Short Stories: Trial by fire (Part 4, A& B - End, Pg 5 Updated: 30.5) - Page 6

Originally posted by: Viewpoint

Also, I listened to Laal Ishq the whole time I wrote this piece. I love the song, I can play it on loop for one year. Or forever 😆 It took me 3 hours to conclude, which excludes the thinking process, but I thoroughly enjoyed writing this. I will always hold this very dear to my heart because sometimes it's more than a story, it's about the process and what you feel during the process.

I love writing and I'm happy this place lets me do it.

Laal Ishq is indeed one of those few songs which we once hear--imbibes in our mind forever---no matter what the mood is---this song clearly suits it all--such a soothing song

This story is one of the story which I will remember forever and I know this feeling--holding whatever we write dear to our heart

I love your writing too and I'm glad you are giving us such amazing pieces of your writings here

I am quite excited for the sequel--mainly because of the fact--how will Pallavi uproot her life she made in 2 years staying in New York--that too all by herself---and the journey of RaghVi from there onwards....

Hahaha yes the thinking already started and I’ll update soon 😆

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Wow! Looks like you already know what I have in my mind😳

I totally agree with your feels about the old Amma. She was fierce & Raghav looked like a scared cub infront of her😆

Chup chup 😲End ki koi baat nahi karega abhi. Abhi bahut jeena hai humare show ko

I'm so glad you are going to write about the estranged siblings as well. Now, I can't wait to read it. Get on it already, will ya😉

I’m so glad you enjoyed reading this and your lovely comments. Broadway...wow ☺️

Originally posted by: MinervaMcG

Oh, how did I miss this splendid story.. the style of writing is so brilliant, prose and poem to depict the emotions ❤..I felt like I'm seeing a musical or a Broadway show where the passionate characters are singing their heart out to put across the point..I think my favorite chapter would be the confrontation. No words to express, just that it was so lovely..thanks for this !

I agree about the song. I’m yet to meet someone who doesn’t like this song.

Bold - I’m touched 😳🤗

Stay tuned for the sequel. June is a busy time in my line of work but I’m sure I’ll figure it all out coz these characters are my latest fav in a long long time. Raghav is by far the best character I’ve seen in a long time, and the actor.....😳

Originally posted by: ReemShah

Laal Ishq is indeed one of those few songs which we once hear--imbibes in our mind forever---no matter what the mood is---this song clearly suits it all--such a soothing song

This story is one of the story which I will remember forever and I know this feeling--holding whatever we write dear to our heart

I love your writing too and I'm glad you are giving us such amazing pieces of your writings here

I am quite excited for the sequel--mainly because of the fact--how will Pallavi uproot her life she made in 2 years staying in New York--that too all by herself---and the journey of RaghVi from there onwards....

Omg 😳

This is so brilliant 👏

I have no words

This is the angst I live for ❤️

Pallavi settling abroad

RR repenting and conveying it silently ❤️

And then dreamy reunion

I loved your way of writing this 🥰 😍

Please do write more on Raghvi ❤️

Thank you dear! 😳 I value feedback SO MUCH and when it’s good feedback, I’m on cloud 9.

I’m preparing a sequel to this SS. The end had no confession, just an apology, there’s still a lot they must live through 😎

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

Omg 😳

This is so brilliant 👏

I have no words

This is the angst I live for ❤️

Pallavi settling abroad

RR repenting and conveying it silently ❤️

And then dreamy reunion

I loved your way of writing this 🥰 😍

Please do write more on Raghvi ❤️

Thank you 😳

Originally posted by: I-Got-You

Brilliant 👏

Speechless. But loved it! ❤️

Originally posted by: Viewpoint

Thank you dear! 😳 I value feedback SO MUCH and when it’s good feedback, I’m on cloud 9.

I’m preparing a sequel to this SS. The end had no confession, just an apology, there’s still a lot they must live through 😎

I try to leave feedbacks on all FFs I read 😆

I don’t know how I missed this one till now 😆

Otherwise I would have left update wise reviews 😆

There were so many beautiful lines in each update ❤️

Yay 🥳

I wanted a sequel to this I’m glad you are planning one😎

Tag me whenever you post new fanfic 😳

Or I might miss that one too 🤦🏻‍♀️😅

I don't have words to praise you. I can only tell you that I regret reading this so late. This story took my breath away. The writing is beautiful. Their emotion, of pain, love, anger and the internal conflict was so well expressed. I just can't say anything more. Even the replies on the story are so well articulated, I must say the credit goes to you. I'll end by repeating that this literally took my breath away. Do write more.