PriRa OS: No one like you - Page 3

I was a bit surprised to see you on this forum but more than that I was EXCITED!!!!
talk about making readers fall in love with the characters of a show and making them come alive. Darling, you have that skill. What a fantastic piece of art you have here. This is amazing!!!!

hahah for once I thanked neeraj and his snarkiness!
ram is soo sweet.
lLOVE IT!!

thank you for this beautiful piece of work

Originally posted by: Pori

I was a bit surprised to see you on this forum but more than that I was EXCITED!!!!
talk about making readers fall in love with the characters of a show and making them come alive. Darling, you have that skill. What a fantastic piece of art you have here. This is amazing!!!!

hahah for once I thanked neeraj and his snarkiness!
ram is soo sweet.
lLOVE IT!!

thank you for this beautiful piece of work

Aww what a surprise to see you here too! Well, I shouldn't be since I'm just a guest in this forum, not really having watched the show. Just that I really wanted to write on Shibz's prompt and Ram-Priya seemed to fit the bill really well!

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

And BOLD: Omg, I'm so flattered and humbled that you think my writing was able to make you fall in love with already established show characters. It's a huge validation of my writing and I shall treasure it! Thank you! 🤗

Hey Lizzie!

This was absolutely a stunning piece. Loved it to the core.

How Ram was able to help with Priya's insecurities...& each line he used to allay her fears was so well-crafted👏

Loved the flow of the entire sequence & hope I get to read many more work on this couple too....I think I have read some of your work on PS's ShiVi & they've also been amazing🤗

Wow, this was absolutely beautiful!

I am trying to think of specific things I really loved that I can comment on, but I would then end up writing about the entire piece. It was truly amazing.

You have a way with your words. I'm really glad I came across this work!!

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Hey Lizzie!

This was absolutely a stunning piece. Loved it to the core.

How Ram was able to help with Priya's insecurities...& each line he used to allay her fears was so well-crafted👏

Loved the flow of the entire sequence & hope I get to read many more work on this couple too....I think I have read some of your work on PS's ShiVi & they've also been amazing🤗

Hey Sonia (Is that your name?),

Thanks so much for your feedback and I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I'm also glad you've enjoyed my ShiVi fics. I have an ongoing series there, are you following it?

I would love to write more on Ram- Priya but you guys have to help me with prompts since I don't watch the show! 😳

Thanks again for reading! 🤗

Originally posted by: basket_101

Wow, this was absolutely beautiful!

I am trying to think of specific things I really loved that I can comment on, but I would then end up writing about the entire piece. It was truly amazing.

You have a way with your words. I'm really glad I came across this work!!

Thank you so so much!

You know what, I would absolutely love to hear what specifically you liked about the story or what stood out the most to you! As a writer, this kind of specific feedback is what I've always craved for! ❤️ So, if you do feel inclined at any time, i would love to hear from you!

Thank you for your kind words about my writing! ❤️

I totally agree with you actually! I definitely shall when I get home later tonight :)

I cannot believe you haven’t watched the show based upon your writing! You have been so spot on with the characters it’s u real!

Beautifully written and portrayed.

I was sinking deeper and deeper into Ram’s blue eyes as you described them in such detail.

I liked how you managed to bring their polar experiences of their relationships with their fathers together… Ram had a positive relationship where as Priya’s was negative but high went through a loss and both wanted to take control of their situation… got the sake of their families. Different life experiences but same emotions and feelings.

I also liked the realism of Ram telling Priya that he really liked her…. Not loved her as I don’t feel that they are there yet and personally as much as it’s nice to see it Bollywood and dramas … it rarely happens like that… or perhaps I am cynical 🤨

Enjoyed their stolen moments away from the party away from everyone else, just their time and Ram stressing in the need to do things that makes Priya happy, take time for herself.
Loved it all!
Great writing … please do tag me in to future posts 😊

Originally posted by: Pks20

I cannot believe you haven’t watched the show based upon your writing! You have been so spot on with the characters it’s u real!

Beautifully written and portrayed.

I was sinking deeper and deeper into Ram’s blue eyes as you described them in such detail.

I liked how you managed to bring their polar experiences of their relationships with their fathers together… Ram had a positive relationship where as Priya’s was negative but high went through a loss and both wanted to take control of their situation… got the sake of their families. Different life experiences but same emotions and feelings.

I also liked the realism of Ram telling Priya that he really liked her…. Not loved her as I don’t feel that they are there yet and personally as much as it’s nice to see it Bollywood and dramas … it rarely happens like that… or perhaps I am cynical 🤨

Enjoyed their stolen moments away from the party away from everyone else, just their time and Ram stressing in the need to do things that makes Priya happy, take time for herself.
Loved it all!
Great writing … please do tag me in to future posts 😊

Wow thank you so so much! ⭐️

I rarely get reviews like this that detail what aspects of the story appealed to a reader, so I'm gonna treasure this one. And yes, even though Ram and Priya both lost their fathers in different ways, the end result was the same - that of a feeling of being out of control, which helped them bond.

I think the I love you comes too soon in most cases for most fictional romantic couples, and I wanted to add a touch of realism departing from the path of #InstaLove! 😆 I'm so glad you noticed! ❤️

I haven't actually written any Ram-Priya fics but for sure, I'll tag you if I do, but my writing index is in my siggy. Feel free to check out my other stories if you're so inclined.

Thanks a ton for reading and for the insightful review! 🤗

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Hey Sonia (Is that your name?),

Thanks so much for your feedback and I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I'm also glad you've enjoyed my ShiVi fics. I have an ongoing series there, are you following it?

I would love to write more on Ram- Priya but you guys have to help me with prompts since I don't watch the show! 😳

Thanks again for reading! 🤗

Yep, that's my name.

Yes, yes...I think it's an OS continuation na....I definitely loved them but I think I haven't seen a latest update yet.

If it's possible I would love for you to watch the show cos I love Ram's character here & while lot of people had issues with how the show would continue if Noone's grey-shaded here in the starting - I love how slowly in each Episode the plot gets twistier in terms of all the relationships. Each step-Kapoor just gets sicker & smarter.

One of the plots could be how Priya gave Police the evidence to arrest her own Father on the charges of Attempt To Murder who won't get even get a bail since his son tried to harm Ram by mixing prawns in his food in sleuth manner. How Ram understands her character & actually accepts how brave she is while having a similar conversation would be a great perspectives I believe.