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Posted: 4 years ago
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Arreeeeyyyyy of course we want second part....

It's really a nice update

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Posted: 4 years ago
#12

Plz do continue love the track

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Posted: 4 years ago
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He agreed! Let’s have the next part… would love to read how they convince Anupama!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thank you all for appreciation. Here is the second part. Aaj bhi office ke beech me draft kar rahi hmm. 😆 Kuch ni ho sakta mera🤣


They are all ready to go to office. While Anu is instructing Samar to take care of the young ladies and make sure to drop Kinjal at her office. Anuj and Anu moved out of the apartment while the kids waved them, specially Anuj and also showing All the best.


Anu and Anuj got busy in the back to back meetings and in the between of that Anuj never forget to take opinion from Anu and most importantly stealing glances at her. He, in no world can tell her about the vrat. It was approx 12:15 p.m. Anu's phone rang and to her surprise it was GK kaka.

Anu: Jai Shri Krishna Kaka.

GK: Khush rah beta. Actually maine tujhe call isliye kiya hai ki Anuj ko morning me right hand me chhot lag gayi thi, infact he is not able to lift hand properly, karta bhi hai to he feels pain. Wo khud to nahi batayega so I am calling. So if possible kya tum use dinner kara dogi? I am apne hath se ya Samar ke haath se?

Anu is shocked as it is correct that Anuj didnt told her anything about it. But the point is if there was pain, he would have told something or the other to her but it is nothing like that. It is all setup by GK.

Anu didnt said anything to Anuj just smiled and concentrated on the meet to let it finish. The time it is finished, she went out of the room without a word to Anuj. She returned with the food tray.

Anuj: Anu aaj you are hungry earlier then everyday.

Anu: Ye meri nahi aapka khana hai.

Anuj: No nO No. ye nahi ho sakta... I mean khana ni.

Anu: Kyu nahi. Mujhe kaka ne sab bata diya hai. abhi unka phone aaya hai.

Anuj was wishing if he had Mr. India watch so that he could disappear from this situation but he cannot. Anu is all set to feed Anuj.

Anuj: No Anu please dont do this mai nahi khaunga

Anu: Kyu aapka bhi kya karwachauth ka vrat hai?

Anuj is all sweaty in the central AC as he cannot utter a word. His vocabulary seems to be empty now. But then he thought of handling the situation as he knew that Anu to khana khila ke hi manegi as he knew very well that she is expert in feeding people.

Anuj: Actually haan Anupama maine fast rakh hai. Wo new project start hota hai na to I do this jisse sab thik thik ho jaye.

Anu (smiling): Acha maine to kuch or hi samajh liya tha. But ye to achi baat hai ki aapne fast rakha project ke liye. But ye batayiye mai kaun hmm apki?

Anuj is thinking that why is she asking all the difficult questions today only which he knew the answers for but cannot tell.

Anuj: friend, tumhe to ata hi hai na.

Anu: Business partner bhi hmm. To agar aapne vrat rakha hai to mai bhi rakhungi. Aaap abhi khana kha lijiye mai baki ke din ka fast rakh leti hmm, but aapko meri ek baat manni hogi ki ye khana aapko mai apne haath se khilaungi.

Anuj seems to be on cloud nine. There is nothing in the world with which he could compare his happiness to. He is blushing but is trying hard to hide it.

Anuj: Nahi Anu, tum nahi rakhogi, mai nahi chahta tum bhukhi raho. Bas tu nahi.

Anu cut him in between. She put her hand on his and said, " karne dijiye na please." There is nothing now that could make Anuj say No to her. So he agreed but on the condition that she will allow him and kids to break her fast. At first she was hesitant but then agreed as kids are involved.

Anu: Okay say AAA

Anuj opened his mouth and she feed her with her known hands.


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Bas itna he. I have ofcourse taken feedback from you guys and ideas that you shared with me. I will try to improve more and will try to write more on suggested topics.

Edited by tintin0602 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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I forgot to tag, so I am doing it here. Naya naya tag karna seekha hai na abhi🤣

Posted the second part above

or try kar rahi hmm 5 se zyada nahi ho rahe hai. Sorry for the inconvenience

Edited by tintin0602 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Anuj ki to nikal padi😀 Naughty GK ka idea kaam aaya👏🏼 Superb one dear

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nyccc part but short....plz write next part long

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww×3000

It was such a good read

Apni anu super smart hai....sab samjhti hai bandi😆

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