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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part 3


Dhwani is tensed seeing viru in the room....


Viru just goes to change without speaking anything...and here dhwani was still in her thoughts about why is he here tonight....why can't he sleep.in the same room where he was till now....


Viru comes out changed in his night clothes....he took a pillow from the bed and was about to go and sleep on the couch....


Dhwani...aap...aap bistar par so jayiye..couch pe mein so jaungi...


Viru..arey na mein thik hun...tanne aaram ki zarurat hai tu couch pe thik se na so payegi..


Dhwani..mukhiji meri baat maan jayiye...please aapki peeth pe dard hoga agar aap waha soye to...


Viru....to tanne yaad hai ki manne peeth pe dard hota hai...


Dhwani...aah...wo maine bas isiliye bola kyunki is umar me hota hai aise dard...


Viru...iss umar me matlab...tera matlab ke hai...


Saying he came to her arguing....


Dhwani...mera matlab wahi hai jo aapne samjha...


Viru...dekh bawri...matlab dhwani...ais umar le mT ja samjhi...mein utna bda bhi na hun jitna tu samjhti hai...


Dhwani...ab 4 bacho ke baap hai aap aur bolte hai umar na hui hai aapki....


Viru...tanne meri umar dekhni hai na...


Saying he goes forward...seeing him coming to her she steps backward and soon she is pinned to the wall and is in between him and the wall....


Viru...kyun mhaari umar dekhni thi na tanne...ib kyun chup hai...


Dhwani...mujhe jo laga wo maine bol diya...ab aap budhe hai to hai...


Viru couldn't take this and he leans forward and slowly...dhwani closes her eyes....he slowly proceeds to her neck and and whispers in her ears....his breath was enough for her to go crazy....


Viru...dekh...aaj bhi gaon ki choriya is mukhi ke liye pagal hai...to agli baar kabhi meri umar pe mat jana...


He leans backward and says he will sleep on the bed of she also sleeps there...


Dhwani...par mein kaise so sakti hun...I mean aapke saath bed kaise share karu...


Viru...kyun dar gayi kya...ya tere tau ki umar ke admi pe phisalne ka dar hai tanne...


Dhwani...aisa kuch nahi hai thik hai...mein bhi soungi bed pe aur saabit karungi mujhe aapse koi farak nahi padta...


Saying she goes and sits on her side of the bed...and viru walks with a Winning smile and prepares himself to sleep...


Dhwani sleeps in her side of the bed and turns her back towards viru...viru is still sitting leaning back to back rest reading a file...dhwani is observing him from the mirror and thinks...meine sach me inse pyaar kiya tha...matlab kitne Ajeeb hai...aise koi chidhta hai kya bhala ...par kitne cute lag rahe the jhagadte hue.. ekdum manas jaise....just then she observes hum from the mirror that he is stealing glanced at her...she turned to look at him and questioned hum by raising her eye brows...to which he knodded his head horizontally as nothing....she turned and was thinking that why is stealing glances...pata nahi kya hai yeh..khadoos...she dozed off staring at him through the mirror....viru also switched off the lights after sometime and he also dozed off...



I know it's a small update...bear with me...will try for a longer one tomorrow...🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: x-Nahima-x

kahin yeh us wajah se to nahi aaye hai..

🤣 You wrote the thoughts of all us forum girls 😆 I know you’re not going to SR so early you’re just teasing us 😈 how mean 🤣

Lovely update 👏


Thanks Nammu...🤗


SR itni jaldi nahi...let them fall in love then SR....😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Red_eyes

Love this part ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Will read part 2 tonight


Thank you mini...🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Sofia.K

O My ! This forum has so many writers & everyone is just fab !

Awesome Sri 👏

Thank you for writing such lovely shots!

Now I want next part as fast as the 2nd one arrived..SmileSmileSmile


Thanks sofi...🤗


Updated the next part...😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: PSP07

👌👏❤️... simple aur pyaara sa hai dono part😍

..aisa hi Daksh dekhna hai jab usko Bawari ke baare mein pata chalega..-ve nahi chahiye🤞🏻..Purvi aur D ki best friend bonding toh acchi hai bas agr ye D Chipku jaisi harkate band kare toh...aur Viru ke ghar mein waise hi🐍ki kami nahi hai😏

Yeh accha tha..Pur apne aur mukhi ke relationship ke baare mein soch rahi thi..itne saawal hai uske mann mein..next part jaldi se de do🙃👉👈

Best part jab Viru bolta hai "hum nayi kahani likhenge" then pura hamara rishta waala para .. banda hazaar sunne waale kaam karta hai...aise inn sab mein give up nahi karta😌..abhi dekhna hai Viru Bawari ko kaise yaad dilata hai.

Dhwani ne isko Dhawani ji ki jagah Dhwani bolne ko kaha..janab direct aap se tu par chale gaye🙃

Sudha ne Viru ko baba kahe bol diya..merko itna ajeeb laga sunn kar😅..jiju nahi bola toh baba kyu bol rahi hai yaar.. Mukhiji bol le..isko sab issi naam se jaante hai🥱


Thanks dear...🤗


Sudha nahi hai viru ki ..baba hi bolegi na... mukhiji kitna odd lagta hai...😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
#56

Great update Sri. Can just imagine PurVir arguing like this. Glad they slept on the same bed. I don't get why in some TV serials, couples sleep on the floor when they can easily share a bed. Waiting for more.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Lovely update

Babies ki argument 🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧 I am so missing their banters...Tauji 😭😭

Can't wait to see Dhwani falling for this Chidiyal Viru.... 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
#58

Sriiiiii 🤗🤗

Kitna pyara update

Agar ap ese chote se update daily doge to meri taraf se chocolate gift 😳


Kitne cutely argue kar rahe the

Viru kisi ko izzat se jaida der tak baat nai kar sakta 🤣🤪

And last wala scene manas comparison was so cute

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Posted: 3 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil


Thanks dear...🤗


Sudha nahi hai viru ki ..baba hi bolegi na... mukhiji kitna odd lagta hai...😆

Yeh baat Bawari ko bhi batao😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil


Thanks Nammu...🤗


SR itni jaldi nahi...let them fall in love then SR....😆

They already are in love Bawari just forgot she is 😆

Waiting to read your SR but still you updates are great ❤️

Edited by x-Nahima-x - 3 years ago

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