ShiVi FS: Mending Our Broken Hearts - Last Part: Pg 11 - Updated 27/10 - Page 4

I'm falling hard for this story. ❤️

Beautifully written update💕🥰

Plus Anita is positive👍🏻 here, helping both of them

Beautiful 🥰

Loved it🤗🤗

Indeed, luck you for figuring out how you're going to show their reconciliation. Makers have really threw a challenge at you guys!

But going to this update, I loved it! Loved how you penned Shiva's pov, and him secretly pinning for Shiva. Anita is a cupid in this case and doesn't seem to have any ulterior motives! I hope Raavi sees him checking her out with the dance class. I am excited for the next part and can't wait. But I know I'll have to!

Very beautiful update! Shiva's feelings for Raavi and his pain was heart wrenching to read 💔

Looking forward to their reunion!

Originally posted by: sunsaathiyaa

I'm going to cry, scratch that, I AM CRYING 😭

I think I'm gonna drown in my own tears 💔

this was 🥰SO GOOD, TOO GOOD🥰

brb telling my guy that I depleted my tissue supply once again 🤡

Aww noooo, don't cry bub 🤗

I'm sooo glad you liked it even though it made you deplete your tissue supply 😆❤️

Originally posted by: sunsaathiyaa

I whole-heartedly agree, she needs to teach us

Hahaha you two are the last people to need me to teach you! I mean, have you read your stories?!! They're amazing!!❤️ I wish I was that good 😆

Originally posted by: barbieflora

I'm gonna borrow Sara's words here. You need to teach me how to write. This was soooo beautiful! 😍❤

I'm a sucker for angsty ones and the feelings were portrayed so beautifully! This is what I tried and failed to accomplish!!! I'm in love with this story😍❤

Thank you sm Kiaaa 🤗

I feel so relieved to hear you liked it!!

@bold- oh nooo, you make us feel more than enough, so no failure there!!❤️

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

I'm falling hard for this story. ❤️

Aww well I'm glad it had that impact on you 😆❤️

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Indeed, luck you for figuring out how you're going to show their reconciliation. Makers have really threw a challenge at you guys!

But going to this update, I loved it! Loved how you penned Shiva's pov, and him secretly pinning for Shiva. Anita is a cupid in this case and doesn't seem to have any ulterior motives! I hope Raavi sees him checking her out with the dance class. I am excited for the next part and can't wait. But I know I'll have to!

Thank you so much!!❤️

It makes me super happy to see you loved it!

I will try to update the next part soon enough 🤗