ShiVi TS: Kuch toh tha tere mere....Darmiyaan||Last prt pg 11 [27/09] - Page 6

Originally posted by: sunsaathiyaa

I've barely written 100 words babe 🤣

& my guy has been ✨distracting✨ me 🤦‍♀️

so, I really 🍩 know when I'll be done 🥺

maami.. a cupid? 🤡

why? just why? 😂

That is the best form of distraction! I can't even blame you for being distracted.! 😆

Do not ask why🤣🤣

Originally posted by: barbieflora

That is the best form of distraction! I can't even blame you for being distracted.! 😆

Do not ask why🤣🤣

I know 🥵❤️‍🔥

I'm not gonna ask why 🤣

Loved the story so far. ❤️

The pace in which you've written was soothing; slowly one detail after the other, without any hurry. It was beautiful. The portrayal of Shivi's emotions and consciousness were perfect.

Krish - Raavi conversation was so touching.

You've got a nice craft with the words.

Waiting for the next chapter...

I feel bad for both of them🥺🥺

Alag ghadhe hai yaar😆

Krish hi apna smart hai😎

i love krish here

Heyyyyloooooo 😔

Nikki puttar 🤗

Kabhi aao iss gali 😭

It's nice piece

I don't know why you stopped it in between

Eagerly waiting for you to finish it

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

Loved the story so far. ❤️

The pace in which you've written was soothing; slowly one detail after the other, without any hurry. It was beautiful. The portrayal of Shivi's emotions and consciousness were perfect.

Krish - Raavi conversation was so touching.

You've got a nice craft with the words.

Waiting for the next chapter...

Awww thanks sweetie! ❤

I'm glad u liked it!

Your words are so encouraging 💖🤗

Originally posted by: DesiiiiGirllll

I feel bad for both of them🥺🥺

Alag ghadhe hai yaar😆

Krish hi apna smart hai😎

Trueee 😂

Poor babies. I put them through a lot of pain, I've noticed😆

Originally posted by: barkhaa_tpm

Heyyyyloooooo 😔

Nikki puttar 🤗

Kabhi aao iss gali 😭

Aa rahe hai behen😆