Maine pyar kiya-fanfic 4 Kshitij-kumud

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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART-1......Kumud Kapoor is a typical
middle class punjabi
girl....very simple....wears
ordinary short salwar...wears
glasses,long hair...she
plats it.she is attached 2 her
parents,dadi & her
dearest brother Abhay
she joins a new
college.she was teased by all
the guys.bcoz she was an
exception in that college of
fashionable girls.everyday
she was getting embarassed.one
day she was crying under
the college tree.suddenly a
girl comes & touches
her:kumud Kapoor ...she looks
at that
girl.tall,fair,short
hair,tight jeans,short top.she
smiles at her:hi,i'm a khusum. kumud smiles.
Khu:1st u wipe out ur
tears.then smile. she did so.
Khu:kumud kapoor ,du u hav
any pet name? she:the ppl
who r close 2 me call me
kumud. Khu:wow,i'll also call
u kumud.bcoz i'm ur friend.see
kumud,yellow flowers...r
falling on us...u no yellow is
the color of
frienship...khusum takes a
yellow flower:it proves that
we r gud friends.is'nt rite
kumud? kumud smiles:yes.
khusum was thrilled:that means
u 'll be my friend?
K:i'll not be just a
friend,i'll be ur very gud
friend. Khu:really? both of
them smile. khu:this
smile shud there on ur face
always.shud not cry when
stupid guys tease u. kumud
becomes shy.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOW, Brilliant... 👏 Dat's kool....Plz cont. as soon as possible...
I'm sure it's going to be marvelous like ur others.... 😊 Coz It's so diff....

So keep posting.

Edited by Day_Dreamer - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great job plz continue soon!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#4
Part-2....khusum:kumud,u hav 2 change.i was like u b4.now

see my change.u hav 2 be
smart. khusum teaches her how 2
walk in stylish way....she
changes kumud's
dressing.kumud starts wearing
western clothes.she makes
her hair short. slowly slowly
she adjusts & becomes a
smart girl.evey1 was surprised
at her change. there is a
raksha bandhan party in a
hotel. khusum invites kumud 2
come with her brother.
Khu:many brothers & sisters
will come.we'll tie rakhi
2gether.how nice it will be!
kumud goes there with her
dearest brother Abhay.
abhay was surprised at the
high class ppl's party.
khusum comes near kumud:hi
kumud.abhay falls 4 her at
the 1st sight itself.
Ku:bhayya,this is khusum. he
smiles at her. ku:this is
my brother abhay.
khu:hi. abhay was
flattered:hi. ku:ok,i
introduced my brother 2
u.where is ur brother? khusum
shows her only brother garv.
garv falls 4 kumud at the
1st sight. all the sisters tie
rakhi on their brothers'
hands. abhay tells
khusum:khusum....his voice was really
cool,soft & romantic.he:i came
2 thank u. khu:2 thank
me?4 what? A:my sister
was very shy,reserved...but
u changed her.now kumud is
very happy.u made her really
beautiful. khusum laughs:i
did'nt make her pretty.she was
already very pretty. khusum
smiles.abhay was serious&
looks at her eyes deeply.khusum
becomes shy 2 look at
him. A:ur smile is so
beautiful....luvly... khusum
smiles :thank u. abhay
thinks:coming 2 this party
was not a waste.infact it was
very useful. garv
always about kumud.khusum finds
out his secret luv 4
kumud.she teases him. she
reveals it 2 theirparents.they
come 2 kumud's house. kumud
comes out.garv's parents
liked her very much.they
did'nt care that kumud is a
middle class girl. garv's
dad:we came here with a
proposal.we wud like 2 get
kumud as our bahu. they were
surprised. khu:my bayya luvs
kumud very much. abhay
says in his mind:kumud's
brother luvs u khusum. the
wedding gets fixed.but
Mr.kapoor told them 2 wait till
her studies get over. they
agree. when they were
going,without their
knowledge,abhay winks at khusum.
khusum did'nt expect it.she
feels funny. do not 4get
2 write ur comments....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Arre yeh kya jasmine yeh fan-fic toh ku-ks ke liye hai.. aur tumne toh 2nd episode mein uski shaadi fix kardi...
😲
I realy lov de ending bit where abhay winks at kkusum 😆 😆 😆
Anyways it's a fantastic start...Now keep writing...

Aur dekha na tumhari Fan-fic pe sabse pehle comments send karne aur perhne wali main hi hon...
MAIN HOON NA...Iss liye Likhte raho likhte raho.. 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#6

Part-3....bOth abhay-khusum
at the icecream parlour.
he was looking at her.
K:abhay,why r u looking at
me like this? he smiles.gets
embarassed.understanding
his embarrasement she laughs.
he:u look very beautiful
when u smile. K:u always talk
about my smile.i'm
getting bored of that. abhay
gets embarassed.
K:tell me why did u call me
here? A:that u
did'nt understand? she:if u
don't tell me how can i
understand?tell me why did u
call me? he: khusum,when
does a person becomes
silent&wordless? khusum laughs:how
rubbish ! he:this not
rubbish.its connected 2 luv.a
person struggles 4 words when
he has 2 open his heart b4
his beloved.yes khusum i luv
u.u also luv me no? khusum
smiles:no...he:no,u luv me.
she smiles:no...he:if u luv
me,u shud come 4 2day
evening's party. she smiles. in
the party,abhay was searching 4
khusum.
kumud:bhayya,whom r u
searching 4? he did'ntt get words.
later ppl started
dancing.suddenly khusum comes....in
short top & parallels...with
lots of bead work. abhay
dances singing....ajave
mahi....{FIda}.khusum also join
with him.every1 was shocked 2
see their intimacy.
kumud's dad's voice was
raised:whats this? A:i'm
sorry papaji,we luv each
other. suddenly every1 laughs 2
their surprise. bcoz of the
horoscope,abhay-khusum
wedding was conducted early.
khusum becomes an ideal
bahu. kumud's college life
gets over.they get ready 4
the wedding.but unfortunately
b4 the wedding garv meets
with an accident.his car falls
into big river.his car
was fully damaged.they did'nt
even his body. every1 was
sad.kumud was heart broken.she
takes months 2 recover.
months passed.when khusum
forces kumud starts going 4
modelling.4 that she shifts to
another city. she goes 4
a shoot. they call 4 the
photographer.he comes.he was
well dressed.he was very
handsome.he smiles nicely. he
was touched by kumud's
presense.he falls 4 her at 1st
sight.he is none other than
KSHITIJ. he runs 2 dadi.he is
her pet. he was
thrilled:dadi,i met the girl of my
dreams. dadi:what? he:i told u
no,i see a girl in every
dream.2day i saw her. dadi:who
is she? he:she is
kumd,the upcoming model.
kshitij's mind tells:1 day
kumud will come b4 u. she'll
admit that she luves u.
kshitij goes 2 a dream world. he
dreams having pretty
moments with
kumud.song....nazar..nazar...{FIda}
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Posted: 19 years ago
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keep it up and plz continue fast...
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Posted: 19 years ago
#8
part-4....kumud's work was greatly appreciated. she:1st
of all i wud like 2 thank my
photographer Mr.Kshitij. she
smiles at him:thanku kshitij. he
smiled as if her
complement is the gr8st
achievement of life.kumud joins
that company as the chief
model. Lter kumud was
surprised 2 no that kshitij is
not only an ordinary
photographer ,but also the
owner of this company.he has
no parents ,only his
dadi.actually due 2 the craze of
photograghy,he works there as
the photogragher.kumud
thinks how garv was
interested 2 take her photoes. 1
lady of the company tells
her:kshitij sir does
photograghy only if he likes
the model.u r his fav
model. kumud simply smiles.
kumud's co-star was not
performing well.so the
director ot angry & puts him
out.he becomes upset:in this
last moment whom will i
try? suddenly kumud looks at
ronit:Mr.kshitij,why
don't u try?kshitij was
shocked:me?no way...it will harm
ur name too kumud.i don't want
that 2 happen.
Ku:it'll never happen.i think u
r the right
choice.just try. ever1 forces
him & finally he stands as
the model. that work becomes a
gr8 success. he thanks
Ku:its bcoz of u,we cud
achieve this success. kumud
smiles :no Mr.kshitij...he:plz
kumud...don't call me
Mr...just call me kshitij.
she:ok kshitij...he:how sweet!
she:what?i did'nt hear u.
he:nothing.kumud,can we become
ud friends? kumud thinks
about her 1st meeting with
khusum:whats the need of
asking that?we r already
friends. kshitij becomes
happy. Ku:i no a sister &
brother who giv a lot of value
2 frienship.i learnt the
value of frienship from them.
kshitij was so happy
about kumud's frienship that
he runs around like a mad
person dreaming...song..koi
milgaya..{koi mil gaya}.
kshi-kumud go 2 a
r estaurant.kshitij becomes
emotional.he looks at kumud's
eyes deeply.kumud
r emembers that lady telling
he r that kshitij's fav model
is herself. Ks:kumud,i luv
u.will u marry me? kumud
was shocked. Ks:kumud,will u?
kumud gets upset:u'rs
is not luv kshitij.its just an
attraction 4 a model.u r
luving my beauty,not me. kshitij
cud'nt bare it:no
kumud .kumud plz don't take it
funny.i'm
serious.kumud,i'll tell u a
truth.i used 2 see u in my
dreams b4 i saw u.that day
onwards i started luving u.
kumud does'nt believe it.kumud
gets fed up & she goes
away.he follows
he r:kumud,don't go.plz listen 2 me.i'm
madly in luv with u.believe me
kumud . tears started
coming from his eyes. Ku:ok,i
believe u kshitij.but
what du u no about me. she
tells him about ashmit. she
thot ashmit will change his
mind hearing that.but he
continued walking behind
he r.he even goes 2 kumud's
house with his dadi with the
proposal when she was not
the re. after they return,kshitij
comes 2 the house.her
papaji tells:2day a guy called kshitij came here.he was
not alone.his dadi came along
with him. kumud was
shocked. Abhay:what
r elationship u r having with
kshitij? kumud becomes upset.





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Posted: 19 years ago
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Brillaiint....
sorry i could't post earlier coz I was making my homepage..
Butr, plz cont.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME....great job...cheers 2 u!

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