PriRa OS ~ Family - Page 3

Wow....that's the only word I can think of.❤️👍🏼

Its so amazing and beautiful.

You have written it very nicely ❤️❤️

This was amazing. thank you so much for sending me the link through dm. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Please do keep me posted through dm or just by tagging all the stories that you write. It's always a joyous experience reading such beautiful works. 😊

Absolutely beautifully written! even though I later realised that it was quite a lengthy piece of writing, while reading it I didnt want it to end! looking forward to reading more from you :)

Absolutely stellar as always Sarce! You know I don't watch this show and yet when I read both this and the previous OS, what I fell in love with about this couple was this dynamic between them that shows that they have each others' back. In this story, it is done so beautifully, I found myself going giddy and then sad and then back to that wonderful giddiness that a really good romance story gives you. Please continue...maybe turn this into a series of moments from their life together. It is rare to have really good emotional romance stories that do not fall into the trope of the couple being abusive towards each other. Don't get me wrong...I totally love angsty stories but they are relatively easy to write. This kind on the other hand where the chemistry between them is so subtle, so positive, is quite difficult to create. Please continue and give us more of this!!! ❤️

Bloody hell! This was too good man! Loved it! Tag me if you write again. I'de love to read... ❤️

Fabulous os sarcy👏❤️. I loved reading it🤗

Originally posted by: mysterious-soul

Beautiful❤

Thank you 💛

Originally posted by: jd_jo

Don't know kaha se start karu 🤔 this os was like a river jisme behte he jao.. you have truly made me your writing's fan 😭

I really didn't expect Priya to accept so easily going along with him even ram was so shocked that he couldn't believe his ears 🤭 priya's way of giving compliment is as unique as she is..♥️

So it was Ram's birthday but his step family grrrrrr huhhh 😡 but I loved how Priya made it very special for him 😍 he was touched... I don't think so any of his family member ever done something for him 😏 but what Priya did for him was a surprise for me as well n honestly I cried reading it when I was near ending.

This candle light dinner with balcony view in the middle of mountains ahhhh I can feel it.. Priya can be very romantic person in the future it seems😉😝

Is bar hath pakda hai agli bar ek hug toh chahiye please or isse bhi lamba os chahiye 😭 I know jada badi demand nahi hai 😏😂

It was a masterpiece os🔥

Aww, thank you! That's very sweet of you. I'm humbled. 🤗

Yes, Priya agreed easily because she'd seen how his family's absence mattered to him. Though his offer to travel along came as a surprise to her, she also didn't want to hurt him the way everyone did. So, she said yes! Priya hain hi sabse alag.😆

There's a romantic in Priya, just like every one of us. Just that hers has been bruised and battered so much, it will take a time for it to heal and rise again. But hopefully, we will see it.

Hug bhi hoga, eventually, but progression ke baad. I don't know what will be the next piece I'll write on these two or when, but in the mean time, you can check the one I wrote before this one. I'll look forward to your lamba comment. 😉

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/bade-achhe-lagte-hain-2/5250335/prira-os-towards-her

Originally posted by: BlurredLines10

This is crazy good. I loved it so much. This is exactly what Priya would do for Ram. Wonderful!

Thank you, glad to hear you enjoyed it!

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

Beautiful thanks for the rec Rishu

It showed some real slice of life organic.kind of bonding

Shows how a peeps slowly open up become friends and then soul mates

Thanks, Anju! If there's something that I'm really looking forward to from these two, it's this organic transformation of their relationship.