Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 23

Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

I LOVE THIS SERIES! I LOVE THIS SHIVA AND RAAVI! I LOVE LOVE LOVE THEIR GAME AND I LOOOOOOOVVVVVVEEEEEEEEE YOU!!!

Haaye! You’ve turned me into a puddle of mush with this update. I don’t know if it’s even possible to fall more in love with your Shiva but I think with each word in this update, heck, every alphabet in this update I did fall more in love with him.

Dobi Raavi fell asleep and God bless Shiva’s sense of control!

Can’t wait to read more!!

Aww thank you so so much! I’m sooo happy you enjoyed the update and even more happy that you fell in love with my Shiva because he IS adorable!

Raavi got sozzled and blacked out! Ha ha! Shiva got her to do so many things she’s never done- sing karaoke, slow dance and get sozzled! 😆

Originally posted by: mpks1

I just loved it and dumbfounded to even appreciate it. I could imagine everything in my mind as I was reading it.

I loved the entire Have I ever concept, I laughed the most for Krish being a cougar chaser😆 and Raavi drinking for the first time, obviously she is going to pass out. Shiva being the gentleman, though he uses lot of double entendres still the dance Loved the song selection also, these are close to my heart especially Pehla Nasha as JJWS was my first movie out with my friends as a teenager, stepping into HS in the theater when it was released in 1992 😆

There is love blossoming between the 2, but something is stopping them. I hope it gets better in the next OS.

Looking forward to the next update❤️

Thank you!! ❤️
I loved JJWS too and I too had watched it on screen and I remember cheering like mad during the cycle race! 😆 And Pehla Nasha is a perennial favorite! Like how could anyone hate that song? ❤️

All the songs I used in this update have a special meaning for me! 😳

In fact, Aapki aankhon mein kuch was the verse some guy used when he gave me a rose on Valentine’s Day in high school 😳! Those were the days!

I’m so glad you enjoyed this, and yes, something is stopping them. Right now it’s Raavi’s inexperience and Shiva’s conscience. But that could change!

I’m glad you recognized that Raavi was gonna pass out since she’s drinking for the first time! Plus she went overboard despite Shiva’s best efforts! 😆

You saying you could imagine everything as you read is the best validation for any writer, that’s what we aim to do when we write- bring up an imagery and visualization for the reader!

Thanks for reading and all the support !!

Originally posted by: Foxii

This Shiva is ❤️ He danced with her...aww

getting all protective and possessive in his thoughts

This was so well written... each sentence was worth the read

Waiting for more

He fulfilled her fantasies, he listened to her, validated her feelings, made her feel safe, protected, got her to get over fears and then cushioned her fall like the hero he is! Who wouldn’t fall in love with such a guy?

Thanks so much for reading!

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Woah.. this was another fabulous update!! Their game was so so hot even though they didn't do much other than dance and almost kiss 😆

But the build up was sizzling ☺️

Dobi Raavi falling asleep and shiva's iron self control 😆❤️

Ioved it a lot!! 💖💖

I’m glad you thought the build up was amazing because that’s what I aim to do when I write, leave my readers wanting more! Raavi got blackout drunk just like Shiva! She won’t be able to use that one in their next Never Have I ever game! 😆

Thank you for reading! ❤️

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

excruciating and torturous update.....every second i was like now they are doing something, now they are not, now they are and they are not.......

their game was unique.......1st time in a story i have read........emotions running high and feeling safe and secure with each other and tempted to do something sinful ......along with shiva it was readers test too....

almost kiss se almost next level se, she just slept ho gaya, and i was coz all the got all hyped up and worked up........

kitna buildup hua tha....i was

patience is a virtue i have heard but kitna patience hai shiva ka😲 the self control on his desires ........oh my.....love him more and more......he announced, as if seeking permission that i am gonna kiss u now.......how much cuter he can get........

shiva raavi to each other

Tattoo story :-

normal talks they had, got to know each other, getting protective of her, both were being J......this update had everything......u r a master of this art liz darling....

ok i have a confusion.........did he lie or did he not? coz there was a sentence where she said that u lied.......dont tell me as a reader we have to figure out........hehehehe

one more point.....initial para or so was different........i thought i am reading a new story till mrs S was mentioned.......this can be read as a standalone too......and by this i mean in a good way..........

i appreciate your writing, the time you give.........👍🏼👏⭐️

wont say any more now......

Haayyye meri jaan, thank you so so much! I appreciate your reviews and the time you give! 😳
And I adore your gifs! Kahan se laate ho? Hume bhi batao 😆

I’m glad you thought this can be read as a stand-alone because that’s what I’ve been aiming for.

Shiva’s self-control comes from his morals that he ironically thinks he lacks. He will never take advantage of a girl who’s not 100% in her senses and therefore cannot be trusted to make the right decisions. And I think that speaks of his character. He cares for her and gets so worked up when he hears of the way she was let down by Mehul, he admires her spirit and courage and of course he desires her. Perfect recipe for falling in love, though something is still holding him back. I think it might be that he thinks he’s not good enough for her.

About Shiva’s lying- yea of course- we know for a fact that he lied when he said this: Never have I ever wanted to kiss someone so much—-

Because he did want to kiss Raavi. But did he lie about other stuff too? Just so that he could prevent Raavi from drinking? That’s for him to know and you readers to find out! 😆 Waise I thought it was quite gallant of him to keep a watch on her alcohol intake knowing it’s her first time imbibing, so she wouldn’t be able to hold it as well.
Him asking for permission or rather announcing he was going to kiss her was such a Shiva thing to do na? That’s who Shiva is in my ShiVi universe at least! 😳

I love the time you give to write your reviews! Thanks so much for that!

Btw, what’s your name? Or rather what do I call you?

Pieces like this and authors like you are a treat to read !

The pleasure is all mine ❤️

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Haayyye meri jaan, thank you so so much! I appreciate your reviews and the time you give! 😳
And I adore your gifs! Kahan se laate ho? Hume bhi batao 😆

I’m glad you thought this can be read as a stand-alone because that’s what I’ve been aiming for.

Shiva’s self-control comes from his morals that he ironically thinks he lacks. He will never take advantage of a girl who’s not 100% in her senses and therefore cannot be trusted to make the right decisions. And I think that speaks of his character. He cares for her and gets so worked up when he hears of the way she was let down by Mehul, he admires her spirit and courage and of course he desires her. Perfect recipe for falling in love, though something is still holding him back. I think it might be that he thinks he’s not good enough for her.

About Shiva’s lying- yea of course- we know for a fact that he lied when he said this: Never have I ever wanted to kiss someone so much—-

Because he did want to kiss Raavi. But did he lie about other stuff too? Just so that he could prevent Raavi from drinking? That’s for him to know and you readers to find out! 😆 Waise I thought it was quite gallant of him to keep a watch on her alcohol intake knowing it’s her first time imbibing, so she wouldn’t be able to hold it as well.
Him asking for permission or rather announcing he was going to kiss her was such a Shiva thing to do na? That’s who Shiva is in my ShiVi universe at least! 😳

I love the time you give to write your reviews! Thanks so much for that!

Btw, what’s your name? Or rather what do I call you?

u can call me roopa or R whatever u like......

your shiva is a real man thru and thru and i love him......

he doesnt miss a thing when it comes to her....her being a teetotaler was taken care of.......oh man who would not love him.......he is a keeper....

i knew u would say u guess did he lie about other things🤣

@bold.........yes a shiva thing......

gifs to like u all..........google kar kar ke......😆

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

u can call me roopa or R whatever u like......

your shiva is a real man thru and thru and i love him......

he doesnt miss a thing when it comes to her....her being a teetotaler was taken care of.......oh man who would not love him.......he is a keeper....

i knew u would say u guess did he lie about other things🤣

@bold.........yes a shiva thing......

gifs to like u all..........google kar kar ke......😆

Accha phir toh jai bolo Google maata ki! 😆
Waise the gif you posted abt the guy commenting on the tattoo was just perfect ☺️ And now you’ve got me imagining Shiva just like that guy soaking in a tub smirking at Raavi’s tattoo ☺️

I bow to you, Lizzie!😆 This is one hell of a masterpiece And I know it will keep coming🤗

This was Fantasticmagnificientwonderfuldelight😳

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

I bow to you, Lizzie!😆 This is one hell of a masterpiece And I know it will keep coming🤗

This was Fantasticmagnificientwonderfuldelight😳

OMG! I’m laughing so hard and blushing hard too!

Thank you so much! What did you enjoy most about the update?