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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

Yes, exactly 💖!


The reason I loved the OG so much is because they devote screen space and time to each couple appropriately. Even for DevTa! The drunk scene was so powerful because Kathir, someone who is silent, had a ton of things to say that night. He poured out his feelings and it was the first time the audience knew how much the marriage affected him.


The CVs are relying a lot on half-baked scenes here. Every time we think Shiva or Raavi will speak, another character comes in between them. Meanwhile, other characters are so underdeveloped that you wonder why they exist... like Dev, Mausa-Pa, sometimes even Kaka. They have 1-2 scenes where they are important, and then they are gone. I'm not even going to talk about the many "friends" that appeared...


A good drunk confession scene would've had at minimum 80% of the episode devoted to Shiva and Raavi. No other characters allowed to intervene. It would've highlighted Shiva's expressions, we should've gotten Shiva reaching out to Raavi, wanting to touch her, but at the same time refusing to touch her because he's disappointed that he could never be her "soulmate." We should've had scenes where he is crying about how he thought it would be all right to marry a girl and give her "life" after she tried to kill herself on the mandap... but now that he's fallen for her, he realizes he's "killing" her as well... just in a different way.


We should've had a scene where he realizes that his Dhara bhabi was wrong (this is very critical as he needs to someday move on from Dhara and think more about Raavi). And then at the end of it all, we should've had a scene of blank defeat... where he "reassures" himself that he'll be fine. He let go of things in the past (this can be a hint for his upcoming education track), and he could let go of things now).

I think they may have drunken confession like Shiva would be hurt that he is trying so hard not get affected that Raavi is staying under same roof with him and the insults the family is throwing at her ( Like in today episode when Suman said something gaay to Raavi ,he did not react) and trying to supress his emotions seeing Raavi's condition like how lonely she feels in that house. So he ends up drinking with his friends this time and comes late at home where Raavi is eventually waiting for him portraying her hidden care . When Raavi sees him coming drunk again, She is angry at him for doing that again but says nothing as she has lost her Haqq to do that but when Shiva stumbles while Walking in aangan towards his room , Raavi helps him to take towards their room because not to disturb anyone 's sleep which can create a scene and also cause Her pregnant Dhara di stress beacuse of her favourite baccha is drunk again. She helps Shiva towards room upon reaching their she tries to leave Shiva but halts in her steps as Shiva held her hand starts weeping and confessing that She should not leaver her and how much he misses her , her irratating talks to annoy him and everything about Raavi and how wishes for happiness , how much her tears affect him , how he did not want to accuse her or throwing insult at her being characterless and what had happen at temple what her friends had said, how he had started liking her and wanted to confess it on reception night and the loneliness he felt after she left the house , how Gaumbi beat him after she felt signing the divorce papers , howw his family was ignoring him , his mahaan babhima had not served him his dinner and how did not wanted to being him Gawar , his desire to study more and being engineer but the situation at that time did not left him any option except leaving his studies and helping Gaumbi at store. He confesses every damn thing he felt to His Raavi which leaves Raavi being guilt and sad that he was doing all this for her happiness and sake and then a determine Raavi decides to save this relationship in anyway till her last breathe. Then consoles her bhoothnaath by huging him that she will never leave also her confession how she hoped that he would stop her at time when she was leaving Pandya Niwas , then how badly she was missing him ata her Maais house , how she snapped at her Maasi when she proposed Pandit ji for her second marriage and her confession to her massi and Anita .How it angered and sadden her when he did that announcement of them divorcing and she is available for marriage at the Janmashtami function like her every emotion for him. Then she tears the divorce papers in front of him and then sleeps huging him for starting a fresh start of their happy and blissful marriage tomorrow morning.

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Posted: 3 years ago

I know this is an "AU" thread, but seeing how the topic came up, I'm just disappointed with the CVs in totality... I began watching this show to see how they would handle the KM pair, and I fell for Kanwar and Alice's portrayal of Shiva and Raavi... but more than that, I liked the subtle scenes mixed with the family scenes.


Raavi claiming to be Shiva's "proxy." Shiva and Gaumbi planning on how they could get back at Janardhan for the kidnapping and Dhara telling them a better way which didn't have to use violence. Raavi teasing Krish about his smoking habits and telling him that she's going to "broadcast" his secret to the world. Krish dancing and singing to a girly song and Raavi mistakenly thinking he has a gender identity crisis because she saw him wearing a sari the previous day... They are all very, very wholesome tracks... showing us the many forms of love we find in life, from romantic love to familial love to love found in friendships.


I don't care how much screen space a couple gets. Maturity can get all of it for all I care... but in the few moments we get a Shiva and Raavi scene, don't ruin their characters. Don't make the scenes so negative where the audience questions whether these two can truly stay together. Don't make Shiva kick something that contains sindhoor and Raavi's beloved belongings. Don't make Raavi be so stubborn that she refuses to listen to Shiva (this is the same girl who knows to only love!). Shiva and Raavi's relationship can be developed in so many different ways... ways that reduce the toxicity.


After the NDE, Shiva and Raavi should've sat down on the temple steps, in the presence of Lord Shiva, and discussed what this marriage meant to them. Why Shiva was so frightened to see Raavi get hurt, and why Raavi was so affected by Shiva's bruises. Even if both of them have no interest in staying married (especially with their rich childhood history), they should've had a discussion on compromise/wishes for the future. Even if a Sneha came into the picture, even if Shiva was angry that Raavi didn't defend him (as he would've done it in a heart beat since he loved her so much), a divorce could've been justified. Why? Because their conversation about marriage was a "compromise/contract" that both of them agreed on, and Raavi broke it by not defending his respect. They could've proceeded with the divorce with Raavi wishing to stay at Prafulla's house (in the time of the divorce) and the family wondering why she wasn't coming home. The entire divorce could've been their little secret!


And then, Dhara's pregnancy could've been the reason Raavi came back. Because Shiva noticed how stressed Dhara was. They could've postponed the divorce 9 months later, after the baby is born, and in the meantime, Raavi could come back to the house (family still not understanding what has happened). Shiva could've realized she wanted to go back to school, and he could've silently supported her because he knows the value of education after giving it up himself. They could have scenes of Shiva dropping Raavi at school every day, and when it comes time to learn about business, Rakhi, the guest lecturer, could invite Shiva in one of the classes as a guest lecturer, speaking about business in the real world. Raavi could listen to Shiva and become mesmerized, and this could be the moment where she unknowingly falls for him... because for the first time, she saw how a passionate Shiva looked like.


And this could begin the many bedroom conversations they have together. Where Raavi is studying for her exams and Shiva helps her. And every now and then, Raavi throws in a personal question to figure Shiva out... until she pieces the entire story together all by herself. Shiva's birthday present could be her speaking to the school principal about letting him write his 10th board exams (all without the family knowing). And in between all of this, they could have Raavi participating in college events. Her dance partner could "injure" himself the day before the event, and Shiva could replace him as Raavi and him practiced the dance in their room at night every night... so who better to dance than him. Under the stage, Raavi could realize she doesn't want the divorce, and the rest of the track could be how she confesses her own feelings for Shiva and how she stops the divorce track.

The CVs can even add masala elements by having the various family members find the divorce papers in shock, one by one.


But you know, CVs want to give us lollipops 🙃

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Posted: 3 years ago

KD posted a pic of him and Alice together in an auto.....🙄

Then Kd posted a pic of him in auto baiting for a ride....🤔🤫🤭

Whom is he baiting....with that seductive looks😇

Looks like Someone wants a ride😏😉☺️

Guess a couple is going for a ride of life tonight🥰

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Edited by MayaTharkiFairy - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: MayaTharkiFairy

KD posted a pic of him and Alice together in an auto.....🙄

Then Kd posted a pic of him in auto baiting for a ride....🤔🤫🤭

Whom is he baiting....with that seductive looks😇

Looks like Someone wants a ride😏😉☺️

Guess a couple is going for a ride of life tonight🥰

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samajh gaye 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

I know this is an "AU" thread, but seeing how the topic came up, I'm just disappointed with the CVs in totality... I began watching this show to see how they would handle the KM pair, and I fell for Kanwar and Alice's portrayal of Shiva and Raavi... but more than that, I liked the subtle scenes mixed with the family scenes.


Raavi claiming to be Shiva's "proxy." Shiva and Gaumbi planning on how they could get back at Janardhan for the kidnapping and Dhara telling them a better way which didn't have to use violence. Raavi teasing Krish about his smoking habits and telling him that she's going to "broadcast" his secret to the world. Krish dancing and singing to a girly song and Raavi mistakenly thinking he has a gender identity crisis because she saw him wearing a sari the previous day... They are all very, very wholesome tracks... showing us the many forms of love we find in life, from romantic love to familial love to love found in friendships.


I don't care how much screen space a couple gets. Maturity can get all of it for all I care... but in the few moments we get a Shiva and Raavi scene, don't ruin their characters. Don't make the scenes so negative where the audience questions whether these two can truly stay together. Don't make Shiva kick something that contains sindhoor and Raavi's beloved belongings. Don't make Raavi be so stubborn that she refuses to listen to Shiva (this is the same girl who knows to only love!). Shiva and Raavi's relationship can be developed in so many different ways... ways that reduce the toxicity.


After the NDE, Shiva and Raavi should've sat down on the temple steps, in the presence of Lord Shiva, and discussed what this marriage meant to them. Why Shiva was so frightened to see Raavi get hurt, and why Raavi was so affected by Shiva's bruises. Even if both of them have no interest in staying married (especially with their rich childhood history), they should've had a discussion on compromise/wishes for the future. Even if a Sneha came into the picture, even if Shiva was angry that Raavi didn't defend him (as he would've done it in a heart beat since he loved her so much), a divorce could've been justified. Why? Because their conversation about marriage was a "compromise/contract" that both of them agreed on, and Raavi broke it by not defending his respect. They could've proceeded with the divorce with Raavi wishing to stay at Prafulla's house (in the time of the divorce) and the family wondering why she wasn't coming home. The entire divorce could've been their little secret!


And then, Dhara's pregnancy could've been the reason Raavi came back. Because Shiva noticed how stressed Dhara was. They could've postponed the divorce 9 months later, after the baby is born, and in the meantime, Raavi could come back to the house (family still not understanding what has happened). Shiva could've realized she wanted to go back to school, and he could've silently supported her because he knows the value of education after giving it up himself. They could have scenes of Shiva dropping Raavi at school every day, and when it comes time to learn about business, Rakhi, the guest lecturer, could invite Shiva in one of the classes as a guest lecturer, speaking about business in the real world. Raavi could listen to Shiva and become mesmerized, and this could be the moment where she unknowingly falls for him... because for the first time, she saw how a passionate Shiva looked like.


And this could begin the many bedroom conversations they have together. Where Raavi is studying for her exams and Shiva helps her. And every now and then, Raavi throws in a personal question to figure Shiva out... until she pieces the entire story together all by herself. Shiva's birthday present could be her speaking to the school principal about letting him write his 10th board exams (all without the family knowing). And in between all of this, they could have Raavi participating in college events. Her dance partner could "injure" himself the day before the event, and Shiva could replace him as Raavi and him practiced the dance in their room at night every night... so who better to dance than him. Under the stage, Raavi could realize she doesn't want the divorce, and the rest of the track could be how she confesses her own feelings for Shiva and how she stops the divorce track.

The CVs can even add masala elements by having the various family members find the divorce papers in shock, one by one.


But you know, CVs want to give us lollipops 🙃


Time and again, you prove to us why you should be the one writing this story!!


Loved it!!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: MayaTharkiFairy

KD posted a pic of him and Alice together in an auto.....🙄

Then Kd posted a pic of him in auto baiting for a ride....🤔🤫🤭

Whom is he baiting....with that seductive looks😇

Looks like Someone wants a ride😏😉☺️

Guess a couple is going for a ride of life tonight🥰


KD's friend kaafilazy commented: gaadi main baithke rikshaw main photo dalta hai

🤣🤪

Edited by Unnati05 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Unnati05

KD's friend kaafilazy commented: gaadi main baithke rikshaw main photo dalta hai

🤣🤪


KD gaadi mein baithta hai.. but Shiva Pandya is gareeb who sits in a rickshaw 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese


KD gaadi mein baithta hai.. but Shiva Pandya is gareeb who sits in a rickshaw 😆

Shiva pandya ko anda dene wala bike chahiye🙃🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

I am watching some clips of Ziddi dil maane na, and everytime I see the heroine, I am like she could have played raavi.thankfully she didn't.on a side note she is cute though.would she have had the same chemistry with KD? Would shivi have been so popular even then?but shivi popular hota bhi to humein KDice nahi milte. 🤣🤣🤣

Like every single time!

mujhe lagta hai KD ke opposite koi bhi ho chemistry apne aap ban jati hai

Tabhi toh KD jis bhi show mai kaam karta hai fake articles start getting published that he is dating his co-star.

On YouTube their is a video from his show hum hain na(hot scene🤣).I can't even watch it because now i can't even imagine someone else opposite to KD other than Alice.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: MayaTharkiFairy

Shiva pandya ko anda dene wala bike chahiye🙃🤣

aisa bike kaha milegi ??? 🤣

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