Shivi TS: Good newzz Part 2 updated on Page 3 - Page 2

What a beautiful story 💜 💜

So wel written, loved it 💜

I've been thinking about how Shivi would be the most amazing parents ever since that college scene with Krish... They have the good parent, bad parent routine down to the tee already😆... I feel like once they work everything out, they'd be the most balanced couple in the house...

Overall, loved this story Anupama... May I call you that? You've written this beautifully, and it was a super cutesy fic❤️!!!! Shiva not being able to sleep without Raavi was, sigh... And his surprise was beautiful as well...

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

I've been thinking about how Shivi would be the most amazing parents ever since that college scene with Krish... They have the good parent, bad parent routine down to the tee already😆... I feel like once they work everything out, they'd be the most balanced couple in the house...

Overall, loved this story Anupama... May I call you that? You've written this beautifully, and it was a super cutesy fic❤️!!!! Shiva not being able to sleep without Raavi was, sigh... And his surprise was beautiful as well...

Yeah definitely you can call me😊😊 with my real name

I too feel that lets see how it will work in television hope CV's let that happen ❤️❤️

I thought to give this story as a two shot... The story is almost same just here Shiva is doing his B.tech along with store duties... It's after 4 months from where the first part ends...

Raavi always tries to understand her husband... After lots of trouble they finally found each other so letting him go means to let go the dream of togetherness she ever had... Shiva with the help of her completed his 12th and even topped in it... She always feels proud of her husband who put forth that much courage and fights with all the troubles and acquires the educational qualification he deserves... He goes to college in day time and then worked late in store and still manage everything perfectly... Although he get tired but never had he let her complain, he always make sure that he will fulfill all her wishes...

After completing his 12th.... He thought to fulfill his dream to be an engineer and that's why joined the institute... Raavi supported him in every step even she went for his admission, she always send him to college in her scooty and also come to take him back...

4 months back, she told him about her pregnancy news.... That was the turning event in their life... Although both of them are extremely happy to welcome two new members in their life... Yes, Raavi is carrying their twins.... But with Pregnancy comes responsibility and lots of courage that they have to learn in every step.... Everything is going smooth at first but soon Raavi becomes more conscious about her looks as she gain almost 15 kg and now she is no longer Somnaath ki Sundar ladki.... Shiva always tries to cheer her up, but all those changes are not so easy for her to handle...

Now, As she is in her seventh month expecting twins he can't take risk... Shiva wanted her to have complete rest "Raavi maine tujhe manaa kiya tha kya... Tu mujhe ek saal se college chodne jaati thi... Laati thi but now situation is different tere saath humaare pyaar ki nishaani hai I can't kept you all in danger" Shiva said placing a kiss on her forehead and packing his stuff to go college...

Raavi held his hand and start placing all his essential carefully "Tu to aise jataa rahaa jaise ab tujhe meri zaroorat hi nahi... (Raavi sobs) Shiva main bhi tere liye kuch karna chahti hu... Tu bhi to laaya tha na mere Mummy Papa ke yaadein... To mujhe kyun rok raha hai... Pregnant hu to kya ab tere liye kuch karne ka right nahi mera"... Shiva smiled looking at his innocent wife... How can he tell her that she is the most beautiful present from god exclusively for him... She fully understands him, supported him in every step... Today he is able to complete his dreams it's all because of her pressure... She didn't give up until unless he said that he will study... He remembered clearly all her efforts...

"Shiva main chahti hu ki tu inn paiso se apni padhaayi poori kar" She said while caressing the money she won as a cash prize in dance competition... Shiva was feeling dejected that time, his insecurity resurfaced he thought she was trying to change him... Off course she must hated to show him to her friends so she wanted him to be a gentleman and well presented in front of those morons...

"Raavi mujhe na ek baar hi ache se baat smajhaani aati hai... Maine kahaa na tu mujhe badalne ki koshish mat kar... Kya kehna chahti hai main tere saath khade hone laayak nahi hoon... Haan... Matlab kya hai tera" Shiva enraged in loud voice... Raavi for a moment get scared her hands start shivering she didn't mean to hurt him... Are her words still act as venom to him? Why she can't understand him, Why she always call for troubles?

"Nahi Shiva balki kabhi kabhi mujhe tere saath hone par khud chota feel hota hai... Maine to apni poori life apne baare mein socha sapne jode... Par Mere Shiva ne dusro ke liye, apne bhayiyon ke liye apne sapne ko hi chod diya... Kaun karta hai aisa bataa... Mujhe tujh par bahut proud hai Shiva... Bahut... But main vahi proud tere aankhon mein dekhna chahti hu apne liye... Jaise haveli mein tune kahaan tha confidence se Boriyan uthaaunga har koi galle pe baithne ke liye nahi hota vaise hi proudly keh sake ki tu vo hai jisne apne sapne samay se churaa liye... Please Shiva... Tujhe pata hai main Dobi hoon teri madad nahi kar paaungi padhai mein par kuch to karne de" Raavi said with so many hopes in her eyes... Even though he was angry at her few moments before but those eyes shows her pure heart and pure love for him and he cannot deny the fact that he wanted to study and fulfill his dreams too... But using her money?? Is she not having dreams to buy something expensive or she wants to give all for him... He denied her that time...

Raavi daily kept raising this topic... She secretly buy his textbooks also she took notes from students... She was overly excited for his studies... At night, whenever he enters she kept herself ready to study, their room are converted to mini library... Raavi buy all the books she heard relevant for his study without thinking much... Shiva ignored her enthusiasm for one whole month... But one night he opened his eyes and heard her praying to bholenaath in low voice...

" Hey Bholenaath koi chamatkaar dikha do... Mere Shiva ko ek baar ready kar do... Mujhe pataa hai ek baar usne padhaai mein laga liya na to sab ko peeche chod dega... Please bholenaath bas ek baar agar Shiva maan gaya na to jab tak vo padhega main bhramchaari rahungi... Uske Qareeb bhi nahi jaaungi... No touching..." Shiva chuckled and get up startling Raavi... She looked towards him and make faces... "Tu itna control kar legi... No touching" Shiva starts laughing at her antics why she has to make everything so much cute... "Tujhe idea bhi nahi hai main teri khushi ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hu... Agar mere marne pe tu padhne ko haan keh de to main abhi" Raavi isn't able to complete her sentence... Shiva sealed his lips with hers, his lips mashed against hers, as if trying to flatten and destroy her mouth. Raavi tries to back out but his hold is too firmed how dare she even had a thought of leaving him? He can handle any of her nonsense but being without her is what he never imagined... He bit her lips and sucking it aggressively... Raavi never found him in much anger... She thought to play along... She hungrily pushed him back, her mouth open, tongue pushing past his clenched teeth to the moist space within. The bristles of his beard scratched against her soft cheeks as she gripped his head firmly, as if to keep him from escaping. She worked her mouth against his, their tongues battling back and forth like wrestlers, each trying to pin the other... Finally she backed out and as he felt his winning he removed himself from her and looked around different direction...

"Tu jo kahegi sab manzoor hai... Pan agar aaj ke baad tune kabhi bhi mujhe khud se durr kiya na to main... Junglee bhaalu hu yeh bhuliyo mat" He sucked the blood coming out of his lips... No matter how much he said himself junglee this woman always win she bite him too hard just to get out of his grip... "Aur yeh jo tera No touch formula hai isse to tu bhool ja main nahi manta yeh sab... Kuch saal zyada mehnat karni padegi karunga, pan apna aur tera sapna zaroor poora karunga... Pan tab tu jalkukdi mat ban jaayiyo vo kya hai college mein to bahut Hot girs milengi mujhe?" Shiva smirked while Raavi hit at his chest and chuckled...

After all the drama Shiva said yes... And then he prepared well passed 12th with 94% marks without any tuition... Only both of them knows about it... But later when family got to know they praised Shiva and finally last year he enrolled in college... And that wife, who spent all the nights preparing for his studies is telling him she isn't able to do anything for him... He kissed at her forehead while Raavi frown she doesn't know why she isn't being happy after being pregnant... She can't eat her favorite food , And even though she ate morning sickness waste them all... She can't dance or teach her students any new thing because it needs some pressure and she can't exert herself... Apart from dancing she doesn't know what to do that's all her passion is but this GOOD NEWS has turned her life upside down... Even, the soothing music brings tears to her eyes... She remain in home whole day doing nothing just looking at the wall or playing with Tara and Amisha... Rishita went for her job and Dhara di spent her time in opening new branch of Pandya store...

"Yeh kaisi Good news hai Shiva mujhe lagta hai main bandh gayi hoon... Kuch kar nahi sakti... Sirf dance hi karti thi main... Ab bataa kab karungi tab tak main sab bhool jaaungi... " Raavi said and looked at other side in dilemma... Shiva knows she misses her dream... She is absolute a brilliant dancer... After winning the competition she joined Nritya academy and teach the students there... Now, being pregnant she was pushed in the life cycle she never imagined... Even Rishita give time after her pregnancy... He heard Dev complaining about Rishita tantrums of everyday... He is always ready to do anything for his Chipkali but letting her out from these thoughts are so difficult for him... He tries to pacify her but Raavi kept on ignoring him after so much trial, he pecked her as he was getting late for college...

Raavi spent all her day watching TV... And cursing all and everyone around who were doing dance to instigate her... Shiva came late from store... He saw his wife roaming here and there in anger... But today he had a surprise for her and really excited to talk about it... He rushed and hugged her from back and caresses her belly...

Raavi shrugged him off and went to hot his dinner... While Shiva went to freshen up and comes to eat food... He took a morsel and fed her... She looked at him angrily... "Maine khaa liya hai... Abhi abhi 3 paranthe khaaye the mujhe bhook lagi thi zor se..." Raavi said pouted... "Haan... Par ab tujhe aur khana padega itna saara kaam jo karna hai" Shiva said with smile in his face reaching to his eyes... What work he is talking about? I am here, not allowed to do anything and he is playing jokes with me that I am going to do work... Why is he playing with my emotions? Raavi kept thinking and making irritating faces...

"Tere liye ek client laaya hoon... Uska dance choreograph karna hai... Dekh client ko dance nahi aata tujhse sab kuch seekhega so teach him without stressing yourself" Shiva said with smirk in his face... Raavi's happiness is having no bound she happily pecked Shiva's lips and hugged him tightly... She is overjoyed to do the work she love even in her seventh month...

"Main bilkul bhi exert nahi karungi khud ko... Tu uss client ko bulaa liyo main usse aisa dance sikhaaungi ki saari ladkiyan line maarengi usko... Uski diwani hi diwani hongi somnaath ki galiyon mein" Raavi smiled and said... Shiva stopped in between "NO... No... No... Koi ladki ka jhamela nahi chahiye uski Biwi ek number ki chudail hai... Khaa jaayegi bechaariyon ko... Vo kya hai na aaj kal to pregnant hai and they were expecting twins so no chance" Shiva said smiling and focusing in his food... Raavi understand his meaning and took his plate from his hand and start eating by herself... "Arre khaane de Chudail..." Shiva said... While Raavi hit at his hand "Mujhe teen logon ka khana hota hai... Tu thora kam khayega to kuch ho nahi jaayega... Apne Client ke baare mein aur bataana kyun seekhna hai usse dance... Ladkiyan pataani hai College mein?"

Shiva looked at her how cute she looks in anger... Shiva held her face in his hand and pecked her nose... "Vo freshers party aa rahi hai na... To maine socha ab second year ke hai to juniors ke liye ek dance to banta hai... Aur Somnath mein tujhse acha dance kisse aata hai... Abhi to tune bataaya ek baar sikhunga to ladkiyon ki line lag jaayegi" Shiva said with a proud smile... While Raavi keep giving him murderous look... He want to be with those young girls after making her pregnant with twins... She will either kill all fresher or he will be banned from his room for next two months... "Main keh rahi hu Shiva unn chudailon ka naam mat liya kar... Main har hafte teri nazar utaarti hu ki kissi bhi chudail ka saaya na pade tujh par aur tu... Ab lagta hai tujhe Koyle se sajaa ke college bhejna hoga" Raavi said angrily... She always make sure none of the girl in his college looked at him... That's why she bought oversized clothes for him and make sure he doesn't look handsome as he goes to college... Even though, he still does that's why she went with him in college at morning and always make sure to pick him up after her dance classes... Just because of pregnancy her plans are changed but that doesn't mean any of those girls have right to snatch her Shiva...

"I am telling you Shiva... I will lose weight and will look same but please kabhi bhi unke liye mujhe mat chodiyo" A tear slipped from her eyes... She can't lose him, he is the only person she ever had... His love give her reason to live but losing him means there is nothing left for her... Shiva cursed himself for letting her cry, why she is being so insensitive she looked so beautiful the glow on her face always attracts him it's so difficult to compose himself in this time... If she isn't pregnant he is sure he won't leave her even for a second and they may have repetitive sessions in bedroom... And here she thinks she isn't charming anymore how can he tell her his difficulty to be sane at this moment... Shiva tries to touch her cheek but she pushed him at side... He held his ears and uttered sorry, but she is not ready to listen him...

"Tujhe unke saath rehna hai na... So, Stay away from me and my children... Aaj ke baad aangan mein soyiyo humaare saamne bhatakna bhi mat" Raavi said and rushed to her room crying... Shiva followed her and forcefully opened the door he saw her crying at one side... He is trying too hard to make her feel as fine as she needed to be... But she is hell bent to make her self bechaari... He thought after getting a chance to teach him dance steps she will be happy and overjoyed but she is throwing tantrums... He knows it is difficult for her, but it is not so easy for him too attending lectures all day, then working in store and finally when he come back to home she always cries and acts like this...

He took his pillow and starts going outside... "Ab nahi aaunga tujhe aur tere bacho ko tang karne reh tu yahaan chain se" Shiva said and went from there angrily... Raavi contemplates her situation after 10 minutes it wasn't Shiva's fault he just wanted her to be happy... That's why thought to participate in his fresher party too... Even though he never shared she knew it is difficult for him to be with all those kids at least 6-7 years younger to him... Lots of comments he must have to hear and still work hard so that he can provide a better future to her and their children... Even in her anger how can she called them as only her children Shiva always cares for them... He fulfilled all her wishes even at midnight... Whenever she feel pain he stay awake and kept caressing her until she slept comfortably... But how easily she forget all of that and just saw her problems not his...

Dear Babies

You know na babies how much Mumma loves to dance... Mumma loves you too but she misses her life... When you will come to this world? Come fast na... I'll make sure you both learn those steps...

Mumma had a fight with Papa... He stopped me from sending him to college batao aise kaise chalega agar koi chudail tumhare Papa pe nazar daalegi to mujhe to mere hot husband ko bachana padega na... Mera Shiva to bahut seedha hai par main unn ladkiyon par to bharosa nahi kar sakti na? Par nahi Papa ne to mere unse milne ke har raaste ko hi band kar diya... Aur gusse mein Mumma ne Papa ko hurt kiya...

Mumma ne Papa ko bahut hurt kar diya... He is sad... Papa always works hard he is really a chattan Pandya and always remember you will always try to be like him... He is the best man and inspirational figure for both of you and I am sure he will love you more than his life...

Giving up is easy but walking towards your goal even though no one is with you is always difficult and he is one of them... I am so lucky to have him... And you will feel that too... Acha ab tum dono bhi saath dena mera Papa ko manane jaana hai humein... Kaddu Pandya ko sambhalna itna asaan nahi...

Raavi put her diary carefully and took her cousin to sleep outside... Shiva is pretending to sleep but he can't this Chipkali made impossible for him to stay away from her... Even though she does stupidity still his heart always calls for her only... Raavi placed cousin at cot attached with him... He knows she will come later on, hence prepared for her bed too... She moves her hand and touched his face "Kal se dance sikhaaungi par khabardaar jo kissi bhi chudail ko aas paas bhi bhatakne diya... Tujh par pehla right mera hai aur mera hi rahega main keh deti hoon" She pecked his forehead and lay at his side... Shiva smiled slightly hearing her never ending complaints and demands... She soon drifted to sleep while holding his hands, Shiva moved slightly toward the other side but she scooch over closer and throw her legs over him... He smiled she isn't made for cot, and he can't let her be outside for complete night in such awkward position... He picked her up in bridal style while she snuggled and clutched his shirt tightly he made her comfortable in their room and sleep while hugging her...

NEXT MORNING
Shiva went to Store in morning... It's weekend so he is going to be there for full day... Raavi got up at 11 am and realized she is in her bed, her bhootnath even in anger cares for her... She always remains his first priority... As Dhara packed the lunch, Raavi said she will go to store today... At first, she denied but when Raavi persist Dhara agreed... But soon, she called Shiva and informed him that Raavi is going there with his lunch... Raavi came there smilingly caressing her belly and trying to sneek to find her bhootnath when Shiva come from back side and said "Kisse dhoond rahi hai aap madam"... Raavi got scared and about to fall when Shiva held her hand and took her to store room so that she be seated properly...

"Kyun aayi hai yahaan... Kal to bada keh rahi thi ki meri zaroorat nahi tujhe... Tu aur tere dono bache mujhse nahi milenge" Shiva said with hurt in his voice... Raavi felt sad her words really broke his heart how can she said that thing to him... She held her ears and murmured "Sorry... Shiva"... Shiva ignored her and starts eating his food while Raavi kept looking at him for one reaction... She started crying when he refused to look towards her, at first Shiva ignored but when her sobs turned into hard crying voice... He give up and rushed to her, she hugged him tightly while crying...

"Sorry Shiva... Main kabhi aisa nahi kahungi... Main... Main bahut pareshan ho gayi thi... Ghar pe rehna mushkil ho gaya maine saara frustration tujh par nikaal diya... I am sorry" Raavi kept crying while he caressed her head... "Khabardaar jo aaj ke baad tune mujhe khud se alag samjha to... Main baat nahi karunga tujhse... Chipkali kaafi heroine ban gayi hai tu... Zyada pyaar na sahaa nahi jaata tujhse" Raavi clutches his shirt more tightly... She felt the kick of her babies and shout in pain..."Dekh humaare bache bhi mujhe sazza de rahe hai tujhse buri tareeke se baat karne ki... Main to inhe apne team mein chahti thi but yeh to abhi se hi Team Papa mein hai... Huh"... Raavi put his hand on her belly... Shiva's hands covered her belly completely after few seconds, suddenly his hands sense fluttering movements. He was so happy and each time this happens, he feel a connection with his twins. This kick makes him feel emotionally satisfied and also the pleasure of being a dad... And it all happens because of the woman here, for three of them she is bearing the pain right now... Also she will do the same at the time of their birth... He pecked her forehead and looked straight to her eyes "Tu chinta mat kar... Jab bache ho jaayenge na to jab bhi tera competition hoga to dono ko kandhe pe ghuma ke ghumunga pan tere sapno mein aanch nahi aane dunga... Abhi ke liye to tu apne iss ek client se kaam chalaa le" Raavi chuckled and hugged him tightly...

At night when Shiva came back... Raavi is ready with her songs selection... She selected the videos so that her husband can learn from them because she can't move and dance with him... When Shiva came, being over excited Raavi showed him her songs and he became shocked...

"Aye Mami ki behan ki beti... Yeh kya hai tujhe main salmaan Khan lagta hu... Yeh tere har gaane pe ladka apni shirt kyun utaarta hai... Aur tu aisi video dekhti hai din bhar" Shiva checked her gallery it's filled up with those videos... None of the guys had covered themselves while her gallery is filled with guys pic only...

"Kya problem hai inme ache to lag rahe hai... Aur tujhe kaun sa dance aata hai shirt nikaalega to impression banega uske baad tu kuch bhi kar kissi ka dhyaan nahi jaayega tere moments pe" Raavi chuckled... Shiva held her hands and slightly pull her towards him, as she landed on his chest he murmured in her ear "Par main couple dance to kar hi sakta hoon na... Usme to kissi ki nazar vaise bhi kam hi padhti hai... Just proximity matters"

He took her hand and twirled her into his arms. While Raavi blushed in their proximity, her eyes glistened and smile spread across her face... Why didn't she think earlier, she can dance with him and be comfortable around...

He drew her close to his chest, and she wrapped her arms around his neck. While they were too engrossed in each other they didn't know whole family is busy watching their dance...

She began to withdraw her hand to brush away her hair, but his hand clutched onto hers. He carefully laid her thin hand on his shoulder and delicately tucked her lock behind her ear... She whispered softly "Tu to bada romantic nikla Bhoot nath"...

She set her head on his shoulder. They continued to dance, too lost in the music to halt. Time passed but still they were so lost into each other... Shiva leaned and about to kiss her on her lips when Krish shouted...

"Arre bas bhi karo yr... Tum dono ka badhiya hai kahin bhi shuru ho jaate ho" Raavi and Shiva looked around whole family is gathered to watch their romantic dance... Raavi blushed and hide behind Shiva... "Seekho kuch Dev... Tum to mujhe basic kaam pe sau taane dete the... Aur yahaan Shiva apni Raavi ko dance tak karaa rahaa hai itne carefully... How lucky she is?" Rishita hit Dev at his arms... While everyone laugh it out... Raavi rushed to her room blushingly... Shiva followed and hugged her from behind... "I think for next 2 months I have to be your dance choreographer... Tu uske kuch samay baad mujhe acha dance sikhaa sakti hai college ke liye"... Raavi blushed and hugged him back she is indeed lucky to have him in her life...

I loved this type of story simply superb becoz of ongoing n upcoming track I m taking break from this show... So story came for the rescue .. nw I can sleep peacefully

I hope there are parts I want one girl n one boy for shivi..

I really loved this continue soon I want this type of track shiva studies supported by raavi rather than this makers stupid jealousy track ... N dhara dhundo track

The best of story in shivi story is everything is ABT shivi no interference..

I want next shiva becomes engineer ,raavi gets back to her career ,shiva lends good job or project n their beautiful children too

Love the update.

Hope you write more parts for this one.

Loved the update❤❤

They are so cute😍😍

Anupama!!! Loved it❤️!! Raavi's frustration was very real and very cute... And I've always liked the whole roothna manaana sequence, because as someone who has never been in a relationship, I find it endlessly amusing. Shiva was super cute as well, with his inability to stay pissed at her....

Twins!!! One boy and one girl, I hope.....

Hi baby, finally got the time to comment..read this in the morning itself..sorry could not comment immediately. The second part was super cute. The small little fights and their patch up...full on hubby wifey thing..so adorable❤️

Shiva taking up Engineering to fulfill Raavi's wish. Raavi being all supportive..she even went and got all books...Shiva in turn helping her get back to her passion of dancing...they are truly life partner goals!!

Indeed both of them are lucky to have each other❤️

Loved this so much🤗