~*Pyaar...In Progress*~

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Posted: 17 years ago
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guys its not my fic isse meine nahi likha hai.......its my frnd "zahras" fic she is not able to post here
so she told me i post her fic here.
im posting 1 part here......


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Posted: 17 years ago
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"Chapter 1"
"Common!! Get up!....NOW!!"
"yeah dad!...just five minutes…",saying this she buried her head into the pillow
"common beta!!...today is the first day of your new school, don't you think you should go early just in case something goes wrong" her dad replied, sounding more worried than his daughter.
"dad chill yaar! ... why are you getting tensed…I still have three hours left until school starts!!...you go and try waking bro up…by the time he's up I'll be ready…"she replied sounding a bit irritated as her father wasn't letting her sleep.
"Fine, but if I don't find you on your feet within the next one hour…"
"yeah dad…okay…now plzzz will you let me sleep", saying this she snuggled back into her bed.

ONE HOUR LATER

"betaaa…", her dad called out again.
"Yeah dad I'm awake….you go and make the impossible happen!", she replied , getting out of her bedding
"Good you got up, now please come and help me!", her dad replied sounding kind of tired.
"Kyun dad??...kya hua??..", she asked pretending to be innocent.
"Stop acting like you don't know, now please come", her dad pleaded.
"Fine dad, chalo", saying this she got out of bed and walked towards her brother's room.
"Beta get up!!!", he yelled.
"Common bro!...get up!!".
"yeahh….plzz just some more time!...", he replied in a deep and sleepy tone.
"No Armaan!! Get up!!", his dad replied, "Naina, samjhaona isse".
"Dad main kya kar sakti hoon??" and then she suddenly said, "*idea*!!"
"kya?!",her dad asked anxiously.
"paaniiii"...
"paani?? paani chahiye?...neeche jaa kar peelo!!".
"dad!!! mujhe paani nahi peena!..hume armaan ko pilana hai!!"…
"ohhhhhhh…"her dad replied after he understood naina's plan
"hmmm!!"…
Armaan was soundly sleeping when *SPLASH*…
"huh?!!...what the hell man?!!", Armaan replied , completely drenched and sounding really frustrated.
"Good Morning!!", Naina and her dad replied together giving him a very sweet smile.
Armaan gave them a 'I'll-kill-you' look to which they replied rather calmly and walked out of the room.
"Now both of you get ready and I'll get your breakfast ready…and don't go back to sleep!!!"
"yeah dad!!" , both of them replied together and went to get ready.
After about fifteen minutes Naina walked out of her room wearing her school uniform. It was a light blue shirt with black-grey pants. After another ten minutes Armaan walked out of his room his hair still slightly wet. His uniform was the same, only that he had tucked in his shirt while Naina had left it out. He ran his hand through his hair and sat down at the table and gave his dad and Naina a sweet smile looking much more calm .
"Good morning dad!, yo sis!!" , he greeted them which gave the other two the confirmation that he was not angry any more.
"hey bro!!.. Good morning!"
"hi beta!" and all of them got back to their plates.
But just then armaan said, "Don't worry both of you!!...actually...start worrying!!...because its not over yet…I'll take my revenge…"…and he smiled at them…to which naina looks at her dad and gives him a helpless look…
credits:zahra
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awsome mindblowing ,,do do conti nue plsssssssssss
and yippe i am the first too reply!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
waiti ng 4 next part 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it superb....loved d mix of dmg n lrl......
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys!!...I'm zahra...and this is my fic...i'll be posting it here as well..:)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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"Chapter 2"(19.4.08)
The three of them sat in the hall which was pretty big. They had a one floor bungalow. Armaan and Naina's rooms were situated in the top floor where as their Dad's room was on the ground floor. With them lived their ramu kaka who was no less than another family member. Armaan and Naina's mom had left them and gone away when they were very young. She hadn't informed anyone about it. No note or anything to tell them where she had gone. Their dad, Mr. Aryan Malhotra, did not want her presence to be felt any where around them after what she had done. He tried to destroy every evidence of their relationship. He never let his children feel the need of a mother. But some where deep down in his heart, he always wanted her to come back, to come back in his life , in his children's lives. He always kept them happy, but at the same time he kept them in control. He had trained his children well and they knew their limits too.

Aryan Malhotra was a very successful business man. He remained busy 24*7 but he still had time for his family. Due to business purposes Aryan had to travel a lot and he never felt like leaving his family behind. So, every time he went anywhere he took them along. But that was only if the stay was a long one. And so was the case this time. He had come for important business work which would take him really long. He shifted with his family. This time their stay was estimated to be about 1 or 1 years. His children loved spending time with him and loved traveling with him. It was difficult to adjust in a new atmosphere every time. A new school, a new home, and new friends. But they managed, for their father because they couldn't see him sad. They always wanted to keep him happy and support him in everything he did so that he wouldn't feel the empty space their mom left when she just vanished from their lives.

Armaan was the elder child and he was in the last year of his schooling, 12th, and Naina was two years younger to him and she was in the 10th. Their father was very doubtful of bringing them along this time because it was an important year for both of them. They were going to write their boards. But they insisted on moving with him and after much persuasion he finally agreed to bring them along to the city of Chennai, where he was starting a new factory for his company. Today was their first day of their new school. Chennai was the city from where Aryan had started his journey of life. It was the city in which he stepped into the real world. So this place had lots of memories stored.

After they were done with their breakfast, they moved towards the garage. Both of them removed their cycles. Both armaan and naina wanted to do something to prevent global warming. So as far as possible they used to avoid using any automobiles. Their dad really appreciated their effort and was really proud of them. But today their dad stopped them
"Kids, today you are not going to go by cycle!!".
"But why dad??", both of them asked him together, wondering why he refused.
"Do you know the way to your new school??!!", he replied with a mock.
"Oh yeahhh, forgot!" , they replied.

They then went by car to their new school. When the car stopped, they got down and looked at the big building in front of them with a big board which read, 'St. Michaels Academy, higher secondary school, Chennai'. Armaan and Naina looked at each other and then looked at the building and then started walking inside. They had reached pretty early thanks to their dad, as he woke them up really early, so the school was a little empty. Both of them found their respective class rooms and they went there.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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loved it
ar r also included 😛

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