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Posted: 4 years ago
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MHRW's tracks lack impact they could otherwise create , due to a lack of attention on the female lead's emotions. I won’t go in details about this injustice done in past tracks , will limit to current one for now .


instead of presenting flashbacks of Warangal nights, the makers could have focused on Pallavi and her thoughts about the whole scenario in the background.


Shweta / Esha will be mistaken for the female lead by any new viewer as since the beginning of this track, the focus on Shivangi/ Pallavi has waned.

They go into excessive detail regarding Esha and EsGhu without disclosing Esha's objectives; if they wanted to prolong the encounter, they might have just concentrated on Pallavi's feelings following yesterday's devastating scenario, but instead, they entirely forgot about it and gave such filler scenes today . They don't pay attention to Pallavi at all. Which is quite unfortunate.


And this is where MHRW failed , they didn’t treat their female lead as lead character much. Other shows flourish because they do cash on fl’s emotions and story . How I wish shivangi’s skills and Pallavi’s character was utilised well by team MHRW !

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I agree. There have been many instances in the past where they have missed to give Pallavi's POV and explore her inner state of turmoil. There were scope of many poignant scenes. Unfortunately in previous tracks too, her motives were led to people's assumptions and thats why she drew a lot of flak.


Her contemplation on deed night will come when she finds but definitely, they should have explored her contemplating on Raghav's changed behaviour and also her disappointment from the previous night. Instead she was made the conflict mediator to the staff. Its time, her emotions and feelings are explored too.


However, I don't agree that Esha may come across as the lead... but makers do this quiet often with the leads here. To make the third person look appealing or smart or whatever, they dumb down the leads.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Couch.Potato

MHRW's tracks lack impact they could otherwise create , due to a lack of attention on the female lead's emotions. I won’t go in details about this injustice done in past tracks , will limit to current one for now .


instead of presenting flashbacks of Warangal nights, the makers could have focused on Pallavi and her thoughts about the whole scenario in the background.


Shweta / Esha will be mistaken for the female lead by any new viewer as since the beginning of this track, the focus on Shivangi/ Pallavi has waned.

They go into excessive detail regarding Esha and EsGhu without disclosing Esha's objectives; if they wanted to prolong the encounter, they might have just concentrated on Pallavi's feelings following yesterday's devastating scenario, but instead, they entirely forgot about it and gave such filler scenes today . They don't pay attention to Pallavi at all. Which is quite unfortunate.


And this is where MHRW failed , they didn’t treat their female lead as lead character much. Other shows flourish because they do cash on fl’s emotions and story . How I wish shivangi’s skills and Pallavi’s character was utilised well by team MHRW !

. Yeah seems like the night was forgotten. Although she sat there and looked lost in thought but dialogues in her head for us to hear woukd have been nice. More in depth dialogues and her flashbacks about what happened. How many times he pushed her away and it started since warangal which she has mentioned that he has been different. Now i want her to start to put things together that something happened since then. Because before that he has always wanted to get close. Also instead of thinking of her looks she should think maybe she is pushing the baby deal and maybe he wants to wait or maybe he thinks he won’t be a good father etc. like a more indepth look into her emotions and she asking raghav to talk and take him to her room or something. Atleast keerti’s advice was good there. Then we got the filler cheater driver and ofcourse pallavi and her big dialogues and after hearing that she would leave, raghav will ofcourse never tell her. All this just to prolong it. And in the meantime butchering both characters.
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Posted: 4 years ago
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The story was always imbalanced, with Raghav being outrageous and Pallavi trying to restore normalcy. That shouldn't have devolved into a marriage of Raghav as the only lead character, chewing the scenery in fits of self-pity, and Pallavi as his punching bag. The story should have turned around so that Raghav's new goal was Pallavi's forgiveness to redeem himself in Jaya's eyes, and gradually Raghav should have discovered that Pallavi's personality makes his life meaningful, and he loves her. Pallavi should have been front-and-centre, as Raghav's true love and as the character that we want to find happiness.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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💯 Alia

Story is so imbalanced since start. What do we know about Pallavi even after 200+ episodes?? Who is she? What was her life before D's and why she chose to stay back with them??

Pallavi was DIL /daughter of Deshmukhs and now Wife of Raghav or DIL of Raos.


Cvs completely failed to show her side of story...her struggles. Mandy track failed due to this imbalance as well but looks like they still haven't learned anything from it.

I don't expect anything from cvs anymore. Pallavi is just a prop for them. They will focus on everything except her

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Wilddreams

💯 Alia

Story is so imbalanced since start. What do we know about Pallavi even after 200+ episodes?? Who is she? What was her life before D's and why she chose to stay back with them??

Pallavi was DIL /daughter of Deshmukhs and now Wife of Raghav or DIL of Raos.


Cvs completely failed to show her side of story...her struggles. Mandy track failed due to this imbalance as well but looks like they still haven't learned anything from it.

I don't expect anything from cvs anymore. Pallavi is just a prop for them. They will focus on everything except her


Also while they failed Pallavi they now also have failed Raghav by creating this ONS issue , which the Raghav that we know would never do. While they do focus on Raghav, they made him a cartoon in the Mandar track and now a cheating lying and again morally suffocated husband in this track. The tracks are not doing any good for both Pallavi and Raghav characters currenlty.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: euphoric


However, I don't agree that Esha may come across as the lead... but makers do this quiet often with the leads here. To make the third person look appealing or smart or whatever, they dumb down the leads.

I was talking about screenspace , we’re getting Esha’s flashbacks, sob stories and monologues. When was same courtesy provided to Pallavi ? 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: RainbowUnicorm


Also while they failed Pallavi they now also have failed Raghav by creating this ONS issue , which the Raghav that we know would never do. While they do focus on Raghav, they made him a cartoon in the Mandar track and now a cheating lying and again morally suffocated husband in this track. The tracks are not doing any good for both Pallavi and Raghav characters currenlty.

True , but atleast Raghav’s emotions are shown , Pallavi’s POVs and emotions are rarely given importance. She comes across as side character than lead.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Couch.Potato

I was talking about screenspace , we’re getting Esha’s flashbacks, sob stories and monologues. When was same courtesy provided to Pallavi ? 😆

Usse toh allergy hai. Forget just this track... they have never given any POV to Pallavi

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Wilddreams

💯 Alia

Story is so imbalanced since start. What do we know about Pallavi even after 200+ episodes?? Who is she? What was her life before D's and why she chose to stay back with them??

Pallavi was DIL /daughter of Deshmukhs and now Wife of Raghav or DIL of Raos.


Cvs completely failed to show her side of story...her struggles. Mandy track failed due to this imbalance as well but looks like they still haven't learned anything from it.

I don't expect anything from cvs anymore. Pallavi is just a prop for them. They will focus on everything except her

Really sad. They have gold mine but will keep focusing on Raghav & his guilt and insecurities in almost all tracks , which doesn’t even much value left to it now with the way he never learns and has gone to point of becoming a cheater .


Pallavi and her story will be breath of fresh air in leaps of gloomy tracks in MHRW . ( if handled well, which again I doubt will ever happen in this show 😆)

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