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Posted: 3 years ago
#21

Omg, Pixie!!! This was amazing! Liked how both realized their own mistakes and took steps towards the other to be with each other!

I know it's a drabble, but please please please convert this into something more. Pretty please!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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this is emotional and beautiful......had tears in my eyes.....their misery being apart....realization and both meting half way is amazing.......

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Its so beautifully written, 😍😍

Loved how you portray the emotions of both of them.

Only if they show something like this in actual .

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Pixie this is so awesome, I can't😭💔 nnd much needed after today's episode.🥺 thanks for writing this. Shiva finally understood his mistakes and want to repent. Raavi can't live without him uff so painstakingly beautiful.❤❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is amazing...❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️


Touched my heart.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Loved this sm! You portrayed their emotions so well, I felt their pain.


The ending was beautiful! Loved how they met each other halfway, it's significant in more ways than one i.e. them taking steps towards each other, both literally and metaphorically, and meeting in the middle to give their marriage and hopefully, love, a chance!❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#27

Sooo beautiful🤗 Loved it dear❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sunsaathiyaa

THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL 🥺❤️

LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE 🥰

great now I've to explain to my guy why I'm crying when he comes after walking the dogs 🤡

Thank you so much saraa❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Scarysea

Caught you in 7mins Pix

I love this- it properly showed both Shiva and Raavi's feelings ..their breakdown and their pain too❤️

Thank you so much Chikki ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

pixu this was so damn beautiful 😭 I loved it - the way you described raavi's feelings and then switched to shiva's - it was amazing

the way they thought about their past, how they have been there for each other but have hurt each other as well - felt so real

the title is so apt - without each other they are so empty

I am so glad both of them realized their respective mistakes and ran towards each other

this sukoon - this calm after the storm, this is what I want and you penned it down so beautifully

thank you so much pixu 🤗 dil khush kardia

Thank you so much aashu ❤️

I have a lot of hopes from this track

I want to see them pining for each other, missing each other like crazyyyy.

Hopefully the makers do justice this time.

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