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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Shraddha6789

Tagging more yaar Monu ka liya likhte likhte itni aadat si ho gaayi ki I have literally begun to think like her and had to rewrite a dozen times cauz everytime I'd write I'd have to go oyy paglet karan kabhie aisa na bolega yeh full to Monu darling waala dialogue hain.😂😂😂


Karan ka pyaar ka paata nahi par mujhe yeh Monu jaaroor apne jaisa banake chodegi.😂😂😂

I can understand. Even I have to scratch my head hard for writing Monu's line. Kitni baar maine likha then edit it, reminding myself that I have to write as Monami, who is soft and emotional. Most of the times, I found her more wrong than Karan in serial, and now I have to write from her side....uff it's really not that easy, as I had thought earlier.


I agree Karan iske pyaar mein pagal ho, na ho, par hum zaroor ho jayenge😂😂😂

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Moonks

Kya baat hai tum dono to gazab dhaa rahe ho❤️

Oye, ye kya hain...

Tumhe sirf comment nahi karna, hame join bhi karna hain....tumhara chupa huya talent ab chupa nahi raha humse...

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya1994

Monami To Karan

Rani Sahiba Tu Mujhko Bulaye,

Par Khud Raja Se Kam Bhaav Na Khaaye.

Sare Aam Bezatti Ki Thi Tumhari, Acchi Tarah Main Jaanu,

Saari Galti Thi Meri, Chaho Toh Sabke Samne Main Maanu.


Pata Hai Mujhe, Rishta Nibhana Tumhe Hain Aaye,

Par Dil Ke Ehsaas Ko Zaahir Karna, Tum Na Sikh Paaye.

Dhadakta Hai Dil, Dard Bhi Tujhe Hota Hain,

Toh Apne Gum Ko Chupaye, Chupkar Kyu Rota Hain?


Huyi Na Itni Deir, Ki Tu Ateet Se Ubhar Na Paaye,

Ishq Ka Izhaar Na Sahi, Mujhe Ek Humdard Sa Dekh Paaye.

Yakeen Hai Mujhe, Woh Din Bhi Zaroor Aayega,

Jab Tu Apne Aap, Sirf-aur-Sirf Mera Ban Jaayega.


Manu main akad ka karu baat ,

Par issi akad main toh hua tha tera dil flat.

Ab Meri heer hain dilo ki rani toh Raje sa tevar mera kyu tujhe itna jalaye.😜😁😁

Maafi na heeriye bas tera dil main thodi si Jagga de, varna jyaada mujhe biryani sa kuch na bhaiye.😆

Waqt baas de thoda ek din tujhe sab main batau,

Par ussa pehla main khudh ki zanjeero ko tod aazad panchi ban jau.

Ishq main abhi hain bohot deer pehla main like toh karu , tu jaa bethi hain top gear pai aur main abhi gadhi ki chabbi ko hi niharu .🤭

Yakeen toh mujhe bhi hain ek din chahunga tujhe tuth ka bas haath na chad mera saath de akhir daam tak.❤️❤️😊

Edited by Shraddha6789 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya1994

I can understand. Even I have to scratch my head hard for writing Monu's line. Kitni baar maine likha then edit it, reminding myself that I have to write as Monami, who is soft and emotional. Most of the times, I found her more wrong than Karan in serial, and now I have to write from her side....uff it's really not that easy, as I had thought earlier.


I agree Karan iske pyaar mein pagal ho, na ho, par hum zaroor ho jayenge😂😂😂

I know even though karan is also not someone I relate to as I'm exactly outgoing and mischievous hence his brooding attitude makes my brain shrink but he's more reasonable than monami and shaleen is such a fabulous actor that u can't help but fall in love with his performance.😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

wah wah! taaliyan taaliyan...


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I am totally enjoying read each post...

kya talent tum dono ka 👏

Awesome...

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: scorp1AN

wah wah! taaliyan taaliyan...


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I am totally enjoying read each post...

kya talent tum dono ka 👏

Awesome...

Thank you but it wouldn't have been possible without such incouraging frnds and a partner in crime like kavya who with her writing makes me want to better myself to match up to her work.😊😊😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya1994

Oye, ye kya hain...

Tumhe sirf comment nahi karna, hame join bhi karna hain....tumhara chupa huya talent ab chupa nahi raha humse...


Tum logo ne sab kuch to keh but agar kuch mind me aaya to I will join

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Posted: 3 years ago

I m totally lost after opening my notifications

🤔

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya1994

I m totally lost after opening my notifications

🤔

i had about 30 notifications...

i was like kahan se shuru karun🤣🤣

you will get used to it soon 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Moonks


Tum logo ne sab kuch to keh but agar kuch mind me aaya to I will join

Yeah moonks plz u have to write more ur really good .

Jaisa jaisa aur likhegi flow apne aap ane lagega.

Hamara bhi yaahi tha shuruvat main thoda hichkichate par ab dekh it comes with ease.

I loved ur geeta one plz tag if u write more.😊😊❤️❤️❤️

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