Beyond the horizon [An OS - ft Farhad, Raghav & Pallavi] - Page 2

Completely brilliant, I am in shock.😭

Thanx for the tag. ❤️

I don't know what to say. You write so well, happy wala likh do 🥺

Originally posted by: AnushkhaA

Kuch zyadaa hi likh rahi hun main aaj kal.. 🤣

Sorry yaar but I didn't like this one.

Too gory it s. U killed d leads.😔😔😔😔😶😭😭

Anna aur pallu ko mardiya...😭😭😭😭wo bhi itni buri tarah se.. 😔😔😔

Thanks for the Tag🤗

As usual I love the variety in your pieces. This was Brutal. A Brutal End to their lives on earth.

Ofcourse I have already shared why I don't believe Heaven is the only place RaghVi can finally be at peace together. Some questions I'll ask - I thought you liked the Female PowerACP Lakshmi Singh - yet here you made her character somewhat completely abhorrent - Was it just for the piece - or you truly believe her to be capable of doing what's here? Is this woman utterly Mad - how would killing them rid Hyderabad of all the criminals?(Yeah, I did read the part'bt the court hearing.)

Hope you don't stop tagging me for your next works hereon🙈

You're an absolutely meticulous writer with the detailing you went into for the entire gore scene. Even more so happy the way you wrote Farhad's Revenge Saga for his Anna&Bhabhi. It's great to see Amazing writeups with him as the Main Protagonist🤗

Running away to read my other tags since I'm finally free now this week 🏃🏻‍♀️

This was beautiful but.....

Why did you kill them 😭😭😭

Not enough words to explain how amazing this was!

This was truly the best anyone could've written on this current track. Loved Farhad ❤️. He, is truly, Raghav's brother by heart. Only he could have brought them justice. Also, just a mention of Harish lights up the entire scene. I miss his bond with Raghav & Farhad so much!

Also, it was good to see that Keerti was finally with Raghav and supporting his team. It would have been extremely disappointing and disheartening to see if she still sided with Sunny even after Raghav & Pallavi's death.

Only Laxmi could have stooped this low. I haven't watched the episodes for a long time now. But have been read the updates. Only by reading, I hate Laxmi so much. You've just made me hate her more. She doesn't deserve to be a police officer.

Raghav & Pallavi are finally together, though in a different universe ❤️. At the start of this OS, where Raghav & Pallavi were planning to scare Farhad, it didn't seem that the story would take such a different track. I honestly thought it was something fun coming up. But You Are Just Mind-blowing!

Can't wait to read more.

P.S. : I love to read your stories. They take me into a totally different world. It feels as if whatever has been written is actually happening in front of me.

What happened to Sunny though?