New FF::Dil ye ziddi hai..part 10 page 28 on 14/11

All character will be same as show..

I will try to explore all the characters n all 3 couples..but may be I will little biased towards Moran as I love shaleen..

Hope you would like it..

Index:-

Part 1:-scroll down..

Part 2:-pg 3

Part 3:-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/158918747

Part 4:-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/158945614

Part 5:-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/158957950

Part 6:-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/159057771

Part 7:-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/159284507

Part 8:-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/159335318

Part 9:-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/159411677

Part 10:-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/159464638

Monami beating them up was fabulous! 😆

Maza aaya! Swasti is a sweet name! 😳 thanks for PM! 🤗

Nice Start. Hoping to read more!!!!

Super start...

Love it... Thanks for pm..

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

All character will be same as show..

I will try to explore all the characters n all 3 couples..but may be I will little biased towards Moran as I love shaleen..

Hope you would like it..

Index:-

Part 1:-scroll down..

Wow such mein awesome ❤️

Aaj dekhenge episode mein kya hota hai as usual taunt Martha hai ya bacha tha hai

Thanks for PM

Nice update

Love it

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

Loved it Sonu dear

Awesome and beautiful part 👏✊👍

I really loved how you have penned it down without changing the real feel of the characters .. Karan was really angry at Monami for her blabbering

Well true she doesn't know the real Karan well so it will surely take time to understand each other

Sid & Bala did wrong & are paying for it & it's necessary for Karan as a leader & Trainer to maintain that decorum of academy

I really wish to see the same in series as you have written... it will be so much like Karan mind we have read it

He strictly belives to fight one's battle as in real world no one helps easily & to make them exceptional commando he won't help either but will empower them with courage like he did with Sanju when she was feeling disheartened & will let monami fight her own battles & will intervene when will see things getting serious

Nice start & waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗🤗

Loved it!!

Monami fought the goons👍🏼

Waiting for MU to end😆

Cont soon