Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 30

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Arre wohi wala 😆

It seemed to me some people may have missed update 5 isliye tag kiya!

Sorry to get your hopes up! 😳

Ye do pal ki khushi bht buri hoti hai!

Main khush hogya tha! 🤔

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

🥰💕Amazing update, love their competitiveness 💗……umm Dev said “yes”????? Now I really can’t wait for your next update 🥰

Thank you and yes, Dev said yes! Thoda bohot conflict toh hona chahiye na?😳 Everything cannot be smooth sailing! 😆
Thanks so much for reading!

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Ye do pal ki khushi bht buri hoti hai!

Main khush hogya tha! 🤔

Sorry yaar but in other news I have the plot skeleton ready for the next one! So who knows it might be earlier than I thought! 😳

Loved it!

The truth and dare. Haha poor guys cannot even get a kiss. It's like their lack of communication here. They build up to it so well and bamm they're left high and dry. Every single time😂😂

And Dev the useless spine. Goddd hopefully, Raavi or Shiva can open up about Dev not being interested in her.. hopefully, Raavi can decline without Mami manipulating her.

Love it.

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Loved it!

The truth and dare. Haha poor guys cannot even get a kiss. It's like their lack of communication here. They build up to it so well and bamm they're left high and dry. Every single time😂😂

And Dev the useless spine. Goddd hopefully, Raavi or Shiva can open up about Dev not being interested in her.. hopefully, Raavi can decline without Mami manipulating her.

Love it.

It's lack of communication to a certain extent but more than that I think it's missed opportunity. During the game, it was more Shiva's scruples since he did not want to take advantage of an inebriated Raavi. In the second case, it was just bad timing.

Hopefully it all works out for them! 😳 Thanks for reading! ❤️

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

It's lack of communication to a certain extent but more than that I think it's missed opportunity. During the game, it was more Shiva's scruples since he did not want to take advantage of an inebriated Raavi. In the second case, it was just bad timing.

Hopefully it all works out for them! 😳 Thanks for reading! ❤️

Agreed to everything you said. And realized I should have written my comment better.

Sorry, I meant to say that their missed kiss is like their missed chances of communicating in the show.

P.s. I love this Shiva. 1. He wanted to make sure she didn't get as much intoxicated and 2. a true gentleman ❤️

Ok, I'm seeking an opinion from my readers:

I have 3 distinct parts/ events planned for the next update. Ideally I think they should appear together as one chapter since they're all linked, but since it's 3 separate events I wanted to know if y'all would prefer I post them separately as Parts 1,2,3 or all together as one chapter. If it's the second option, then know that the update will take longer coming because, obviously there's more to write! 😆

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Ok, I'm seeking an opinion from my readers:

I have 3 distinct parts/ events planned for the next update. Ideally I think they should appear together as one chapter since they're all linked, but since it's 3 separate events I wanted to know if y'all would prefer I post them separately as Parts 1,2,3 or all together as one chapter. If it's the second option, then know that the update will take longer coming because, obviously there's more to write! 😆

Riya, i know majority will pick the first option since it'll be a quicker update, but I'm greedy for your writing so i want the second option... Three parts in one chapter sounds amazing.

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Ok, I'm seeking an opinion from my readers:

I have 3 distinct parts/ events planned for the next update. Ideally I think they should appear together as one chapter since they're all linked, but since it's 3 separate events I wanted to know if y'all would prefer I post them separately as Parts 1,2,3 or all together as one chapter. If it's the second option, then know that the update will take longer coming because, obviously there's more to write! 😆

Imaa Greedy! As much as I want the update like right now!!!!!!!

I couldn't help but gravitate towards the more option.

It'll give me more to read with more description.

I'm all in for 3 parts!!!

Bas thoda jaldi haaannn.

Intezaaar bardasht nahi mujhe ❤️☺️

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Mid Week?! ☺️

Dekhte hain. I’ll have to see how my muse behaves! 😒

Like I have the idea in my head but usko execute karna is the real test