Shivi Os : The massage story : completed

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Ok after a lot of thought finally i wrte this one actually it was idea of scrible19 ... So i said i will write the scenerio... Hope you guys like it... Do bhar bhar k comments 😉 for me n also scrible19

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Mile ho tum humko

Bade naseebon se

Churaya hai maine

Kismat ki lakeeron se

Teri mohabbat se saansein mili hain

Sada rehna dil mein kareeb hoke

Mile ho tum humko

Bade naseebon se

Churaya hai maine

Kismat ki lakeeron se

Teri chaahaton mein kitna tadpe hain


Scene started with ravi walking on road hurriedly spining her ring in her tiny finger... thinking about all her moment with shiva from engagment to last when shiva signal her

She have mixed feeling of joy , shyness and excitment to meet him to talk to him to know about his feelings after engagement exciylt3 her more n more...


Saawan bhi kitne tujh bin barse hain

Zindagi mein meri saari jo bhi kami thi

Tere aa jaane se ab nahi rahi

Sada hi rehna tum mere kareeb hoke

Churaya hai maine kismat ki laqeeron se

Mile ho tum humko bade naseebon se

Churaya hai maine kismat ki lakeeron se


Ravi thought :

finally bhothnath r mere beech ki sb rukawtain hat gai... Ab koi nahi hai hamre beech mn ab bs hamra piya.... shyes.. and covers her face with her palms .... Kia sach mn hamre beech ki dushmani piyar mn badal gai hai kia... yeh to us bhooth nath s mil k puchna parega mujhe...

Then she walk toward the store...

Here shiva anxiously waiting for ravi .. he walking here n there just to pass his time ... Continuously staring at watch ... Every time he notice watch with tha interval of half min ...

Shiva thought :

Yeh chipkali bhi na pata nahi kahan reh gai.. bhabhi wahn the warna sath hi le ata use mn apnay.. pichlay 5 min s intzar kar raha hun is ka otni laparwah to wo nahi the ... Khin kisi kam wam mn to nahi phas gai ... haye bhoolenath asa na ho bs to acha hai... wesay aj kal jo is chipkali k badlay badlay s rang hain na ... Mujhe buht achay lag rahe hn sharmai c hansti hui... Mujhe apni bari bari shehad jesi ankhon s ghorti hui kia lagti hai...n to us p pura hi flat ho chuka hin... Pata nahi is ka kia hal hai yahi puchnay k liye to bulaya hai use r wo hai k ai nahi abhi tk...

Suddenly he heard someone mentioning his name and and he broke out from his bubble of thoughts

Boy : shiva bhaiya yeh boriyan ap rakh lo dukan mn r mujhe paisay day k hisab chukta kar do...

Shiva : chal shiva chipkali k khayalon s bahir a r kam p lag.... Chalo jb tk mn yeh 2 3 boriyan utha k rakh loon...

Shiva start carrying tha weight after 2 jutes he was carried the last one when ravi proceed just to reach the destination as she noticed the scenario in front of her sight and she shouted

Ravi : S.H.I.V.Aaaaaa.....

Sound of thud....

Ravi felt some one took out her senses she was shocked and unable to step forward any more... Her heartbeat is running with the speed of current she doesn't understand how to react .. her feel was unable to obey her willingness ... But she somehow manage to reach the spot .... the spot full of pool of blood ...

Ravi : Sh... Sh... Shiva...


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Tum agar manaoge to maan jaunga

Main tere bulaane pe laut aaunga

Har safar mein sath tera

Main yoon hi nibhaunga


And a stream of tears start flowing from her eye... She placed his head in her lap

Ravi : Shiva uth... Shiva... Sh... Shiva...

She countinously tab on his cheek.. bt he didn't responce ...

One of tear falls on his cheek on his... Just that moment there is some kind of movement in his eyes...

Ravi lies on him and rest her head on just the spot where his heart beats... And cries... Some tears are of sorrow some are of happiness and some are of relief... Shiva smriks little and clunches her in his arms tightly...


Kabhi tumhe yaad meri aaye

Palkon se zulfe hata lena

Saaf dikhunga main tumko wahin

Jo na dikhun to bata dena


After 2 min hug ravi help him to stand one arm of him on her shoulder... With support of her they reached inside the store and ravi make him sit on floor and he rested his head against the wall ... Ravi took a glass of water and make him drand and he countinously staring at her face color... Ravi didn't felt uncomfortable on his stare... Then she took first aid box and take place beside him start wiping his wounds... he felt some pain and ravi blowed on his wound... And signs is it right now n shiva smiles little and nodes...


Kabhi mujhe der jo ho jaaye

Waqt ko thoda bacha lena

Phir se milunga main tumko wahin

Jo na milun to saza dena


Ravi : Gadhera dekh nahi skta tha tu ..? Dhiyan kahan tha tera...

Shiva : tujh p ...

Ravi shyes and turns her face... shiva again turn his face with his finger toward himself..

Shiva : kab s intazar kar raha tha na tera... Kahan reh gai the tu... Pata hai kitna intzar kia hai tera mn n ...

Ravi : wo.... Wo kuch kam tha na mujhe... A rahi the na ... tu r wi8 karta ... Bara aya rowday rathore banay ...


Meri zameen ko tere kadam ka

Na jaane kab se tha intezaar

Ek na ek din aana hai tumko

Dil ko mere hai yeh aitbaar


Shiva pulls her closer and sides the strand of her hair ....

Shiva : acha sun na... Wo bhabhi bata rahi the tu massage buht acha karti hai un k paon ko...

Ravi : han toh... Tere paon mn bhi choot lage hai kia kar doon wahn bhi?

Shiva : nahi paon mn nahi kamar mn....

Ravi widen her eyes on his smrik ...

Ravi : na... Nahi nahi... Mn wahan nahi karon ge..

He pulled her more close ...

Shiva : dekh ... Soch le tu nahi karege toh...

Ravi : toh kia...

Shiva : to mn ... Mn

Ravi ask with the signal of eyes what...

Shiva : mn bhabhi s kahon ga... K un k bachay ko chpt lage the r un ki ladli dawai denay s mana kar rahi the phir tu dekhna kesay bhabhi teri class leti hain...

Ravi : nahi ... Tu yeh nahi bolaye ga ...

Shiva noticed she is effected by dhara scold ...

Shiva : han ...han..mn yahi bolon ga...

Ravi : jahan bolna ho wahn mu mn dahi jama k bethta hai r jahan nahi bolna wahn dhamko deta hai... Bandra kahin ka ...

.. nahi ... Nahi ...n wo kar rahi hn na jo ti keh raha hai to tu apni zaban p lagam lage ga..

The she took oil and sits behind him helps him to removed his clothes... And the start doing massage... Her hands shivers...

Shiva : aye chipkali tere hath kun kamp rahe hn ?

Ravi : wo .. wo.. main...mn...

Shiva : wo mn.... Wo mn ... S bahir nikal r age bol...

Ravi : acha g ab mujhe p rob dal raha hai apna.. subha s jo teri gari phasi hui the wo mn p us ka kia... ?

Itna shok hai understanding banany ka to mere dil ki bat khud hi smjh le...


Main khuda se tere siva

Kuch aur na mangunga


Shiva turns n swips her position as ravi lies now in his lap and he is holding her from waist...

Ravi : shiva kia kar raha hai ?

Shiva : bhabhi kehti hn dil ka rasta ankhon s hota hua jata hai... Islye teri ankhon s puchna chata hun k tera dil kia kehta hai...


Kabhi tumhe yaad meri aaye

Itni si baat samajh jaana

Phir se milunga main tumko wahi

Raah se meri ghuzar jaana


Its was long deep and passionate eye lock of 10 min... Without any distraction...

Ravi : jawab mila ?

Shiva : han ... mila na...

Ravi : kia ?

Shiva : yahi k acha hua bhootnath gira ... Chipkali ko satanay ki saza mili hai...

Ravi: kia????

Shiva smriks while wear back his clothes and ravi understand his smrik and through a empty bootle on him and he just then moves in protest and her target got missed ...

Ravi : gadhera kahin ka..

And smiles back at him ...



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Seriously ? Thanks 😇😇😇😇

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Cute ❤️


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So beautiful

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So beautiful

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So cute!

He was impatiently waiting for her🥰

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Originally posted by: Priyal_10

So cute!

He was impatiently waiting for her🥰

Thanks for the tag❤️

Hehehe yeah he was so despirate 😂😂😂

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It was so cute ❤️
you did all the hardwork 🤗

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Hope the store scene is remotely as cute! Loved it. But I know the two will take forever to talk!

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Awww

This is soo cutee ❣️

Hopefully we get such scenes on the show 😍

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