RAGHVI TS : UNTIL I BLEED OUT II DARK II COMPLETED - Page 9

Originally posted by: Mihika

Uni.....I am so sorry I have to stop midway ..... It is dark and I just can't bear too much of dark and angst. I am really sorry dear but I don't even watch war and action movies.😭

But you have written it really well sweety....🤗

Mihika Di that's okayy. I was aware that it might be a little too dark for some people. I was just trying a new genre and you don't have to feel bad about it.

Even i can't handle dark and angst much but i wanted to give it a shot.

Originally posted by: Mysterie_girl

Can I please request you to add more of FarVi in your coming works 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

I would really love too. I am a fan of their bond so you don't have to request me for that😳

Firstly thankyou so much for the tag!!!!

And now coming to the story then it was so like a movie, the action and the emotional scene!!!

The part where their daughter was introduced was my favorite and her name Saishi was just the cherry on the cake!!!!

Loved this so much!!!!

Originally posted by: unicornwriter

aww thank you

Even i hate sad endings but i really wanted to try this genre too.

I have never seen dil Bechara , my heart's too soft to watch

Me too😭

The last movie with sad ending ,

I saw was Sanam Teri Kasam

After that for almost 1or2 days I wasn't able to get over That film😒

😭

Atfer that I never saw any movies with sad ending😂

In short himat hi nhi hai 🤣🤣

Tadak tadak tadak!!! If anyone is wondering what this is... its my heart breaking. This was so tragically beautiful. My chest is aching for Raghav... jo mar gaya use toh mil jaegi shaanti but the person left behind has to live with a mountain over their chest... suffering for the rest of their life.

Im glad you gave Raghav a reason to live again. A child... someone who could probably sustain the little pieces of his tattered soul. Beautifully done.

I'll go cry in the corner...

I bawled. I bawled, and bawled, and bawled.

Beautifully written. I still can't wrap my head around the story simply because it would be heartbreaking to watch this on screen. I could visualize the entire story and you did RaghVi complete justice. ❤️

Sama, this was such a wonderful piece.

I appreciate your effort to write something out of your usual genre. And believe me it have turned out amazing.

You have portrayed the terror, pain and revenge very beautifully.

Thank you for giving a beautiful ending to a angst filled story.

I don't wanna jinx it by writing more. Now let me reread every part together.

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

Firstly thankyou so much for the tag!!!!

And now coming to the story then it was so like a movie, the action and the emotional scene!!!

The part where their daughter was introduced was my favorite and her name Saishi was just the cherry on the cake!!!!

Loved this so much!!!!

Thank you soo much ❤

Originally posted by: Chaitra_25

Me too😭

The last movie with sad ending ,

I saw was Sanam Teri Kasam

After that for almost 1or2 days I wasn't able to get over That film😒

😭

Atfer that I never saw any movies with sad ending😂

In short himat hi nhi hai 🤣🤣

I get it but i am mixture of all genre so even sad movies for me are fine until it gets too much for me to take in

Originally posted by: AnushkhaA

Tadak tadak tadak!!! If anyone is wondering what this is... its my heart breaking. This was so tragically beautiful. My chest is aching for Raghav... jo mar gaya use toh mil jaegi shaanti but the person left behind has to live with a mountain over their chest... suffering for the rest of their life.

Im glad you gave Raghav a reason to live again. A child... someone who could probably sustain the little pieces of his tattered soul. Beautifully done.

I'll go cry in the corner...

Anushkha 🥺🥺. My goodness.

I am so sorry to have broken your heart. I never knew it was gonna impact everyone soo much 🥺🥺