ShiVi OS: Dheere Dheere Se Tera Hua|Bonus Chap - Pg 7 | Updated 19/8 - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hayeee really beautifully written❤️

Loved it!


The ending though🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awww so cute and beautiful ❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Lovely! Loved the part about Raavi taking the time off to grow and stand in her own two feet! This deserves an epilogue! Please!!!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Soo beautiful, loved it 💜💜

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Posted: 3 years ago
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lovely....communication between dem was superb

fainting mami is most awesome sight

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is a lovely OS! Raavi did not agree to marry Shiva when Dhara proposed, took a break, assessed her life fir 3 years, slowly fell in love with Shiva and Shiva too waited all along for her. Isn’t this the most logical way to show their love and growth in the relationship. Thank you for writing this.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShinyShine

Loved it

Soo beautiful


We love soft Shiva

Really loved it 😍


Don't we love fainting Mami 🤣


Thank you! Soft Shiva is a sight to behold!❤️


Hahah wherever maami goes, she tries to machao some bawaal so I was like isko faint hi kar deti hoon 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

ahhh this was so cute and wholesome

I loved how they grew in love without each other - it only made it stronger when they were back together

I'm a sucker for the forced marriage troupe but I would have loved to seen how they would gravitate towards each other without getting married - you showed it so beautifully

amazing os jaan 🤗


Thank you sm 🤗


I have to agree with you on the forced marriage trope, I can't but love it every time 😆 However, I always wondered how their story would have unfolded if Dhara didn't jump in between! Sometimes, I think it would have been better for them that way because of all the MU's between them now *sighh* Hope Pandyland treats these two well in the upcoming episodes!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: funny_fubar

Loved this smiley27 It felt like comfort food I did not know I was craving for smiley36

Your writing and the way your stories flow have so much warmth to it. Great job smiley20

PS. Is your name Shayna? 🙈🙈🙈 I am very very sorry 🥺🥺🥺 I know I have asked your name before, but I am terrible with names


Thank you! I'm so happy to hear its comparison with comfort food, makes me feel super giddy because who doesn't love comfort food?😆


Haha and no worries! It happens, yes my name's Shyna (actually a nickname)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: nafees5

Hayeee really beautifully written❤️

Loved it!


The ending though🤣


thanks sm love!❤️


The ending had to be done 😉 maami needed to be removed for us to escape her petty tantrum 😆

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