Shivi Drabbles: Wistful Tales-Ch 1/ Pg 3 [06/06/2021] - Page 8

You took us on an emotional roller coaster ride. God knows how many more secrets has Shiva hidden from Raavi. I think it will be a firework of emotions the day the realisation sets in Raavi that Shiva has always loved her... 🥰🥰

Your analysis are always a good read, but this was just out of the world... please do write more 👏🏻

as i said earlier, u have a very different approach of looking, analyzing and describing things.......your vocabulary/language is brilliant.......

i love what u write.....what a fabulous piece u have written....reading it again ......its not that i didnt understand but loved it so much that cant help myself.....

i was shocked shiva smoking😲 and bidi ......

they really had an eventful day......and now sitting with each other.....they got time to just talk........not fight

fortunately or unfortunately they have spent their entire childhood, adolescence and now adulthood with each other and they simply cant eliminate anyone from that......

but reminiscing about past with the one u have spent childhood is a bliss always ......

i wish raavi had known what he did to those bullies but it doesnt happen always.....

raavi is seeing him in a very different light here......he has a very mature and free thinking.......he is open to taboo subjects of society......and he has his own thinking about dem.......which i loved .......

till she was alone everything was gloomy.......but den they talked and i saw a hope ......

when he looped his fingers with her and said, it could have been us or our story........i didnt know what to feel.......he advised her to study further which again i loved........

regarding smells, like citrus, light floral smell....after rain i love smell of earth.....i dont have strong sense of smell though.......

what did raavi raavi feel when she was told that he knew about amber's crush and he got cigarette for her? she wasnt J i know.......

i dont know if i understood this the way u wanted.......

Originally posted by: Starstuck

You took us on an emotional roller coaster ride. God knows how many more secrets has Shiva hidden from Raavi. I think it will be a firework of emotions the day the realisation sets in Raavi that Shiva has always loved her... 🥰🥰

Your analysis are always a good read, but this was just out of the world... please do write more 👏🏻

Thank you so much that it took to your interest, and you decided to give this one a chance 🤗

I am glad you could understand the depth of emotions that the piece decided to convey!

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

as i said earlier, u have a very different approach of looking, analyzing and describing things.......your vocabulary/language is brilliant.......

i love what u write.....what a fabulous piece u have written....reading it again ......its not that i didnt understand but loved it so much that cant help myself...

Thank you so much for your kind words of appreciation. 🤗

I am so thrilled that you took the time to read it again 😛

i was shocked shiva smoking😲 and bidi ......

they really had an eventful day......and now sitting with each other.....they got time to just talk........not fight

fortunately or unfortunately they have spent their entire childhood, adolescence and now adulthood with each other and they simply cant eliminate anyone from that.....

This story is rooted in childhood issues! A painful area of complexity in most people. Talking is important, and that's why I chose to make it a free flow of conversations.

but reminiscing about past with the one u have spent childhood is a bliss always ......

i wish raavi had known what he did to those bullies but it doesnt happen always.....

raavi is seeing him in a very different light here......he has a very mature and free thinking.......he is open to taboo subjects of society......and he has his own thinking about dem.......which i loved .......

Raavi growing up, had her prejudices in seeing Shiva or his concern for her. She was busy building her own life while his revolved around her.

till she was alone everything was gloomy.......but den they talked and i saw a hope ......

They say the darkest nights lead to the brightest hopeful morning.

when he looped his fingers with her and said, it could have been us or our story........i didnt know what to feel.......he advised her to study Further which Again I loved........

I wanted it to be a subtle moment where Raavi sees him in a new light without communicating their history. The story is about what could have been instead of mulling about what couldn't. Here, in these drabbles, Shivi are distant! Shiva living with Raavi in his past, and Raavi busy wallowing in self-pity. Raavi is also exploring her newfound status, getting adjusted to her growing familiarity to Shiva -the husband.

regarding smells, like citrus, light floral smell....after rain i love smell of earth.....i dont have strong sense of smell, though.......

Wow, drops of citrus and floral are amazing!

what did raavi raavi feel when she was told that he knew about amber's crush and he got cigarette for her? she wasnt J i know.......

Well, Raavi is surprised that there exists a part of Shiva that she isn't privy to. She is shocked to know that she isn't a part of all this.

i dont know if i understood this the way u wanted.......

Thank you again for taking out time to read this over and over! Makes me so happy 🤗

update next part today plz

Originally posted by: AsadZoyaILU

update next part today plz

I will try to update more often! Thank you for the love! 🤗

Feels good to read it, but also painful

I loved them and waiting for an update

About fragrances, I don't have a strong sense of smell

But my mom did

Originally posted by: dhaakshu

Feels good to read it, but also painful

I loved them and waiting for an update

About fragrances, I don't have a strong sense of smell

But my mom did

Thank you so much 🤗

My stories are generally unfortunate. That's why I don't feel like writing much 😆

Can we please get more? I don't have enough words to describe what a beauty it is, such rich choice of words, such beautiful descriptions, in fact if I coupd read closing my eyes I couod have probably seen them in imagination such was the beauty of your writing. Angsty ShiVi is my bread and jam. If possible please do write more. I've read and reread it but just can't get enough.

Originally posted by: Anon21

Can we please get more? I don't have enough words to describe what a beauty it is, such rich choice of words, such beautiful descriptions, in fact if I coupd read closing my eyes I couod have probably seen them in imagination such was the beauty of your writing. Angsty ShiVi is my bread and jam. If possible please do write more. I've read and reread it but just can't get enough.

Thank you so much for taking out tome for reading this, and appreciating it! 🤗

I am not sure if I could begin again, but whenever I will have time or may want to dwell some more time wallowing in misery, I shall write something.

Much love!