Yeh Zid Hai Dil Kiii...😁

It's a story of six people who although knows eachother from somewhere or somehow but some of them are trying to avoid other and some of them are trying to amend...

It's an Army background and Police background story. You guys will get to know about this very soon.

You guys will understand after a little intro and some character's intro of this story. Till then, wait a little bit...👍

And one more thing guys, I got to know through my reader that you wanted me to post my story here. So, please thoda jhel lena agar koi problem ho to ya fir mujhe bata dena and I'll immediately rectify it because it's my first time here, posting my story...

Bro this is the story I was talking about. I requested the author so she has published here so you all can read.

Thank you @XXXCAGE

Thank you for posting dear author, looking forward to reading more!

Thank you to reader ji also 🤗

PROLOGUE

Well, I'm so going to like writing about this story. So, let's continue...

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It's evening time and a guy was thinking about something or rather someone whom he knows...

Guy (Thinking) - Where are you Miss. Fighter? I'm so missing you. I know that was my fault and I behaved very rudely and that was wrong of me but you didn't have to just leave me.

You could have scold me like you used to do. Why did you gave up on me? Why did you just leave me behind to regret? Please come back to me, I won't behave like that ever again I promise... Bas ek bar vapas aa jao, fir tumhe kahi jane nahi dunga aur khudse dur to bilkul nahi...

On the other side a girl is preparing herself and her team to infiltrate a godown to catch the culprits and bring them to justice...

Girl (Thinking) - I'm sorry, par mere pas aur koi option nahi tha. I had to do that. Mujhe tumse dur jana hi tha. Na me tumhare sath reh pa rahi thi aur na hi tumhe chod pa rahi thi. Magar mera tumse dur jana hi sahi tha MR. Bear...

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A guy in his room was thinking about something...

Guy (Thinking) - Kon ho tum? Kaha dekha hai mene tumhe? Aur agar ham mile hai ya mene tumhe dekha hai to mujhe kuch yad kyun nahi hai? Mere liye tum ek mystery banti ja rahi ho, jo na mujhe chen se jine de rahi hai aur na hi sukoon ki nind lene de rahi hai. Aaj me khud se ek vada karta hu ke tumhare bare me to mein kahi se bhi dhundh nikaluga. Just wait for me.

On the other hand the girl is trying to hide from that very guy and thinking that how to escape him...

Girl (Thinking) - are yr, isse kese bachu? Ise agar mere bare me pata chal gya to sab gadbad ho jayegi. Kya karu k ise hamare atit ke bare me pata na chale? Vese, ye thoda mushkil hai considering he is an army officer but kuch to kar hi lugi afterall training bhi isine di hai...

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A guy is getting ready to go on a mission with his team and thinking about someone...

Guy (Thinking) - Kash, mene tumhe us waqt rok liya hota, kash apne dil ki sunta but tumhe to pata hai na mein ek number ka gadha hu. Tumse pyaar hai ye waqt rehte samaj hi nahi paya aur tum dur chali gai tab jake samaj aaya ke kitna miss karta hu mein tumhe aur kitna pyaar karne laga hu mein tumse. Just wait my love, I'll find you out and won't let you leave me ever.

On the other hand the girl about whom the guy was thinking is exercising to forget about the guy and cursing him for breaking the only relationship of friendship between them so brutally that she isn't able to trust anyone anymore...

Girl (Thinking) - Kyun? Kyun kiya tumne asa? Kya galti thi meri? Ke mene tumse pyaar kiya? Then you should be happy now that mein tumse ab kabhi pyaar nahi karugi aur zindgi bhar me tumhara chehara nahi dekhna chahati...

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So, these are the monologues. So friends, now tell me that who's who according to you guys? I'm waiting and yeah I'm also writing the character sketch so be ready for another introduction...😊 Take care, bye - bye....

CHARACTER SKETCH

Let's continue...😁



Special Agent Karan Shergill
Age 30
A Commando
Rude, Emotionless, Angry Young Man
He's waiting for his lady love whom he have lost due to some misunderstandings...
Monami's love interest...
Faizi's best friend and Sid's friend...



A.C.P. Dr. Monami Mahajan
Age 28
ATS Chief
(Anti Terrorist Squard)
She used to be happy go lucky and positive person but due to some reasons she became just like "Khadoosh Shergill"...
She is now the new version of "Khadoosh Shergill", but only to her juniors and strangers...
Sanjana's soul sister and koel and Sid's best friend...
Karan's love interest...



Special Agent Faizuddin Siddiqui
Age 30
one month younger than Karan
Happy go lucky type of a person, always deals with any situation with a smile...
Karan's best friend and only one who can make karan see through his actions...
Lost his some part of a memory in an attack...
Koel's love interest...

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Senior officer Koel Roy
Age 28
Third in Command of ATS
She's a very private person due to her past and her child whom she wants to protect at any cost...
She gets angry really easily and can do anything for her loved ones...
Monami and Sid's best friend and Faizi's love interest...



A.C.P. Siddharth Ganju
(In short Sid G)
Second in command of ATS
Age 29
Very fun loving and carefree type of a nature, always smiles and make everybody smile around him...
Although he regrets something in his life but that's another story...
Monami's best friend and rakhi brother...
Sanjana's love interest...
Monami and koel's best friend...
Also Karan's friend...

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Special Agent Sanjana Shergill
Age 27
Karan's younger sister
"Ladli" of Karan and Faizi
But tough as hell...
She also has some regret in her life and that's why she's turn into an angry young women...
Sid's love interest...
Monami's soul sister...

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So, here's the intro...
Now, tell me kesa laga?
Please share your opinions with me... Take care guys...

SOME TALKS & A NEW MISSION - 1

Hey guys, so I'm here with the new part... So, here we go...

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Three persons are talking after completing the raid in a godown to stop and catch the culprits red handed dealing in a big consignment of different drugs and arms & ammunitions. They were happy that they are free now...

Boy - Yr Monu, tujhe ni lagta ke Hitler kuch zyada hi kara rahe hai humse?

She glares at him playfully and said...

Girl - Sid, yeh kam hai humara remember? Hum pi6le 3 saalo se yahi karte aaye hai... I'm still surprised ke tu 3 saal se lagatar bina ruke kam kar raha hai aur tune aaj tak koi complaint bhi nahi kari hai...

Sid - Kya yr Monu!!!

He whined...

Girl - To galat kya bola Monami ne... I mean, academy me to tujhe har bar complaint karte dekha hai, Monami se bhi zyada... Aur mere hisab se isko jo vo title mila tha na complaint box ka vo tera hona chahiye tha, us Karan ne galat bandi ko galat nam de diya...

That girl talked whole thing in a flow and when Sid glared at her only then she realised that what blunder she has committed...

Sid - Koel ka vo matlab nahi tha Monu. Tu....

Monami ne bich me hi bat ko katate hue...

Monami - It's ok Sid. I don't mind anymore. That guy doesn't effect me anymore...

And she leaves...

Koel - Sorry yr Sid, mera sach me vo matlab nahi tha vo to bas flow-flow me nikal gya yr...

Sid - Kya yr Koel, Monu ko ek to vesebhi usne taklif di hai aur tu hai ke usko is bareme yad dilaye ja rahi hai...

Koel - Sorry yr, aaida se dhyan rakhungi...

Sid - It's ok.

Tabhi Sid ke cabin ka intercom bajta hai...

Sid - Hello....

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Sid - Ji sir, hum tino abhi aate hai...

To Koel,

Sid - Chalo, Hitler ne bulaya hai, lagta hai fir koi naya kand ho gya ya honewala hai. Khair, vo to unse milne ke bad hi pata chalega chal...

They both leaves the cabin and meets Monami outside and with her they goes to meet their Chief in Command...

(Guys yaha obviously Monami kebhi seniors hoge to the Boss is only for that addressing...)

A knock and the Boss gives the permission to enter...

The three of them wishes the Boss and says Jai Hind & Salutes...

Boss - Don't be so formal guys. At ease...

Now, let's get straight to the point. I'm giving you another mission. It's a little dengerous and a little difficult also. So, we are collaborating with the army commandos with this new mission...

Monami, aap ATS Chief hai to aapko apni puri team ko ready karna hoga is mission ke liye, not that k koi blackout karega because itna to me ab tum logo ke bare me jan hi gaya hu...

Tum log Parakram SAF ja rahe ho aur mission ke khatam hone tak vahi rahoge aur vahan ke jo naye trainers hai unke sath ye kam karoge...

(Naye trainers, yeh sunke Monami & Koel thodi relaxed hui and the Boss continued)

Aur ha Monami yeh file lo, isme tumhe aur tumhari team ko jo chahiye vo information mil jayegi aur rahi un officers ki bat jinke sath tum log kam karoge unhe tum directly vahi jakar miloge, because of security purpose unki identities reveal nahi ki gai hai...

To aur koi question? Aur tum log itne shant kyu ho? Kya hua? Aur tum logo ne abhi tak us raid ke bareme mujhe report nahi kiya hai. Kya information mili hai Monami?

Monami - Boss, humne vaha se Altaf ko arrest kiya hai aur usse hume kafi vital information mili hai, aur ab to mujhe asa lagta hai ki Parakram SAF isse kahi na kahi juda hua hai because hume information hi asi mili hai jo kafi heran aur pareshaan kar denewali hai...

Boss - Kya information hai? Asa kya pata chala?

Sid - Boss, vo army me apne bande bhejne ki planning kar rahe hai. Hum Parakram SAF se training le chuke hai isliye hum iske bare me thoda bahot jante hai. Yeh academy shuru ki gayi thi civilians ko training dene ke liye taki waqt aane pe vo khud ko aur apne aaspass ke logo ko protect kar sake...

Koel - Yes Boss, aur ab is bat ka fayda utha ke ye army me apne bande plant karne ke liye Parakram SAF me ghusna chahte hai, taki desh ki sabse badi security ko dhire dhire khokhla kar sake. Mein manti hu ke is tarah se ghuspeth karna itna aasan nahi hai lekin hum khud ek example hai is bat ke, ke itna mushkil bhi nahi hai...

Boss - Oh My God!!! Yeh bat to sachme pareshaan karnewali hai, thik hai tum log vahan nikalne ki taiyyari karo and main bhi tum logo ko vahi miluga. Tum sab log mission se judi bat Monami ko report karoge aur Monami tum mujhe kyuki mein bhi vahi rahunga aur jo facility ya information chahiye hogi vo provide karunga. Any questions?

Trio together - No Boss...

Boss - Ok then, get back to your work and get ready for the mission. All the best guys...

Trio together - Thank you Boss...

And they leaves the cabin. Vo tino hi apne - apne past ke bare me soch rahe the aur prey kar rahe the ke jo unka dil keh raha hai vahi ho/na ho...

Tabhi unke juniors aate hai aur apne seniors ko soch me duba dekh aapas me khusurpusur shuru kar dete hai...

Monami - Kya chal raha hai yaha? Team, get to work... Aur Bikram ye file lo aur Rajbir and Guari ke sath milke ise study karo aur iske bare me jitni information nikal sako vo nikal ke 2 ghante ke andar andar mujhe meri desk pe chahiye got it?

Bikram - But Chief...

Monami - 1.5 ghanta?

Bikram - Chief...

Monami - 1 ghanta?

Bikram - No Chief, 2 ghante me ho jayega...

Monami - Good, get to work...

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Sid - Kya yr Monu!!! Tera itna khadoos hona zaroori hai? Bechare juniors...

Monami glares at him and he shuts his mouth for good😁😁😁

Koel - To plan kya hai? Kab nikal rahe hai hum?

Monami - Bas yeh information collect ho jaye fir apne - apne ghar ko nikalte hai packing karke fir 3 ghante me milte hai. Aur ha road journey hai to sabko bol dena ke mujhe koi bhi late nahi chahiye varna use 6odke me nikal lugi, fir vo jo koi bhi hoga apne aap aayega akela ya akeli. Is that clear?

Sid & Koel - Crystal...

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So, guys here we go. Tell me how was it and should I be changing anything in it or you guys are ok with this plot?

Till then, take care & bye - bye...😁😁😁

Really interesting start!! 👍🏼🤗

Looking forward to read your story.

ATS TEAM



A.C.P. Dr. Monami Mahajan
Age 28
ATS Chief
(Anti Terrorist Squard)
She used to be happy go lucky and positive person but due to some reasons she became just like "Khadoosh Shergill"...
She is now the new version of "Khadoosh Shergill", but only to her juniors and strangers...
Sanjana's soul sister and koel and Sid's best friend...
Karan's love interest...



A.C.P. Siddharth Ganju

(In short Sid G)

Second in command of ATS
Age 29
Very fun loving and carefree type of a nature, always smiles and make everybody smile around him...
Although he regrets something in his life but that's another story...
Monami's best friend and rakhi brother...
Sanjana's love interest...
Monami and koel's best friend...
Also Karan's friend...



Senior officer Koel Roy
Age 28
Third in Command of ATS
She's a very private person due to her past and her child whom she wants to protect at any cost...
She gets angry really easily and can do anything for her loved ones...

Monami and Sid's best friend and Faizi's love interest...



Junior Officer Bikram
Age 25
Research Expert



Junior Officer Gauri
Age 24
Tech Expert



Junior Officer Rajbir
Age 25
Combat Expert

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