Short Stories: Trial by fire (Part 4, A& B - End, Pg 5 Updated: 30.5) - Page 7

Thank you ❤️

Originally posted by: Me000w

Speechless. But loved it! ❤️

I will definitely tag you going forward in the stories I write.

Sequal, coming up shortly. Shortly matlab maybe this weekend of next (sorry I am so slow)😆

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

I try to leave feedbacks on all FFs I read 😆

I don’t know how I missed this one till now 😆

Otherwise I would have left update wise reviews 😆

There were so many beautiful lines in each update ❤️

Yay 🥳

I wanted a sequel to this I’m glad you are planning one😎

Tag me whenever you post new fanfic 😳

Or I might miss that one too 🤦🏻‍♀️😅

Hey!

I'm honestly so glad you loved it 😳 This story is close to my heart maybe because I've had to sit down and get emotional to be able to pen down what I think these characters feel. I don't invest so much of myself in anything, especially TV and fictional characters, but for this story I wanted to and it makes me so happy to see that it's been loved. I will be writing more soon 😳

Originally posted by: hapc

I don't have words to praise you. I can only tell you that I regret reading this so late. This story took my breath away. The writing is beautiful. Their emotion, of pain, love, anger and the internal conflict was so well expressed. I just can't say anything more. Even the replies on the story are so well articulated, I must say the credit goes to you. I'll end by repeating that this literally took my breath away. Do write more.

What took the cake for me is I m sorry. Said by Raghav. Sometimes this little word does wonders n opposite person doesnt have to think before forgiving because of the emotion behind it. Even though Raghav was undergoing his pain. Even pallavi was not left untouched. This is what it makes the piece oh so beautiful n real. ❤️ the forgiver is also pained to see the guilty's pain. That's pallavi. ❤️

Hey!! Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I totally agree with everything you've said. Pain is often two way traffic, especially when it comes from the person you've once loved or had feelings for. To see them in pain is not a victory, and to forgive them when they finally say sorry is not a feat as well. Pallavi's forgiving nature needs to be highlighted at all times because if it weren't for her forgiving nature, the story just cannot progress. As for Raghav, the angst and pain he carries in his heart ends with Pallavi.

Thank you once again 🤗

Originally posted by: padmini92

What took the cake for me is I m sorry. Said by Raghav. Sometimes this little word does wonders n opposite person doesnt have to think before forgiving because of the emotion behind it. Even though Raghav was undergoing his pain. Even pallavi was not left untouched. This is what it makes the piece oh so beautiful n real. ❤️ the forgiver is also pained to see the guilty's pain. That's pallavi. ❤️

Thanks for taking time out to read my comment. And it is one of the wonderful pieces of writing I have come across so far in the forum.

Waiting for more wonderful writings from you thanks. 🤗

Thank you dear 🤗 reading comments from readers & replying is my fav part, you can write it to any length and I’ll love it ❤️

Do check out Memento Mori - it’s the sequel to this story, it’s ongoing with two last chapters left for closing. You can look for it under the stories index 😳

QUOTE=padmini92]

Thanks for taking time out to read my comment. And it is one of the wonderful pieces of writing I have come across so far in the forum.

Waiting for more wonderful writings from you thanks. 🤗

I m on it too. I have been reading it n waiting for your updates ❤️