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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya1994


Faizi To Koel

Mujh Jaise Romeo, Chirag Leke Dhudhne Se Bhi Kahi Na Mile,

Meri Harkaatein Hai Aisi, Ki Teri Dil Ki Bagiya Mein Bhi Phool Khile.


Chahe Tu Kya, Jaanu Main Sab,

Har Pal Zindagi Se Ladaai, Khatm Hogi Teri Kab?

Tera Saath Jisse Mil Jaye, Kismat Uski Khul Jaye,

Tu Hain Dil Ki Radha, Baki Gali Ki Kudiya Toh Gopiyaan Kehlaye.


Saath Ho Ja Mere, Toh Har Gum Haseen Ho Jayega,

Darr Ho Kitna Hi Bada, Jeet Ka Pataka Hamara Hi Fehrayega.


Phir Kehta Hu Koel, Waqt Rehte Samajh Ja,

Warna Mujhe Accha Ladka, Tujhko Na Mil Payega.


From koel to faizi

Aisa nahi ki main tumhare pyaar ko samaj na Pau , par apne haalaton ka zanjeero main kaid main tumhe chahkar bhi apna na Pau.

Jab Jab badhana chahu tumhare aur kadam tab tab Darr lagta ki phir iss pyaar ka daal daal main phaas na jau.

Pehla bhi dil lagane ki saaza maine hain paayi issi liya ab tumse dur rehkar tumhe salamat rakhne ki kasam hain maine khai.

Radha jitni kaha meri kismat main toh tera pyaar main ab ghumu Meera ki tarha banke jogan.

Khuda ka dar pai mera haar lafz bas yaahi chahe ki tumhari haar dua ko woh kabul farmaiye.

Mera liya waqt toh ussi pal tham gaaya jab mera dil na yeh jaana ki maine har pal tumhe uss rab sa bhi zyaada chaha.

Shayad iss zindagi mein hum kabhie mil na paiye par lakeero main ho likha toh marne ka baad hum taaro ka paar uss shehar mein apna ashyiana baasaye

Pachtava mujhe iss baat ka nahi ki main tumhare pyaar ko apna na pau par issi baat ka ki main tumhein yaa kabhie baata na pau ki tumne iss tuthe parinda ko paar hain diya aur mera daman ko uss indradhanush ka rongo ka sitaaro sa hain bhaar diye.

Shayad mera dur jaane ka fasle ko tum kabhie samaj na paoge par hain yakeen ki waqt ka saath iss dard ko tum bhul jaoge .

Bas jaane sa pehla tumse main itna hi chahu ki mera pyaar ko kabhie tum jhoota na keh lau ,

Chahe hum ho kitna bhi durr mera haar zaare main rahoge sirf tum hi tum, chalti hu issa pehla ki mera kadam mud jaaye kyuki ab bas tumhari yaadein hi hain jaaha main khushi sa reh pau.

Edited by Shraddha6789 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

Ye loveletter se jyada threat letter lag raha 🤣

Aab karan Shergill hain chaat sa kudh ka jaan deni ki baate thodi na karega .Akad pai apne ussa hain naaz issi liya toh karte hain janab apne rani saheba ka dil pai raj.😂😂😂

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

Tu aur Kavya ek naya thread bana lo, poems corner, wifey se keh k pin karwa dete hai.. everyone should read this!!

Y'all talented af!!!

Thanks it's all due to kavya varna main udaariyan pai baas gaano ka parody sa karti thi sabke pait main dard but here it's due to her that I push my creativity to new levels.😊😊😊❤️❤️❤️

Sure we'd both love to do that and it feels great when everyone is entertained and they appreciate out work.😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya1994

Monami to Karan

Teri Akad Pe Hi Toh, Saara Academy Tujhe Sajda Karta Hain,

Par Woh Narm Dil Karan, Samne Aane Se Kyu Darta Hain?


Tere Iss Akad Par Main Toh Kya, Har Ek Kudi Vaari Jaaye,

Kuch Toh Tere Liye, Hashtag Hot Bhi Use Kar Jaaye.


Yuun Aise Tevar Sabko Dikha, Tu Kisko Jalaye?

Raja Ki Jodidaar Banegi Rani Hi, Yeh Baat Kyu Bhool Jaye?


Biryani Se Kabhi, Tu Upar Bhi Uthh Ja,

Ishq-de-Kheer Ka, Swaad Bhi Chak Ja.


Lena Hai Waqt Tujhe Jitna, Tu Utna Le Le

Chahu Bas Itna, Iss Dil Ke Dard Ko Tu Mujhse Keh De.


Ishq Toh Tujhko Mujhse, Ek Din Ho Hi Jayega.

Deewana Bann Mera, Peeche Mere Tu Hi Aayega.


Mere Sacche Pyaar Ko Toh, Tune Hi Na Jana,

Sehra Baandh, Baaraat Ghar Le Aa, Agar Mujhko Hai Apna Banana.

This was amazing and totally Monami with a little more confidence. 😃

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya1994


Monami to Karan

Teri Akad Pe Hi Toh, Saara Academy Tujhe Sajda Karta Hain,

Par Woh Narm Dil Karan, Samne Aane Se Kyu Darta Hain?


Tere Iss Akad Par Main Toh Kya, Har Ek Kudi Vaari Jaaye,

Kuch Toh Tere Liye, Hashtag Hot Bhi Use Kar Jaaye.


Yuun Aise Tevar Sabko Dikha, Tu Kisko Jalaye?

Raja Ki Jodidaar Banegi Rani Hi, Yeh Baat Kyu Bhool Jaye?


Biryani Se Kabhi, Tu Upar Bhi Uthh Ja,

Ishq-de-Kheer Ka, Swaad Bhi Chak Ja.


Lena Hai Waqt Tujhe Jitna, Tu Utna Le Le

Chahu Bas Itna, Iss Dil Ke Dard Ko Tu Mujhse Keh De.


Ishq Toh Tujhko Mujhse, Ek Din Ho Hi Jayega.

Deewana Bann Mera, Peeche Mere Tu Hi Aayega.


Mere Sacche Pyaar Ko Toh, Tune Hi Na Jana,

Sehra Baandh, Baaraat Ghar Le Aa, Agar Mujhko Hai Apna Banana.


I know karan has not reached monu darlings stage yet but having written in monami's favour many times I felt a little bad hence decided to be a little kind .😂

Hence here it goes.😊

Hope it's ok oyy yaar itna pyaar sa toh main maa ko mujhe naaya phone dilane ka liya bhi nahi karti this is so different to me.😂😂


Chahe puri academy mera akad pai sajda kaare ,par mera dil toh bas teri adaon pai haare.

Haar kudi toh meri chehra par maare par bas ek tu hi hain jisa meri ruh bhae.

OYY heeriye biryani toh hain mera pehla pyaar par ek tu hi hain jiska liya main ussa bhi kardu kurbaan.

Ishq ki daawat main kheer ka kya kaam main toh baas teri aakhon ki chasni main kho gaaya yaar.

Dard e Dil chahe ho kitna bhi gehra main jaanta hu ki meri ateet ka kaali raat ka baas tu hi hain savera.

Tu toh bullet train sa bhi Tezz nikli par main thera old fashioned mera dil ki bail gaadi hain raaste main hi atki.

Ishq toh mujhe tujhse hote hote ho hi jaayega, par phir haar paal tujhe khone ka darr iss dil ko satayega.

Deewane toh ranjhe baane ghumte hain main hu Khadoos Shergill jo apne Rani sahiba ka dil pai raj hain karte.

Tu haar baar yeh kyu kaahe ki tera sache pyaar ko bas main na janu,

kya maine kabhie jataye kaise tu bhi haar paal bhul jaaye ki main bhi toh tujhe utna hi chahu.

fikar na Kudiye sehra band tera ghar main hi aaunga , kyuki iss dulhaniya ko yeh dulhe raaja hi leh jaayega.

Edited by Shraddha6789 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Shraddha6789

Aisa nahi ki main tumhare pyaar ko samaj na Pau , par apne haalaton ka zanjeero main kaid main tumhe chahkar bhi apna na Pau.

Jab Jab badhana chahu tumhare aur kadam tab tab Darr lagta ki phir iss pyaar ka daal daal main phaas na jau.

Pehla bhi dil lagane ki saaza maine hain paayi issi liya ab tumse dur rehkar tumhe salamat rakhne ki kasam hain maine khai.

Radha jitni kaha meri kismat main toh tera pyaar main ab ghumu Meera ki tarha banke jogan.

Khuda ka dar pai mera haar lafz bas yaahi chahe ki tumhari haar dua ko woh kabul farmaiye.

Mera liya waqt toh issi pal tham gaaya jab mera dil na yeh jaana ki maine har pal tumhe uss rab sa bhi zyaada chaha.

Shayad iss zindagi mein hum kabhie mil na paiye par lakeero main ho likha toh marne ka baad hum taaro ka paar uss shehar mein apna ashyiana baasaye

Pachtava mujhe iss baat ka nahi ki main tumhare pyaar ko apna na pau par issi baat ka ki main tumhein yaa kabhie baata na pau ki tumne iss tuthe parinda ko paar hain diya aur mera daman ko uss indradhanush ka rongo ka sitaaro sa hain bhaar diye.

Shayad mera dur jaane ka fasle ko tum kabhie samaj na paoge par hain yakeen ki waqt ka saath iss dard ko tum bhul jaoge .

Bas jaane sa pehla tumse main itna chahu ki mera pyaar ko kabhie tum jhoota na keh lau ,

Chahe hum ho kitna bhi durr mera haar zaare main rahoge sirf tum hi tum, chalti hu issa pehla ki mera kadam mud jaaye kyuki ab bas tumhari yaadein hi hain jaaha main khushi sa reh pau.

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This is a response for kavyas poem on a response from koel to Faizi

Edited by Shraddha6789 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Shraddha6789


From koel to faizi

Aisa nahi ki main tumhare pyaar ko samaj na Pau , par apne haalaton ka zanjeero main kaid main tumhe chahkar bhi apna na Pau.

Jab Jab badhana chahu tumhare aur kadam tab tab Darr lagta ki phir iss pyaar ka daal daal main phaas na jau.

Pehla bhi dil lagane ki saaza maine hain paayi issi liya ab tumse dur rehkar tumhe salamat rakhne ki kasam hain maine khai.

Radha jitni kaha meri kismat main toh tera pyaar main ab ghumu Meera ki tarha banke jogan.

Khuda ka dar pai mera haar lafz bas yaahi chahe ki tumhari haar dua ko woh kabul farmaiye.

Mera liya waqt toh issi pal tham gaaya jab mera dil na yeh jaana ki maine har pal tumhe uss rab sa bhi zyaada chaha.

Shayad iss zindagi mein hum kabhie mil na paiye par lakeero main ho likha toh marne ka baad hum taaro ka paar uss shehar mein apna ashyiana baasaye

Pachtava mujhe iss baat ka nahi ki main tumhare pyaar ko apna na pau par issi baat ka ki main tumhein yaa kabhie baata na pau ki tumne iss tuthe parinda ko paar hain diya aur mera daman ko uss indradhanush ka rongo ka sitaaro sa hain bhaar diye.

Shayad mera dur jaane ka fasle ko tum kabhie samaj na paoge par hain yakeen ki waqt ka saath iss dard ko tum bhul jaoge .

Bas jaane sa pehla tumse main itna chahu ki mera pyaar ko kabhie tum jhoota na keh lau ,

Chahe hum ho kitna bhi durr mera haar zaare main rahoge sirf tum hi tum, chalti hu issa pehla ki mera kadam mud jaaye kyuki ab bas tumhari yaadein hi hain jaaha main khushi sa reh pau.


Given the current situation, Yaha tak bhi pahunchne me bahut time hain Koel-Faizi ko🤦🏻‍♀️.


Faizi itna ulja hain auron ki prem kahaani sawarne me, gum ho gaya hain bahar ke shor me, ki khud ke dil ki awaz bhi sun nahin pa raha hain

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Originally posted by: Bodhianveshika


Given the current situation, Yaha tak bhi pahunchne me bahut time hain Koel-Faizi ko🤦🏻‍♀️.


Faizi itna ulja hain auron ki prem kahaani sawarne me, gum ho gaya hain bahar ke shor me, ki khud ke dil ki awaz bhi sun nahin pa raha hain

I know this style is also so new to me . It took me atleast a good twenty minutes to write this as sarcasm comes naturally to me.😂

Faizi aur koel ka lafda sorry pyaar ki patri ka direction toh director bhi na jaane ki kyu hain woh dono ulti dhisha main bhaage.😂😂

Edited by Shraddha6789 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Yaa I agree iss shayari ka mehfil ka bahane jo active rehta hain agar iss ka new thread baanaya toh EDT sunna pad jayega hence ussa compile karna is a better option.😊😊😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

Ye loveletter se jyada threat letter lag raha 🤣

Ab kitna din meri Monu roye uss akdu ko bhi toh paata chale ki woh hoga khadoos Shergill par hamari monami bhi hain Rani sahiba.

Bhag ke kaaha jayega lautkar toh Monu ka paas hi aayega .

Ps mera loveletter itna sweet kaisa honge pehla hi Monu ka pagalpanti ka favour main likhte likhte mera haath aur sar hain dard karte.

Thoda shraddha touch bhi toh hona chahiye.

Varna monami pai choda toh agle saath janam yeh bandi ussa tadti hi betha.😂😂😂

Edited by Shraddha6789 - 3 years ago

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