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Posted: 4 years ago

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Originally posted by: Iktara22
beautiful

thank you ❤❤

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Hey guys by your comments and after taking a read i also really feel that i could end it better. So i gave thought to write a part-2........... Soon will update that....... Hope so you all will like that............and if you have any suggestion please comment........

Yours

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Posted: 4 years ago

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Originally posted by: Odette_delusion
Hey guys by your comments and after taking a read i also really feel that i could end it better. So i gave thought to write a part-2........... Soon will update that....... Hope so you all will like that............and if you have any suggestion please comment........

Yours
ODETTE_DELUSION

Please don't take me in wrong way I don't want abla bechari raavi now it's abt her sef worth n respect..

If possible let her take some extreme step nt apologizing easily like always otherwise she will taken for granted...

Already m nt happy with after reaction in this story n show , waisi bhi show mein kuch nahi milega bas app logo se umeed hai..

Sorry incase I offend .....

Something major n extreme need of the hour... Strong raavi n shiva begging for maafi he had done enough damage.. kiss hug n all irreparable damage...

Edited by freebird_dd - 4 years ago

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Posted: 4 years ago

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Heartbreaking 💔, and emotional ❤️‍🩹 totally breaks the heart…can’t wait for the 2nd part

Edited by Luvs_SanIsh - 4 years ago

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Odette_delusion

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Posted: 4 years ago

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Originally posted by: freebird_dd

Please don't take me in wrong way I don't want abla bechari raavi now it's abt her sef worth n respect..
If possible let her take some extreme step nt apologizing easily like always otherwise she will taken for granted...
Already m nt happy with after reaction in this story n show , waisi bhi show mein kuch nahi milega bas app logo se umeed hai..
Sorry incase I offend .....
Something major n extreme need of the hour... Strong raavi n shiva begging for maafi he had done enough damage.. kiss hug n all irreparable damage...

i didn't got offeneded........ I also felt that it could have been better...... 😇