To fit in- A Shivi SS(Part 4 page 14)completed - Page 13

Chikki, what an beautiful and emotional story💜

You described their feelings so beautifully 💜

Loved it 💜💜

Chikki🤗 I knew you completed this SS few days ago and it kept staring at me whenever I visited the forum. Always kept postponing to read it all in one go but was definitely going to read it at some point. Today is my lucky day and I am also upset with myself for not reading this SS sooner but finally glad that I got to it.

I would say this the best SS on ShiVi that I read which was dealt in an emotional and sensible manner. Their conversation says it all. That is exactly what you need to mend a relationship which has been written in the best way possible.

Looking forward to reading more such OS, SS or FFs from you❤️

Since I see Mommie around,

Just bringing your attention, read it in your free time okay ❤️ I would wait for your feedback

Originally posted by: Scarysea

Since I see Mommie around,

Just bringing your attention, read it in your free time okay ❤️ I would wait for your feedback

Will for sure check it out over the weekend!

Simple and beautiful ❤️

Originally posted by: MayaTharkiFairy

COMMUNICATION YAAASSSS!!!!! SOMEONE REALLY NEEDS TO TELL 🐒🦎 TO TALK LIKE HUMANS🤷‍♀️🤦‍♀️

THE ENDING WAS SOO PURE!!!!

LOVED IT......🤗❤🌹💃

Raavi's Colgate smile🥺

"Hey mhara bhogilaal. Yeh kya 18+ scene dikha rahe hai aap masoom bache ko."🤣Bechara har jagah iski innocent aankhen hi torture hoti hai😆

Loved it.....and if you dont mind RAAT KO KAISE CONTINUE KIYA....Update that also for this bacha😳

Glad that you liked it so much Maya

🤣🤣 I have never written an 18+ and I definitely don't know if I can actually do justice to that 😆

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Chikki, That was beautiful!!! ❤️❤️❤️

Loved the way he took care of her fears and bold he was. So glad he didn't turn to stuttering mess!

Hello ML..so glad you liked it

I dont like the stuttering mess either 🤣 Little nervousness okay what was with the stuttering 🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Sara.sara

I actually loved that nadi wala part ❤️❤️❤️

And also amazing ending ❤️

Lots of love and aise hi ache ache os and ffs bhejte raho😋😋

We have had so many references to Shiva's name and how he loves up to it so I tried that with Raavi- glad you liked it 😆

Hum try karenge 🤗

Originally posted by: StarLord_Owen

Read everything in a go!

And do I need to say I was legit crying in the second last chapter! Seeing Raavi’s loud and carefree spirit dying like that..it was such a torture 😭

My poor baby 😭

Even shiva was missing his old Raavi so much! 😭😭

But the last chapter

After they sorted everything..dil ko chain mil gya mere ❤️💕

And there cute confession..aye hayeee 🤗

Such an awesome story!!!

Can’t wait to read more fanfic by youuu!🤗

-love Rexie!

Rexieeee🤗 it's an honor to hear all this from you😃

Rexie I will try to write more. Meanwhile would you like to read my previous OS?😊

Originally posted by: Foxii

Toh abhi badal kyun rahi thi mere liye. Tera naam Raavi hai matlab nadi. Paani nahi hai ki jaha jayegi khud ko dhaal degi. Nadi hai jo apna rasta khud banati hai. Maine tujhe kaha tha pehle bhi ki asal dost woh hote hai jinhe aap waise pasand aaye jaise aap ho."

Wow👏👏

Loved it!

They were so cute while confessing

Krish hahaha too cute and scandalized

Do write more, Please

I am so so happy Foxi that you liked those dialogues those were my favorite while writing ❤️❤️

Yes yes I will write more. I am just a bit caught up these days. Hopefully you will like the future ones too😆