MY CRAZY FANFIC(part 3 is out)

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hi there guys.
i hate writing fanfics because it snatches all the freedom away from u.but its been a long time since i wrote a fanfic so i decided to start again.first is the precap of the story.
the real story will start from tomorrow.




one day kavya was going through the streets.suddenly anjali comes and tells kavya.
an:kavya plz dont go.ur mom gonna kill u.
ka:get off me.im sick of this shits.ok?
kavya went away.anjali kept crying.
kavya was going through the road alone suddenly he gets shot in the back by a stick.it seems to him the sky is breaking down in pieces.then..............dark.its dark all around
kavya:where am I ? kavya wakes up.it seems he is floating in the air.suddenly a voice came
"u r in the death valley "
k:what I can't be dead .im the boss of the show.without me the show his nothing.please give me a chance.
"you did very bad with ur wife anjali.do you know how much suffering she took for you but you?you are a criminal."
k:please please please mercy.give me one chance.
god:OK.I'll send you back to earth.but not as you i will send u into anjali's body.then you realize how tough it is for anjali.dismissed.
then everything becomes glowy for kavya.
(to be cont)
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Posted: 20 years ago
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isn't it like the new in which aftab comes back as antara. 😕
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Posted: 20 years ago
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😆 😆 This is weird and funny! I liked the bit abt him being the boss of the show. He is crazy if he thinks tht!! I say its equal between him and Anjali.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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part 1

he waked up in a strange bed.he opened his eye's slowly.and found himself in an unfamiliar place.everything looks new.
k:where am i?
he tried to get up.but entire body seemed heavy for him.he got up slowly and ......................found
k:hey.whats going on.aaaaaaa....my tummy.its so heavy.
he luked down...................
k:holy shit.............
his tummy is has became huge.he tried to get up quickly and
k:ouch!!
he got up from the bed after long strugle.
there was mirror in the wall.he looked it subconciously and..........
its a face woman.and its looking familiar.anjali....
k:anjali!!!!!!!! im anjali.........noooooooooooo!
then a shout came"anajli? what happened?"
yug ran towards him..........no no....her.........offf.what am i saying.it will be him.
he came and grabed him.and said"anjali?kia whua tha?"
k:no no im all right.its ok.
he tried get out from yug's hands.
y:r u sure?
k:yes yes.
y:hmmm.i understand.u were worring about kavya right? o come on anjali.dont worry.he is alright now.and its only for u.
k:what do u mean.what happened to me.i mean kavya.
y:oh...anjali u r asking me.kavya was shot and saved him.and took him to the hospital.he ok now.
k:he is concious?
kavya said with fear.he said to himself"if im conscious then anjali is within me.oh no."
(to be cont)

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Posted: 20 years ago
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cool iqbal...i loved da holy shit part... 😆 dat was so funny!!!!!!! i burst out laughin u noe!! 😆 😆 😆 neways.......it's rili gud......continue soon k.......
~Sabz~
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Posted: 20 years ago
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thx watever.
i will infact i will post two parts.
as i wrote them last night.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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comments guys.
if u have time.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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part 2

y:no no.he is still in coma.
k:hffff.ok.
y:what ok.u have to think about your child now.
our child"
kavya looked in the eye's.
y:yes.i know kavya is the real father of this baby.but actually im his real father.
kavya becomes shocked!!
yug kept saying.
y:kavya did very bad with u.he took our friendship as........why u cant forget him? he doesn't deserves ur love.
kavya is standstill in shock......
y:be free anjali.forget him.ok? take rest.
he goes by.
kavya is out of the world.he thoughts.im an.......im an... asshole.........yes thats the only word to describe myself.
he tried jumpstand.and got the prize.
k:ooooooo.i forgot i have a baby in my womb.
k:ok kavya.be patient.we will get out of this prob.just be cool......
he walked carefully towards the living room.
k:god!!!!!!! this is..........how anjali do this?
im.......doomed...if i have to walk with this potato sack in tummy any longer.
(to be cont.)
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Posted: 20 years ago
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😆 oh this is hilarious. i wish kavya could actually go through all of this... haha.
please continue
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Posted: 20 years ago
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thx.it feels good when people aprociate ur work.

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