FF..ft purvir - Our new lovestory..part 5 on pg 14 - Page 9

Originally posted by: x-Nahima-x

Everything about PurVir is sexy 🥵 🔥

True...they are ...🔥🔥

How come all your stories have such a neat last paragraph?❤️ Nicely done Srilata! And you kept up your promise of posting after today's epi too 😊

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

Yaar yeh ho jaye bas I seriously dying to see him cornering her

I know I want to see more playful intimacy and closeness. Yes they hug hold hands and feed each other but I want to see more playfulness that comes with a new young love. Like Vir grabbing her and hiding in corners, Bawari playing with her hair in his face when he sleeps, etc. I want all the cliches.

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

Part 2

Loved the ways daksh support mukhi.. Loved him as positive character...❤

Hope show mai bhi isko positive hii rakhe.. Dhwani ka sabse accha, dost banakar.. Positive characters ki kami hai humare show mai.. Par i loved your daksh more di.. ❤

Bacche na.. 🤭🤭.. Smart bacche hai sabse.. Rockstar hai vo.. 😚💓sab jaante hai ki haathi ki yaaddast kaise vapas laani hai.. Kuch sikho baba ko bacchon.. 🤭😝

Yaar ye sudha viru ko baba kyu bol rahi.. Kaisa lagega.. 😝🤣

And here come the main scene.. Haayee their little awkwardness.. 🤧🤧🤧

Mujhe vo scene yaad aa gaya jab vo pehli baar room share karne aata hai same awkwardness thi...🤧💓

Pati hai mere.. Haayee.. Bas bol de ye bawari..🤧❤

Ye uss wajah se to nahi aaye hai...bawarii... 😝🤣🤭😚

kitna pyaara hai ye sab kuch... Loved loved it di.. Pyaara, pyaara soft soft..❤❤🤧

Thank you so much for this di.. ❤

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

Part 3

So dhwani medam tensed hai ki kya hoga..🤭🤭

But humara viru to Saint hai.. 🤣😝

So bawari ask him to sleep on bed.... Nahi to mukhiji aapki peeth mai dard hoga kyunki aapki umar ho gayi hai.. 😳😳😋😋😭🤭🤣🤣🤣

Ohh.. Dhwani ji aapne galat button press kar diya..🤣🥳🤣🤣

Vo bhi baar baar keh rahi hai usse buddha..🤩🤩🙈🤭🤣

Medam aap thik nahi hai varna ye buddha dikhata aapko apni jawani ka josh.. 🙈🤭🤣🤣🤣

Haayee loved his effect on her.. 🙈

So mukhi ne aakhir mana hii liya bawari ko ek bed share karne ke liye.. Aur ho bhi kyu na.. Mukhi ko pata hai konsa button press karna hai medam ko thik karne ke liye..🤣😆🤪

So so loved their teasing session di.. So so miss their teasing and tauji....Thank you for this.. 😘😘😘❤

Loved the dialogue di.. Such beautiful dialogue.. ❤

di aap kitna pyaara pyaara likh rahe hai sab kuch ... Kitni baar padho... Man hii nahi bhar raha.. ❤❤🤧

Maja aa raha hai.. ❤

Par itna chotu saath hii kyu.. 😒😒

Agli baar bada wala chaper maangta humko.. Plz plz update soonst.. Wait nahi hoga humse..🙈

Originally posted by: x-Nahima-x

Dude I was expecting lip lock and then full on make out session 💋

BTW is this not a mature content thread 😆

Sri, can we have a liplick please 😆

Srriiiii.. I just read 3rd part. 🥰🥰🥰🥰

Wow.. just wow.. 🤩🤩🤩

Memory no memory.. mukhi always has his effect on Bawri.. 🥰🥰

I love their playfullness, teasing...

Keep going.. 😃😃😃

Originally posted by: Sau25

Srriiiii.. I just read 3rd part. 🥰🥰🥰🥰

Wow.. just wow.. 🤩🤩🤩

Memory no memory.. mukhi always has his effect on Bawri.. 🥰🥰

I love their playfullness, teasing...

Keep going.. 😃😃😃

Thank you sayu....🤗

That's his effect on her...door se ek nzar dekh le yaha madam pighal jaati hai....😆

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

Thank you sayu....🤗

That's his effect on her...door se ek nzar dekh le yaha madam pighal jaati hai....😆

haaa yaar. inke eyelocks ke chalate hum pani pani hote hai.. 😳😳

Sri, next part..???

Kab tak ayega..??? 😕😕😕