ShiVi FanFiction // Arcane // Chapter 10 P.G 53 / 16.03.2022 - Page 22

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Amazingly written

Little nuances captured like its going on before your eyes...

Loved it🖤

Thank you so much! I'm so happy that you loved it!❤️

Originally posted by: vjohna3

AWESOME

LOVED IT

PLS KEEP UPDATING

BUT U HAD SAID THERE WILL BE SHIVI HOT SCENES AND A BIT OF DEVTA TOO

THO WATEVER THIS IS GOOD

Thank you! The next update is coming soon!

Originally posted by: Scarysea

Inaayaa the flashbacks are beautiful. There is such a depth to it

Despite this being such a long update, I can't stop myself from asking for more❤️

Thank you so much! I'm so happy that you like this! ❤️🥺

Will update soon though!

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Inaaya girl, that was am-az-ing!!!! Loved it, I'm gonna read it through once again and then come back to comment on this, but, hopefully the next update won't make us wait so much......

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Sorry, I'm so late with my comment bub, but I had an exam that I just finished up with yesterday☺. This was soooo beautiful.... This chapter was just.. sigh....

She wants to burn him into her fingers, burn him into her hands and body and into the marrow of her bones. He is already burnt into her soul, burnt into every part of her that matters.

I swear Inaaya girl, this line, it felt like you'd reached into the depths of me before you wrote this.To me, this is what love is, always, knowing that this person is yours, knowing that you belong to your partner.....

He knows how to read her heart. Shiva can read her like her favourite book, and she has been softened by the number of times he has cracked her open and thumbed through her chapters, traced his fingers over her lines and made annotations in the margins of her pages. he has read her worst moments, and instead of turning her into persona non grata, instead of sticking her on the shelf and letting her crumble into pieces he has kept her, weaving himself into her story.

As a book lover, as someone who believes in the magic and beauty of words in real life just as much as in our imaginary worlds, this touched my soul.....

It was super emotional, but also written so sensitively, so softly I didn't even realise when I was done with the chapter....

I'm guessing the next chapter is supposed to be Krish finding out? Hopefully we can have a quicker update this time....?

Loads of love Inaaya💓❣️💓......

Thank you so much for this🥺 Really made my day! I'm so sorry for making you all wait so much! But Uni has been very demanding as of late!

I feel the same way too! and when I think of ShiVi it kind of fits right in, their love just seems very all-consuming!

@Bold Italics: 🥺🥺

Well the next chapter is still mostly Raavi's point of view and like a much more detailed account of the progression in their relationship, I keep thinking to add in Krish's point of view but then end up writing in a lot more detail that I had planned to, so I have to keep postponing it to the next chapter! 😭

Will be updating soon

Love,

Inaayaa ❤️

Originally posted by: MayaTharkiFairy

Jaan.....I have no words ❤

It was such a beautiful emotional hot rollercoaster ride.Babe thanks for tagging💋💋

WOW....THE ANGER THE APOLOGY....AND OFCOURSE SOME INNOCENT THARKINESS😉

Loved it babe❤❤🌹💃

I mean I was emotional soo invested from the beginning to end I forgot where I existed😆

Keep writing 👏

Love you❤🌹💃

Thank you so much bub! I'm glad you liked it so much!

As for the next one, will have a lot more not so innocent tharkiness 😉

Love you ❤️

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

It was beautiful.

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: sangy

Well well well, it was worth the wait!!!!! This is sooo cute.❤️

Although your Raavi is shown as so much mature here, she understands her Shiva so much, but still the dobiness is there....How come she doesn't realise Shiva loves her...Shiva is always action more than words. Yet, she is shocked that he loves her....that was so deliciously nice...

I love how beautifully you have shown these two growing up and their relationship evolving from friends to enemies to friends again and then to love and ultimately being the soulmates they are destined to be.

It's the little moments, the gestures, the way they express themselves, that has my heart 💖. That makes this particular FF so much.

Ohh... I don't know when you will update again, but please dear don't make us wait..

Although waiting and then you delivering us with something this great, iska maaza hi kuch aur hain...

Thank you😊🥰

Thank you so much 🥺

I Know that Raavi in this FF is quite a bit different to the OG Raavi, but I feel like it would be so because she has simply known Shiva longer, their equation isn't all anger, hence the maturity that comes from Raavi, and as for the dobiness, I think it would be because of Raavi's abandonment issues that I kind of wanted to highlight!

@Italics: Thank you so much love!🥺

Updating soon! gimme like till the end of the day!

Love,

Inaayaa

Originally posted by: Inaayaa_sidiqui

Thank you so much for this🥺 Really made my day! I'm so sorry for making you all wait so much! But Uni has been very demanding as of late!

I feel the same way too! and when I think of ShiVi it kind of fits right in, their love just seems very all-consuming!

@Bold Italics: 🥺🥺

Well the next chapter is still mostly Raavi's point of view and like a much more detailed account of the progression in their relationship, I keep thinking to add in Krish's point of view but then end up writing in a lot more detail that I had planned to, so I have to keep postponing it to the next chapter! 😭

Will be updating soon

Love,

Inaayaa ❤️

@bold It's okay, happens to all of us darling..... I'm stuck with so many ideas in my head and no way to write them down either because of college.... ☺

@blue - well, honestly speaking, since we all enjoy Raavi's pov so much, I really don't think you have to worry about this.... Just eventually give us a Krish pov because he's such a cutie!!!!! 💓

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

wow.......this was kind of best update so far in regards to their story.......

we kept thinking about it, coz we heard it from the 3rd person........now raavi is thinking about everything .....their past, progression, feelings, confession......hurt, pretend hate, love, longing it makes it all the more special.......

i loved reading about how they felt, pretend hate, apologies and den being woth each other just like hand and glove......it was so natural for dem and family was understanding too.......

i also loved they are so habituated and domestically in line with each other.......it gives immense happiness....❤️ wanted to just keep reading.....

in short this update had everything innocence, love, care, hurt, dependability, with tadka of little tharkipan😆........would love to read more about their 1st step towards eachother......

he gave up arguing on things which didnt matter....maturity and love......

amazing update👍🏼👏

Thank you so much! The next chapter is going to be all about their first steps together as a couple! hope you like it as much as this one! 🥺❤️

Originally posted by: Shivi_forever

It was very long... and beautiful update👏

Loved Shivi's flashback moments❤️

Raavi is so mature here, loved how you depicted her feelings and thoughts👏

Shiva's feelings were also beautifully described👏

Loved Shivi's confession and the steamy moments☺️❤️

Thank you much!❤️