Shivi FF- meri duniya tu hi re part 13 updated on page 43

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Barkhaa Bannerjee

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Posted: 3 years ago

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Pixu I loved how you resolved this without unnecessary convoluted drama .. just Shiva giving in to Raavi's earnest pleas and everything else falling in place .. beautiful.. absolutely loved this🤗 I cant wait for their cute banters and back and forths now that the actual problem is resolved .. with a *Geeli pappi* no less ☺️

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Barkhaa Bannerjee

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Posted: 3 years ago

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Bringing this back to page 1 cuz everyone deserves to know about this super cute fic and mujhe khud ko re-read karna tha from chapter 1 ☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago

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PART-11

Shiva still couldn't believe what has happened.she loved him! He touched his lips.he could still feel her soft lips on his.this was his first kiss with the girl he loved to bits.he had lost count of the numbers of times he had dreamt about this moment.what more can a man ask for?

He we as behaving like a lovestruck teenager.he was smiling like an idiot during dinner and the whole family was eyeing him suspiciously.he couldn't sleep so he was sitting on the jhula.

Tum itna Jo muskuraa rahee ho

Kyaa gam hai itnaa jo chupaa rahe ho

Krish sang in his besura voice.shiva glared at him irritated that he Interrupted his beautiful thoughts.

" Kyaa baat hai shivaa? Aaj teri Hasee rukne ka naam hi nahi le rahi " Krish said getting up from his cot.he was not getting any sleep either.so he decided to use his time to tease shiva.he knew something was up.

" Kya matlab? Ab mere khush rehne se bhi tujhe dikkat hai? " Shiva said

" Are bilkul nahi. Mai to chahta hu ki tu khush rahe.bas yeh bataa, kahin yeh khushi ki wajah raavi bhabii to nahi " he stressed on the word bhabi.

" Us chipkali se meri khushi ka kya connection? Woh to bas sar dard de sakti hai" shiva said not meeting his eyes.

" Chupaa le beta chupaa le.kabhi na kabhi to sabko pata chal hi jayega " Krish said

He would do the rest of the teasing tomorrow.but he was very happy for his brother.he always knew raavi and shiva were made for each other.he is the youngest one but definitely the smartest! Krish felt proud of himself and went to sleep.

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" Anitaaa dii " raavi twirled anita with happiness

" Are are, bata to kya hua hai? " She asked

" Shiva bhi mujhse pyar karta hai anita di.aaj mai bahut bahut khush hu " she danced happily

" Mai tere liye bahut khush hu raavi " anita hugged her

" Bas ek problem hai.maasii.dev ka naam sunkar to itna chidti thi. Shiva ka naam sunegi to gayaa " raavi said worried

" Tu uski tension mat le.jab waqt ayega to fui ko mana lenge.abhi tu bas apne rishte par dhyaan de." anita assured her.

Raavi and anita talked for hours before they slept.she told her all about what happened.they talked about their childhood.they even saw some photo albums.finally the sisters fell asleep.

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Raavi was irritated at shiva.the first day of their relationship and he was not giving her any bhao.not even a cute good morning text or a call.

She has to take matter in her own hands.this chattan pandya is really kacchaa in matters of the heart. She saw her wardrobe, she smiled and picked out a full sleeved white salwar with a green dupatta.she put the dupatta in such a way that it covered almost her whole body.

She made her way to pandya Store.

Shiva saw her coming and smiled at her while she was in a visibly grumpy mood.he noticed she was a bit too covered for his liking.this is not how she usually dressed.he came forward.

" Thode zyada kapde nahi pehen liye tune? " He asked looking at her.

" Woh kya hai na, mai bilkul risk nahi lena chahti.kuch logo ko mere kapdo se bahut problem hai.so no skin show " she smiled sarcastically

" Accha? Ek kaam kar.gloves aur socks bhi pehen le." He teased her

Raavis mouth formed an o listening to him.

" Han Han. Kal se na woh bhi pehen lungi.tu kaisa hai shiva? Aaj bhi mujhse iss tarah baat kar raha hai.koi apni nayi naveli girlfriend se aise baat karta hai kya? " she said with her hands crossed

Here she had expected some romance and an apology but he was busy Taunting her.

Shiva pulled her closer and held her waist.he gave a small kiss on her forehead.

" Tu meri biwi ban jaye, meri baccho ki maa bhi ban jaye.phir bhi mai tujhse aise hi baat karunga.samjhi? " He said

Raavi felt butterflies in her stomach and her cheeks heating up.shivas wife? Mother of his kids? It all felt so intimate.

He kissed her on the cheek and they just darkened more.

" Waise ek baat bata, yeh tere gaal itne laal kyu ho rahe hai? Koi allergy ho gayi hai kya? " He teased her enjoying the effect he had on her.

" Shivaa..." Raavi whined and slapped him on his arms.

Shiva just smirked.he held her hands.

" Accha sun.aaj raat store band hone ke baad aa jaana.aur apna wohi red dress pehenke aana" shiva said seriously

Raavi shook her head and looked down.

" Mujhe woh dress dobara nahi pehena."

Shiva sighed.raavi was superstitious that way.she never repeated outfits in which something bad had happened to her.but he needed to make things right.

" Please raavi.mere liye.mujhpe bharosa rakh.iss baar kuch galat nahi hoga " he said to her sincerely.

Raavi smiled.how can she say no to that face.

She agreed to come.

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Raavi wore the red dress she had worn that day and put minimal make up.she was ready to go.her heart was hammering in her chest.she was nervous, but also excited.

She went outside and found shiva waiting with the bike.he was wearing a black shirt.

" Shiva, tu? Mai aa jaati khud " she said

" Apni nayi naveli girlfriend ko akele itni raat ko kaise ane du?khass kar ki tab jab woh itni hot lag rahi ho " shiva whispered near her ears which made her heart skip a beat.

They went to the Store and shiva held raavis hand as she took her inside the storeroom.she saw it was beautifully decorated with candles and balloons just like the other day.

Shiva brought her to the centre of the room and got down on his knees holding raavi's hands.

" I am sorry raavi.bahut galat kiya maine tere saath.tune kitne sacche mann se mere liye surprise plan kiya tha, apne pyar ka izhaar kiya.aur maine..." He bowed his head down guiltily.

"Mai tere baare mai kuch galat nahi sochta raavi.bahut izzat karta hu mai teri.pata nahi kaise woh sab mere muh se nikal gaya.Please mujhe maaf karde " he said sincerely holding his ears.

Raavi immediately sat down and removed his hands shaking her head in a no.

" Sach kahu to main tujhse naraaz nahi hu shiva.mujhe us din bahut bura laga tha.par teri jagah koi bhi hota to woh yehi sochta ki mai natak kar rahi hu.teri koi galti nahi hai shiva " she said holding his cheeks.she had wanted him to apologise, but seeing him like this kneeling on the ground, holding his ears with a defeated look broke something within her.she loved this man, and she can never see him defeated.his pride means the World to her.

" Tu kaisi hai raavi? Itni asaani se kaise logo ko maaf kar deti hai? Itni maoomiyat thik nahi, yeh duniya bahut buri hai chipkali.log isse teri kamzori samjhenge " shiva said overwhelmed by her innocence.

Raavi hugged him, almost settling down on his lap.they both sat on the ground.

" Tu hai na shiva.mujhe iss duniya se bachane ke liye.jab tu mere saath hai to mujhe kya darr? " She said.

Shiva smiled and broke the hug, caressing her cheeks.

"Woh to hai.par ek baat bata, tu kabse mere saamne rotlu ban gayi.mai itna bakwaas kar raha tha, ek kass ke thappad lagana chahiye tha " shiva said angry on himself.

Raavi chuckled.

" Thik keh raha hai shiva.abhi bhi der nahi huyi hai " she said

" Tu..tu mujhe sach mai thappad maregi? " Shiva asked.

" Tune hi to kaha.tere dil ki tasalli ke liye kar leti hu " raavi said smiling toothily.

" Thik hai.maar le " shiva said closing his eyes.

Raavi smiled seeing his bhootnath looking like an innocent kid.

She brought her hand to his cheek and kissed him on his lips.shiva was surprised at first but then he reciprocated.he held her waist and pulled her closer and deepened the kiss.they broke apart when they heard the sound of glass breaking.

They saw dev and Krish standing there shocked at the sight in front of them.

Tagging aashuu and nivii

Edited by Pixiepadhi - 3 years ago

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Pixierocks

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Posted: 3 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: barkhaa_tpm
Pixu I loved how you resolved this without unnecessary convoluted drama .. just Shiva giving in to Raavi's earnest pleas and everything else falling in place .. beautiful.. absolutely loved this🤗 I cant wait for their cute banters and back and forths now that the actual problem is resolved .. with a *Geeli pappi* no less ☺️

Thank you so much barkhaa.means a lot ❤️

I added the geeli pappi specially for you 😉😉