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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 104

Geet has a point. Maan has not made any declarations.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Finally he made a move. The jealousy from seeing her with Raj got him in action.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Great part

Hope maaneet manages to talk now

Cont soon

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 3 years ago

Wow Di..... This is an emotional cocktail..... Wahan Geet ke parents Raj aur Geet ki ristha tey kar rahe hai aur yahan Maan aur Geet ki bech toofan aur bichad gaya halat bohot bigde hue lagta hai... and yeah not to forget a drunken Maan+ a possessive Maan= a very very dangerous Maan... I bet something is going to happen but please end this suffering and dono ko ek sath phir se lovey dovey hone do na please..... 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 105

Geet joins them for dance

Wo sab bachche hain, Geet saath kund kund ke naach rahi hai

She feels a strong manly hand on her waist

She feels a pull and find herself in Maan's arms

Those eyes penetrating hers

Geet blanks out

She subconsciously holds his shoulder for support

Geet ke liye ab music band hai

Poori duniya is empty

Time has stopped

She is almost trapped in him, with his arms strongly wrapping her lower back

Afteeeeeerr soooooo long Maan has approached her. Who cares about where, why, what, how

Its treading on the line of public indecency; his grip is on the lowest of her lower back, almost on her hip bone…her lower torso completely sandwiched to his body

Everywhere her body is cold.....except for where her body is touching Maan’s. Those places are burning hot

She feels everybody in the room is able to hear her heartbeat by now

They can see the flushed face for sure

She could feel his warm breath on her bosoms

Just presence of his making her intoxicated

He moves his face, so his breath is tingling the curve of her ear and his scratchy facial hair creating friction on her flushed cheek

Maan notices Raj

That makes him tighten his grip further

Geet is almost hanging onto him, her whole weight supported by him

Geet ko toh surprise hona chahiye ki Maan yahan pe ye sab kar kyun raha hai, warna toh he is indifferent to her

But Geet ka toh khud hi fuse udd gaya hai

She was so craving for him ki usko ko khud nahi pata what here, what where

But before things could go off hand, Maan realizes ki things are actually going on the level of public indecency

He leaves Geet with a jerk and goes onto the washroom

Geet feels as if someone poured cold water on her

Raj walks to Geet concerned

Raj-Geet, are you okay?

Geet is still looking at the direction Maan went

+++++

Maan kuch der baad washroom se nikalta hai

He goes to the bar and gulps some more alcohol

Maan- Mona, I am leaving

Mona & Lisa protest ki nahi

Baaki cousins bhi say ki

‘Why are you leaving?’

‘Koi naa chill kar. Have a drink’

‘Your sobered thoughts are making you embarrassed. Dumb it down with some drunkness’

Udhar, Geet ne toh tab se kuch reply kia hi nahi Raj ko

Her eyes are fixed on one man

Raj was nagging her ki-

Raj- Have this, you will feel better

Raj- Geet le lo

Raj- Lo

‘Leave her alone! Damn it!!’

Maan drunkly roars suddenly at Raj grabbing his collar

Geet is holding onto Maan to pull him away

G- No!

G-Maan! No!

G- Baby stop!

Ab mooh se nikal hi gaya

Raj ko laga usko keh rahi hai

Raj-But baby...he is trying to...

M- You are not her “baby”. I am her “baby”

Maan says with full seriousness, but Mona & Lisa are laughing mooh chupake

Maan leaves Raj and staggers a little

M-I am her baby

Maan walks out of the party dragging Geet along

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Dono garden m pasre huye hai under the moonlight

Maan with Geet on one side and his bottle of vodka on the another

He is whistling

She is looking at him

G- You look like a mess

She says whipping off some sweat off his forehead

M- bcoz i am a mess...arent i?

He slurs

Geet bhi kya bole

He gazes at her, with his bloodshot eyes

M-Juz stay here

He says tapping at her hand

He takes another swig and then scoffs

M-You are tied down with a loser....babyyyyy

M-go ...go...juzzz leave

M-juz aban-abazo (abandon)...just leave

She holds his hand

M-Gee...my mom haze u...u haze me?

Geet is like ki, iska kya sense banta hai?

G-No...I lo-...I do opposite of that. Why would I be here with you if I would have hated you

He nods

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Geet is mesmerized by Maan's smoldering look.

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Posted: 3 years ago

He is her baby, not Raj. He made that perfectly clear to everyone.

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Posted: 3 years ago

105

finally maan is not able to hide n control his feeling but they come out in the shade of refusal

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Posted: 3 years ago

Liza and Mona's plan works and Maan get jealous and show his authority on Geet

He confess what's bothering him but half he have to open up share his thoughts

Geet not bother about Raj 😂😂 Raj thought Geet calling him baby

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Posted: 3 years ago

thanks for the update


Part 105

Fantabulous update.... remarkably written

the world and time has stopped for Geet

she is drawn to Maan and her heart beats faster

but then Maan sees Raj and gets possessive

Geet is happy being in his arms

so Maan realises his actions and leaves Geet

Gosh this Raj....

can he now see that Geet has eyes only for Maan

as expected Maan decided to leave

at least his cousins tried to make him stay

hate Raj nagging Geet

of cos Maan tells him to leave Geet alone and lunges for Raj

well Geet intervenes

how can Raj think Geet was calling him baby

Liked that Maan correct him and says he is Geet's baby

glad that Lisa and Mona's plan worked

not surprised that Maan took Geet with him

now Raj knows he has no chance with Geet

sad seeing Maan drinking

Geet is correct that he is a mess

great seeing her concern for her

finally a drunken Maan opens up

dismayed he thinks that he is a loser and that she hates him

loved that she assures him

hope that they reconcile


update soon

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