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Originally posted by: Foxii

It was so nice... liked the frustration and emotional outburst

Thanks for the tag

Glad you liked it hon.

Thanks a lot ❤️

Originally posted by: sapphir

Ritu🥺.

Yeh kya kiya😮🤩🤩

🤣🤣

It was Fab🎊 Fab🎊 Fab🎊

Not that I've to say it after reading 5 pages of compliments 🤭😍

The way....Raavi has a internal breakdown and decided to sleep in the kitchen (don't kno if u considered,bt it's kinda like how they treat her like a Maid n now....so she maybe goes ' why not'....)

I had to keep my cellphone away thrice and tell myself that this wasn't real😅🙈....

Also......

Tu usko mere saath nhi dekh saktina?... Tho main kisi aur ko tujhe bhaga le jane ki baat karte hue bhi nahi sunn sakta… Tujhse Bardasht nhi hoti na wo ladki…tho mujhse koi aur kaise bardasht hota?...”

This part was smthng I never imagined (or correlated , not my fault🙃....the makers ghumao-ing the story too much to think😵😵🤭)

N we may never see it but it's soo damn right!

Sooo a Huge round of applause to u👏🏻😌

M floating in bliss now, cuz this isn't just a random FF(they are awesome as well) but this is close to reality,... Nd it ends well💖.

Vaise itta padhke if u didn't get wt I ment🙈 😜

I'll say it again, asan-asan words....I Loved it😍😍😘

Lemme know if u want another *ahem *ahem reply 🙈 n thanks for the tag,

waiting for more 💃🏻💃🏻

Byee

Wahi jo apan sab chah rhe the kr diya bas 🤣

You flatter me 😳

Nahh I guess I wanted her to have an alone time if you will.

Everyone is kind of mooching off of her kindness at the moment but seeing them pity her would have been much more painful... Either you help or you leave her be. The pity wrenches the heart.

Thank you SO SO SO SO MUCH for this comment.

This right here is the reason I love writing the reason I go to my word doc.

This is pure happiness to me.

Thanks a ton for this bub.

Long replies? ALWAYS WELCOME. ❤️❤️

My whole heart ❤️

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

can u please teach or show makers how to write and especially a good sensible conversation which will help a couple to understand each other and overcome the issues

I had been feeling choked the way you described about her pain and anguish....and think about Shiva....he is roaming around with that female on his moms orders.....pathetic females....she is in denial even when he clearly told her, he isn't interested.....

hum bichari janta, aise ache stories se dil behlate hai....

That is such an extravagant compliment I have been rendered speechless-

Thank you so much for the kind words.

Y'all made the weekend writing worth it with these words. ❤️

This is so beautiful Ritu ❤️

What we want from the show, we get through FFs and I'll be forever grateful, kash show mein bhi mil jaye aisa kuch. Them talking it out and finding peace in one another's arms at the end of a long and tiring night

My heart was fluttering while reading this!🥺

Originally posted by: blissfulcanyon

This is so beautiful Ritu ❤️

What we want from the show, we get through FFs and I'll be forever grateful, kash show mein bhi mil jaye aisa kuch. Them talking it out and finding peace in one another's arms at the end of a long and tiring night

My heart was fluttering while reading this!🥺

Aww thank you so much sweets.

Means the world to me! ❤️

Hi Ritu❤️

Wow this was so beautiful. So well written❤️

The pain, guilt and the outburst...it was so heart breaking and heart touching ❤️

I know this will never happen on the show. I am glad you wrote this. Thank you 🤗

So beautifully written 💕🥰

Originally posted by: ThePurpleMist

Beautiful

Thanks a lot ❤️

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Hi Ritu❤️

Wow this was so beautiful. So well written❤️

The pain, guilt and the outburst...it was so heart breaking and heart touching ❤️

I know this will never happen on the show. I am glad you wrote this. Thank you 🤗

Thank you so much for these kind words.

Means the world to me ❤️

Such a pyaara OS❤️

Her pain, silence, heartbreak and his curiousity to get answers from her❤️

Conversation ka toh pata nhi kab milega but would love an emo scene of him questioning and raavi trying to hide and breaking eye contact❤️..that would be intense🔥 like a parallel of scene where raavi tries to manao him to sleep in their room

Also, The intensity when he asked her..tujhe uss durdasha se kya problem hai and her denying..pr baad mein komedy kr di vaha bhi makers ne🤡