Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 5

Originally posted by: Foxii

What did I just read??🤣

Freaking Awesome... Shiva is too good!

Loved the whole lesson☺️

Can’t wait...

so happy we will get more of Shivi❤️

Aww thanks so much for the enthusiasm! I’m glad you guys are liking the way I write ShiVi! ❤️

Nice one.Thanks for taking into consideration about tu and tum.

Omg!! That was hilarious and double worded so well!!! I will never look at riding a bike normally again 😂😂...I can picture such a conversation happening with the on screen couple if they didn't have to censor content for the viewers!!!

Excited to see what you post next!

Originally posted by: Miss.M

Omg!! That was hilarious and double worded so well!!! I will never look at riding a bike normally again 😂😂...I can picture such a conversation happening with the on screen couple if they didn't have to censor content for the viewers!!!

Excited to see what you post next!

Forgot to tag you.. What's your name if you don't mind me asking... Can't remember if I read it anywhere? 🤔🤔

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

🤣🤣Wow 😳🤣😩👏what are surprise…..this is freaking hilarious!🤣🤣👏

Ha, yes I couldn't resist this idea once it had taken root in my head. My original drabble was so tame in comparison! 😆

Thank you!

Originally posted by: blissfulcanyon

This is so good like too good ☺️

Innuendos are some of my most favorite things to read! I guess I can blame the internet for ruining me forever 😆

This was a very pleasant, pleasant surprise. You write so well, especially when it comes to the double-meaning jokes. I would love to read more such stuff from you, or anything that you would write tbh!

I thoroughly enjoyed this ❤️

Aha! Yes Innuendos can be a very useful means of raising some laughs! And I always like doing that. 😆

Thank you for your kind words about my writing and am so stoked that you want to read more! 😳

Originally posted by: nikkiGarg

I read it… Its beautiful… the way you twisted the words of driving to give then sexual innuendo… it s marvelous… looking forward to read more of your work…

Thank you! I'm glad you liked this one and want to read more of my work! 😳

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

oh some devil he is.....i was ☺️ and 🤣 at the same time.......

u r master of this😆 aapke charan kahan hai devi......i am a fan.....

he is so incorrigible.....but fir he would say perfection ko improve nahi kar sakte🤣

size doesnt matter🤣 does it or does it not?🤣 sorry.......right now my mind is in gutter with both of dem............thinking, writing i dont know what......sorry.........

talent chahiye to incorporate the bike riding lessons to riding something else lessons.........👍🏼👏....waise he tested the waters before trying anything🤣.....dobi remains dobi for some time

only point was it ended soon........loved it would be an understatement

Ha ha thank you for your emoji bhara comment! 😆

Charan mere paas hee hain -- door se hee sparsh kar lena! 😆

Perfection ko improve nahi kar sakte- haaye.. ye Shiva ka line hai kya? I love it!

This is the result of my mind being in the gutter for a while and writing this has sent me deeper into the gutter! You can imagine what will happen with the next one! 🤣

Thank you so much for reading! 🤗

Originally posted by: Miss.M

Omg!! That was hilarious and double worded so well!!! I will never look at riding a bike normally again 😂😂...I can picture such a conversation happening with the on screen couple if they didn't have to censor content for the viewers!!!

Excited to see what you post next!

Aww thank you!

I seem to be ruining a lot of activities for people 🤣In the previous one it was the Bungee jump and in this one bike riding! 😆

Wow, you can imagine this convo on screen between ShiVi? That is some validation! Thank you so much!

And I'm called Riya on the forum, or Liz or Lizzie!

Thanks again for reading! ❤️

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

few lines in this story and had to comment.......wish they had commenting system like wattpad........whichever sentence u like u can comment......

boy is he teaching bike ride or some other ride🤣.......ready wet come crash and straddle 🤣 ye to apni gang ka hai......tharki number one🤣☺️

Accha i didn't know you can comment against every line in watt pad! 😲

But please feel free to quote which lines your enjoyed 😆!