalaa

Please dont tell me that was Disha in the end

Okay I won't tell you! Read it yourself in the next update when it comes!

So I'm not posting the next update till I get reviews from you all!

(Not that it's ready but am working on it!) 😆

I was just sending a PM to u saying I need to read it again coz I read it in bits and pieces.....den I thought I should just read again and comment

I didn't do uske liye bahot bahot sorry....give till tomorrow please....request

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

I was just sending a PM to u saying I need to read it again coz I read it in bits and pieces.....den I thought I should just read again and comment

I didn't do uske liye bahot bahot sorry....give till tomorrow please....request

Arre no probs! Take ur time! Just that the next update won't come until you post! 😆❤️

Lizzy how do I rate your stories here? give a star and all? in fanfic I so 2 of my fav writers, who are no 1 and 2 respectively, I would want to give star to your work so u can join that list too.....

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

Lizzy how do I rate your stories here? give a star and all? in fanfic I so 2 of my fav writers, who are no 1 and 2 respectively, I would want to give star to your work so u can join that list too.....

I have no idea! I don't think IF has a star rating so I can't help you there. Besides, I think I'm happy with just reviews and no ratings. Ratings make me feel like I'm in some sort of competition which I'm not. I write because it gives me joy and I'd like readers to read because my writing gives them joy!

Your words are enough, dear Roops! 🤗Though I'm flattered you count me among your favorites! Thank you!