Shivi OS Becoming us again (16+epilogue pg6) - Page 7

Originally posted by: Khoobsurat123

Thank you so much for writing epilogue😳😳

I am blushing right now

I have read each and every step this is too hot and steamy 😘😘😘

Mujh seedhe saade bache ka kya haal banaa diya hai Shivi ne💞💞

But I am not complaining

How can you write it? IT'S something so perfect I have no words to explain it and this one is really really big chapter

But shivi ke liye kuch bhi🤗

Do write more and more OS I will always look forward for your work👍🏼

Btw I don't know your name tell me that pretty please😜😜😜

Anupama🤗! My name is Sathya, dear... And thank you for the beautiful compliment❤️. This is actually my longest work to date, and also my first mature work. I haven't even written a proper kiss before this one.... 😆

I will be writing more, but I don't really write too often because of time constraints. College. I will wait for your reviews whenever I do write though...

☺️☺️☺️This was too good. Loved the details ❤️. You're a very good writer!

Sathya🤗 how did I miss this OS! It was from a month ago. Do you have the powers to see the future in this show😆 Suman is arranging for Shiva’s second marriage. Can we have their reunion just like what you wrote?😆

BTW, loved it and what a neat way to make them both realize what they have done and their mistakes❤️

Originally posted by: mpks1

Sathya🤗 how did I miss this OS! It was from a month ago. Do you have the powers to see the future in this show😆 Suman is arranging for Shiva’s second marriage. Can we have their reunion just like what you wrote?😆

BTW, loved it and what a neat way to make them both realize what they have done and their mistakes❤️

Thank you Prema akka... Nope, I don't have premonitions, at all. I personally felt that even if both of them recognised their mistakes they would need a bit of a shocker to actually act on it. For Shiva, it was knowing Raavi was in acute pain, and for Raavi, it was the possibility of very really losing him.

PS If you're skipping the epilogue because I marked it 16+, there's actually quite a bit of fluff before it that I would love to see if you liked or not.

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Thank you Prema akka... Nope, I don't have premonitions, at all. I personally felt that even if both of them recognised their mistakes they would need a bit of a shocker to actually act on it. For Shiva, it was knowing Raavi was in acute pain, and for Raavi, it was the possibility of very really losing him.

PS If you're skipping the epilogue because I marked it 16+, there's actually quite a bit of fluff before it that I would love to see if you liked or not.

I like the way you think❤️

I missed out on the epilogue, will read it and get back to you!

Incroyable! 😍

I so wish I had better words to appreciate this! 💖

Originally posted by: barbieflora

Incroyable! 😍

I so wish I had better words to appreciate this! 💖

I find your few words to be more than enough Nikki.. ❤️

Hi Sathya....the epilogue was so heart touching!!!

I cannot get the right words to express how happy I am reading this. I really loved how Shivi renewed their wedding promises during Anita's wedding❤️

Coming to the mature part, I guess this is your first attempt in writing mature stuff and you have done an amazing job. It was so intimate and I blushed so much reading this. Beautiful writing!!!!!

Thank you for writing this story...I loved reading this🤗

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Hi Sathya....the epilogue was so heart touching!!!

I cannot get the right words to express how happy I am reading this. I really loved how Shivi renewed their wedding promises during Anita's wedding❤️

Coming to the mature part, I guess this is your first attempt in writing mature stuff and you have done an amazing job. It was so intimate and I blushed so much reading this. Beautiful writing!!!!!

Thank you for writing this story...I loved reading this🤗

Pri Maasi🤗!!! Thank you for the wonderful compliment❤️!! I assure you that I blushed while writing it as well, but I had a devilish satisfaction in writing their first time too... As for the fluff, we see vow renewal on so many ITV shows, but Shivi are different from all of them. And I just wanted something that respected that uniqueness...

oh boy beyond hot..........and wish it never ended☺️