FF..ft purvir - Our new lovestory..part 5 on pg 14 - Page 3

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: darkchocolates

This is so beautiful written☺️😳


Finally babies ko privacy mili...🥳

Damn Thanks to your version...This time it was Vir who lifted Purvi


So dreamy and toooo beautiful it is...❤️😳

The last part...They are meant to be together...❤️


Can't wait for the next part❤️🤪


Thanks ayu...🤗


Babies need privacy yaar..is baar seriously they should ask PPL to leave them alone....😆


They are meant to be together...no one can seperate them....


Will update the next part soon...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow sriiii.. thisnis really beautiful.. saba ki daya se to na but apki daya se privacy mili inn dono ko..


And yesss they are ment to be . Ethernal JOD..

Please upload next part super soon.. 🥰🥰

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Posted: 3 years ago
#23

Part 2


Viru...aap aaram kijiye...


Dhwani...pls aap mat kahiye ab to...waise hi baat kijiye jaise aap apni bawri se karte the...tabhi to yaad aayega na mujhe


Viru smiling on his bawri....thik hai...tu araam kar mein abhi aata hu...tere liye kuch khaane ke liye bhejta hun...


Dhwani... Ji...


Dhwani begins thinking about the same...agar mujhe yeh aur humara pyaar kabhi yaad nahi aaya to kya hoga...mukhiji mere loye zindagi bhar kaise wait kar sakte hai...yeh na insaafi hogi unke aur unke pyaar ke saath...par mein karu to karu bhi kya...wo mere liye ek ajnabee hi hai...jaanti hu kitna hun mein unhe...apne upar wo haq kaise dedu mein unhe...ek minute hum pati patni hai mtalab kya humare beech pati patni ka rishta bhi hua hoga...hey bhagwan mein bhi kya soch rahi hun...relax dhwani... relax...take a deep breath....


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Viru goes to Daksh...


Viru... Daksh


Daksh...mukhiji dhwani kaisi hai...matlab purvi ji kaisi hai...


Viru...bawri thik hai daksh...use pata chal gaya hai ki wo meri patni hai...par use kuch yaad nahi aaya hai...na humari shaadi..na humara pyaar...abhi araam kar rahi hai...


Daksh...thank god she is fine...mujhe sachme dar tha ki use kahi. Phir se attack na aa jaye...par chalo acha hai she composed herself to the truth...I am sorry mukhiji..mujhe nahi pata tha ki dhwani..matlab purvi aapki patni hai.. isilye mein usse shaadi karna chahta tha...wo...


Viru...tumhe safai dene ki zarurat nahi hai daksh...mein jaanta hun..tum ek ache insaan ho jo aurat ki izzat karna jaanta hai...arey mujhe tumhe shukriya bolna chahiye jo tumne meri bawri ka dhyaan rakha itne din...uske dost bakar humesha uska saath diya tumne...mujhe tumse ek vinti karni thi...


Daksh...request nahi mukhiji aap order dijiye...


Viru...wo mein chahta tha ki tum kuch din aur yaha ruko..waise bhi humare factory ka kaam shuru hone me time hai to tumhari zarurat hai uske liye aur bawri bhi abhi apne aap ko akela mahsoos karegi uske liye sab naya naya hai yeh sab... tum rahoge to thoda use bhi acha lagega...


Daksh...par mukhiji...aap..sure hai...matlab aap saara each jaante hai...phir bhi aap chahte hai ki mein purvi ke liye yaha ruku...


Nani...yeh kya bol raha hai Daksh...mujh laga tu mana karega...tu to...use sab sach pata chal gaya hai tera yaha koi kaam nahi hai...mukhi apni patni ka dhyaan rakh lega...tu chup chap chal...


Daksh...nani...dhwani se maine pyaar baadme kiya tha par pehle wo meri best friend hai aur uske liye mein rukunga...kyunki uski health kya hai mujhse ache se koi nahi jaanta...


Viru...dhanyawad daksh meri baat manne ke liye...manne tumhari aur bawri ki dosti se koi dikkat nahi hai kyunki tum dono par bharosa hai manne...


Daksh...aap thank you bolkar mujhe sharminda kar rahe hai mukhiji...yeh sab apni dosti nibhane ke liye kar raha hun...


Daksh and viru gives eachother a brotherly hug....


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Viru was sitting in his study...with panchyat files...Juhi and manas barge in...


Juhi...baba aap yaha kya kar rahe ho...


Viru...kyun ke hua Juhi...


Manas..aapko to hathi ke saath apne kamre me hona chahiye na...unki tabiyat kharab hai na...


Viru...par beta hathi aaram kar rahi hai na... use araam karne do..mein abhi uske paas jake ise disturb kyun karna hai na...kal subah mil lunga hathi se


Juhi...uffo baba manas ka matlab yeh hai ki aapko hathi ke saath usi kamre me rehna chahiye tabhi to hathi ko sab yaad ayega jaldi...aapke paas rahegi to...


Viru...par beta...hathi ko kuch yaad na hai...ise acha na laga to mera uske kamre me jaana....


Sudha...aisa kuch nahi hoga baba...bhale use kuch yaad nahi hai par hai to wo purvi hi na...


Viru..sudha tu bhi key bacho ke saath milke...


Sudha...bacho tum log jao veer bhayya ne bulaya hai unhe kuch dikhana hai tum dono ko...


J&M..ok bhabhi...


Juhi and manas leaves the room....


Sudha...baba mein jaanti hu. Mein aapse bohut choti hun yeh sab bolne ke liye lekin aap hi sochiye agar aap purvi ke aas paas nahi rahenge to use purani baatien kaise yaad ayengi...


Viru... Sudha...wo abhi bawri na hai wo dhwani hai..haa use sach ka pata chal gaya hai par phir bhi mein uske liye ajnabee hun...agar mein gaya waha aur usne mujhe galat samajh liya to...


Sudha..aisa kuch nahi hoga baba...aap koshish to kijiye...please baba...jayiye...uske saath jitna waqt bitayenge utna jaldi wo hum sabko pehchanegi...


Viru thinks for a while and knods a yes to what sudha said and leaves for his room where his bawri is residing as Dhwani....


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Dhwani just came out the washroom and was drying her hair standing infront of the mirror in thoughts of mukhi...thinking about how would have been their relationship in past...just then mukhi comes in to the room...the creek of the door brings dhwani out of her thoughts...she is shocked to see him at that time in her room...viru is also tensed how she will react to see him at this time ..he was scared what of she throws him out of the room...but to his surprise she dint say anything...she just turned her face to the other side..by which he understood that she dint have any issue on sharing room with him...and he closes the door...


Purvi turns the other side still thinking why is he here at this time...mein unhe jaane bhi nahi bol sakti...pati hai wo mere...inhone darwaza bhi band kar diya hai matlab kya mujhe inke saath room share karna padega...hey bhagwan..mujhe to pata bhi nahi hain humara rishta kaisa tha...kahin yeh us wajah se to nahi aaye hai..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Last paragrah is so nicely done. ❤️😳😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow.. Sri. Smitha is right.. last para is nicely wirtten . So many questions for Dwani.. 😃😃

I like the way you portreyed Sudha.. and I like Daksh being a good man. I hope saba keeps him this way .

Let's go for Part 3.. 😊😊😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sau25

Wow sriiii.. thisnis really beautiful.. saba ki daya se to na but apki daya se privacy mili inn dono ko..


And yesss they are ment to be . Ethernal JOD..

Please upload next part super soon.. 🥰🥰


Waise aajkal thoda privacy de rahi hai saba bhi..😆


Next part is updated..

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Posted: 3 years ago
#27

Wahhhhh

This one was nice

And last wala paragraph was 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻

Lekin cliffhanger pe kyu chora 😡😈😳👋🏻

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil


Waise aajkal thoda privacy de rahi hai saba bhi..😆


Next part is updated..

Yup. I read it... Left it on cliffhanger .. that too on Sunday night.. 😕

M sure you gonna make us wait lil longer for next one.. 😔

Monday n all..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Sri...🤗🤗


Aise kaun khatam karta hai...😈😈

Mujhe next part chahiye jald se jald...


But this was such a cuteeeeeee update...He started addressing her tu...Alag hi vibes deta hai...😳😎


And Aapke version ki Nani toh show jaise selfish nikli...😈🤪

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Posted: 3 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: darkchocolates

Sri...🤗🤗


Aise kaun khatam karta hai...😈😈

Mujhe next part chahiye jald se jald...


But this was such a cuteeeeeee update...He started addressing her tu...Alag hi vibes deta hai...😳😎


And Aapke version ki Nani toh show jaise selfish nikli...😈🤪

Lekin D saccha dost nikla.. 😃

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