RAGHVI TS : UNTIL I BLEED OUT II DARK II COMPLETED - Page 8

superbly written 😍

Although it makes feel sad to think that pallavi was pregnant in our crisp white shirt which initially I thought would be a fun ride for them but the way you have merged with this story , it's amazing

There couldn't have been a better ending than this 👏👏👏 I have a hope that one day he will meet his skd and his unborn baby in some other world

Can I request you one thing 😢😢

Don't worry I will not pester you to make pallavi alive. It's something else

Uni.....I am so sorry I have to stop midway ..... It is dark and I just can't bear too much of dark and angst. I am really sorry dear but I don't even watch war and action movies.😭

But you have written it really well sweety....🤗

Originally posted by: Shri_12

That was a fantastic end 👏

Saishi, don't mind but I laughed at this bit.😆

Loved it

Thank you

I knowww i was soo confused for their daughter's name but then i was like let me keep it Saishi only itna dimaag nahin laga rahi

Originally posted by: Mysterie_girl

Samaaa

Main kya karu tumharaaaa

Woh meri bhabhi hai Anna. Agar aaj ruk gaya toh poori zindagi Bhabhi ko aur apne Allah ko muh nahin dikha paunga.

Ohhh...Farhad can never ever going to leave Raghav. Period.

And Raghav without any arguments let him do what he wants to.

The minute details, photo frame gayab tha...and he caught it

Catching Jay Krishna Rao from the video of few seconds

Farhad, Harish and gang knocking out and damn, setting the fire 🔥🔥🔥🔥

And WHAT WAS THAT...she was pregnant...damn

I almost cried when Raghav asked about it to Amma 😭😭

Fabulously written 👏👏

Aww thank youuu

Farhad and Pallavi's bond has a special place in my heart and yes he's never gonna leave Raghvi. Period.

I had to connect it through the previous one cause the idea initially came from their hence the pregnancy thing.

Originally posted by: ReemShah

Sama--I am crying--I am not an emotional person but damn this made me cry

I read the whole thing from the beginning--the pain, the emotions--it was too overwhelming

uk when I read that there is this girl Saishi--a glimmer of hope came that maybe Pallavi is alive but then by the end she is alive in their hearts and house

Farhad and uske jazbaat towards Pallavi--especially when he says Allah wont forgive him wala line was the perfect thing needed to highlight their relationship

This was truly an overwhelming and emotional read and it really turned out well

Sama🤗

Thank youu

Aww reem please don't cry. I was pretty upset too when i was writing it but i really wanted to try out something different.

Originally posted by: Wilddreams

Sama 🤗🤗

You made me cry girl 😭😭

Pallavi ke saath saath unka baby bhi chala gaya 😭😭

Raghav's state after discovering Pallavi's body was so heartwrenching 😭😭

Raghav Rao's Beast mode to revenge 👍🏼👍🏼

Krishna Rao deserved that painful death 😈

Finally Raghav found his jeene ki wajah after Pallavi

SaiShi is cute ❤️❤️

You're gifted writer Sama 😳

Love all your stories and one shots ❤️❤️

My Goodness please don't say such sweet things. I feel soo overwhelmed right now after reading everyone's comments. I am glad that soo many of you actually liked it because somewhere i was scared that people might not be able to take it in or read it.

Originally posted by: unicornwriter

Aww thank youuu

Farhad and Pallavi's bond has a special place in my heart and yes he's never gonna leave Raghvi. Period.

I had to connect it through the previous one cause the idea initially came from their hence the pregnancy thing.

Can I please request you to add more of FarVi in your coming works 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

Originally posted by: Milalal27

this was overwhelming, i am in shock and in awe. 😭

Very heartbreaking to read, but ending was bitter sweet. ❤️

Thank you so much

Originally posted by: Chaitra_25

Awesome 👍

I hate sad endings 😭😭😭

😭thats the reason I have never watched Dil bechara😒

aww thank you

Even i hate sad endings but i really wanted to try this genre too.

I have never seen dil Bechara , my heart's too soft to watch

Originally posted by: Sunaina7

superbly written 😍

Although it makes feel sad to think that pallavi was pregnant in our crisp white shirt which initially I thought would be a fun ride for them but the way you have merged with this story , it's amazing

There couldn't have been a better ending than this 👏👏👏 I have a hope that one day he will meet his skd and his unborn baby in some other world

Can I request you one thing 😢😢

Don't worry I will not pester you to make pallavi alive. It's something else

Thank you. I am sooo happy that you liked it and i hope i did not ruin your Crispy White Shirt OS by this.

Yes sure you can request me anything. Just PM me.