Shivi OS Becoming us again (16+epilogue pg6) - Page 6

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was just so pure and sensuous Sathya ❤️😘

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Posted: 3 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Inaayaa_sidiqui

Sathya,


THE FLUFF 🥺🥰🙏🏻

And then comes the Mature part. My dimaag is gone as of now, will take thoda sa time to come back! But you've written pure magic, from the Wedding rituals to the way these two are, you've captured every essence so beautifully 🥺

Also pls more writing🥺👉👈


Thank you Inaaya girl❤️!!! The wedding rituals are something so special I just couldn't stand them missing out on it all! I'm so glad everyone loved the mature part though, I kept wondering if it was too much detail.... 😆

I will write as much as possible!!! I have so many plot bunnies in my head, I swear😭!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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The fact that I came back to this OS and saw an epilogue and went WHAT OMG YAY


Anyway, take my dil because *chef's kiss*💋


Everything was written so beautifully, how they did the wedding rituals to their name only again, the fluff, their moments together, everything❤️

Edited by sillysatchel - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priyal_10

Amaaazingg!!!!❤️

I always wanted Shivi to relive their marriage moments and promises during Anita's wedding❤️

hopefully we'll get that someday onscreen

You penned the sindoor moment n their feelings so beautifully❤️

Tattoo, sensitive Raavi n Junglee Shiva☺️☺️

And this🔥-- "Par Shiva, teri dhaadi sach main chubti hain!!🔥...I want her to say that🤣

Loved it!❤️❤️

Hello Priyal❤️!! I really wish they get to relive their wedding moments again too! They were so cute when the marriage wasn't even theirs, this time around with them in love? We're all certifiably reaching Shivi heaven...

Ah, the sindoor moment was something I really wanted resolved on the show as well... And the dhaadi thing is such a real time issue for most people, I suppose. It would be for me... 😆

Thank you!!! Glad you loved it! 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

This was just so pure and sensuous Sathya ❤️😘

Thank you Vaish❤️!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sillysatchel

The fact that I came back to this OS and saw an epilogue and went WHAT OMG YAY


Anyway, take my dil because *chef's kiss*💋


Everything was written so beautifully, how they did the wedding rituals to their name only again, the fluff, their moments together, everything❤️

Thank you so much dear... Kisses to you as well😳..

Glad you loved this. Also, what may I call you?


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: blissfulcanyon

I just wanted to be 'first' for once hehe 🤗

16+...😳


brb, gonna go read


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Finally done reading!! Pheww, somebody has turned up the heat in here 😭🔥🥺


I love love loved it so much, right from the beginning till the end!❤️

You weaved in them completing their pre-wedding rituals again so wonderfully! I adored that sm!

All their soft moments were so warm and cuddly, I'm actually squealing.

Raavi getting a tattoo for Shiva...UFFF. My fav bit right there. So beautiful!

And what followed after....hehehe need I say more?☺️ I will be back for a reread for sure!

Thank you for this lovely piece Sathiii (imma call you that from now on 🥰)

Shyna🤗!! Glad this made your reread list, and of course you can call me Sathii❤️... Shivi have so much potential with their ability to switch from nok jhok to absolute softies to their mature, understanding moments🤪. They've both been through so much I just want a super happy ending for them, and hopefully something not cliche...

Ah, the tattoo required a lot of internet surfing, then I didn't like anything and ended up imagining one up myself😆. Glad it's been a hit!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hot and Hilarious dobi Raavi and junglee Shiva 😂🔥🧡

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you so much for writing epilogue😳😳

I am blushing right now

I have read each and every step this is too hot and steamy 😘😘😘

Mujh seedhe saade bache ka kya haal banaa diya hai Shivi ne💞💞

But I am not complaining

How can you write it? IT'S something so perfect I have no words to explain it and this one is really really big chapter

But shivi ke liye kuch bhi🤗


Do write more and more OS I will always look forward for your work👍🏼

Btw I don't know your name tell me that pretty please😜😜😜

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: virmantaarey

Hot and Hilarious dobi Raavi and junglee Shiva 😂🔥🧡

Always girl, that's what they're always about... 😆

Edited by Pottermeow - 3 years ago

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