Entwined RaghVi Drabbles 2.0 ~ Readers Desk 🎊❤🥳 - Page 71

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

Yup 😆

Doing a good job

Waise tum celebration thread pe nahi aayi ? 👀😂

@bold: Meri sangat ka asar 🤣

Originally posted by: MsPrez

Consummation toh hogaya. I think ab ek next day kuch hona chahiye. Since Pallavi is supposedly a virgin, so usska next day reactions and how Raghav handles everything...yeh sab likhna chahiye.

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

Where are you guys ?

Present ma’am 🙋‍♀️ 😆

I’m currently out of my creative fuel but I’ll make a comeback soon!

I’ll try an be active on this thread too 😁

You both have my heart❤️

I didn't want it to finish but continue ni rakh sakte warna last time wala case ho jayega😆

Beautiful and so intense....👏

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

True 😆 but Mandaar is gone na

Ya kidnap karne wapas aayega ? 😆

I wasn't well, still recovering 😭

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

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Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

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I've gotten very busy. So I couldn't read all drabbles properly. I'll comment 5 at a time now😆

@unicornwriter: Pallavi was on a roll. Loved how she gave it back to Mandhaar and VD. I liked how she even yelled at Raghav for not telling her about the plan and finally they came together.❤️ Aai is obviously always amazing. My favourite part was the decision to bring in Ved. Love the twist 👏

@MissWiseUnicorn: Ahahah Ved called Pallu BhabhiJi. 😆 I liked how Pallu was the mastermind here. Smart and Brave. Also Ved.. brilliant character and I liked the role you gave him in your story. But what is his Achilles heel? Hmm. Hope the next writers clarify.

@MsPrez: You're the queen of tying things up without dragging. Loveddd how you exposed Mandhaar and brought out the Devyani's death truth in one part. Finally RaghVi can relax.

@ReemShah: Finally RaghVi admitted their mistakes. I'm glad they didn't pretend like it was only one of their faults and then they took ownership and then the romance☺️ They really need a vacation.

@Mihika: Finally a funny part😆Calling her puffer fish was so Raghav and he totally deserved to be chased with a wiper. But it was the only thing he could do so that he could get to the meeting so I understand.😆 Daily exercise also complete.

@evilxbalaa: It was definitely not a disappointment. I liked the way you shifted the tone from comedy to serious. Something about the way Raghav asked Pallavi about what happened warmed my heart. The entire part felt very sweet.

@MsPrez: 😆😆 Poor Raghav. Pallavi tortured him for a minute. The ending though☺️ Set up for some romantic parts to follow.

@christobelle: ☺️ That was hot. I really liked how Raghav was gentle with her and taking her permission. It was really steamy but also not cheap so hats off for that.👏

@WildestDreams: Once again very steamy but not cheap. I liked how Pallavi was bold in this part. And the ending a simple I love you is enough for these two.❤️

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

They did deed before conclusion of story 🤣

Thank god warna typically story ends at consummation 🤣

I don’t know who had mentioned this but they deed before the 24-72 drabble range 🤣😈😎

Kaash itv mein bhi aisi speed hoti