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Posted: 3 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Shimmer_sault

just wrote of your wish of a Bori closeness template and you are here


Veer whatever he says he does not do


cameras in mansion he never checked

take care of her she skipped him


so we may get a hug but in form of Veer and Devi when he knows she is Rani


no butterfly kisses


earlier Rani was so lovestruck before the became one, now they are one she is busy doing other duties

the way he drank Devi coffee later because it was like his wifey coffee making and then calling her

was nice


Romance VeeRani is about emotions not of physical closeness that is what CV are stressing


CV's have scripted his character as weak...

Here that overall closure is missing... Be it

  • Episode emotions
  • Authentic and convincing dialogues for each character
  • Authentic dialouges for particular scenes
  • Over all fun
  • the talk with or without words within characters
  • Deep hurt and care
  • Carry over.... Be it episodes or scenes
  • Depth of Emotions between each characters be it fun, fights romance, understanding,.....

That palpitations feeling... Lacks...

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Posted: 3 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Summer_bunny

Yes, even I wanted teej celebration😑, in fact I thought that shagun ki thaal was being prepared for teej itself..You know I was eagerly waiting for gangaur also, but they couldn't shoot that due to pandemic😬..But teej?! They are missing all the important rajput festivals.

YRKKH always celebrate every Marwadi functions in their show n that functions n their looks for these functions they show in very traditional style but here idiot CVS never give any Rajsthani functions this is one of the reason their trp is not increasing.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Shimmer_sault

Rani is always overconfident

she has done till now 5 mistakes and grave ones


she should understand if anything happens to her or she is missing noone will know of DV missing unless the bizman in Delhi calls again and Vik or Veer picks up


Writers don't get it this is silly and basic disgusting pattern they follow in each shows... Be it preeta, pallavi, pragya.. So on now our rani not new... This is Worn out commonly used characteristics for FL...ok if they lack in New ideas then on the way twists it by giving fresh zest to the end results...

No need of showing same mistakes of FL again and again it will lose the purity of characters and the scenes...

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Posted: 3 years ago
#84

Today's episode was amazing.❣️

Loved Rani and Veer's conversation on call when he was going to the police station. Veer was behaving like a baby who is very much upset for not getting his favourite toy he wants to keep close to him. And here the toy is his own wife Rani.♥️

He was being too stubborn to get her back because he was hurt thinking that she wants space that too from him. His hurt as as person who loves her the most and dies to get her love all the time and on the other side his responsibility as a husband to give her space if she needs, he can't make her his slave, he can't tie her with him everywhere and everytime was shown quite in a good way.

Liking the changes Ranisa is showing be it because of mausajee or Devi. She was smiling when she was having a conversation with Devi. She never used to smile whenever she had to talk with her servents but for the first time she was looking at a person as a human being not as a servent or a owner, keeping aside the level of status. She is tolerating mausajee just because of Veer for sure but all these things which are bringing changes in her is not because of Veer or for Veer. I never wanted them to white wash Rajeshwari this much sooner but the way they are doing it is quite acceptable for me.💫

The way mausajee told Champa to clean the floor nicely and shifted couches aside was very realistic. We too sometimes leave some places while cleaning like under the bed or couches, corners and so many other places or we don't clean them on a regular basis. So, it was shown realistically.👍 And when he gave the list to Champa and told her to get all the things written in that otherwise you will be cursed by matarani not me was good, I liked that. And thank god he didn't fart today I would have died otherwise.🤢

Liked the way Rani thought that Vikram helped her unknowingly I too thought the same at that very moment. It reminded me of their "dever-bhabhi always available for eachother" bond. They really give devar-bhabhi vibes sometimes.😍

Champa is in a side role for sure but for an actor his/her role doesn't decide his/her acting capabilities. Champa was so good today. Her expressions were on point.❤️

Today's Veer and Rani scenes were mind blowing. Them missing eachother in night, changing position continuously when they were on the bed, was so lovely. The way Veer said "Vapis aaiye aap, chhodunga nahi main aapko" it has my whole heart.♥️ And it can be taken in two ways, first as she has troubled him a lot so that he will show his full anger on her for leaving him alone whenever she will come back and second as whenever he will get her, he will keep her so close to him so that she can never leave him like the way she did this time.❤️

And when Devi gave him coffee it reminded him of Rani and the coffee made by her. In the flashback, when he first spit the coffee out of his mouth but then he looked at her and realised that she has made it only for him and with so much of love so he corrected himself and appreciated her efforts and here too first he spit it out but then he drank all of it even after knowing it's taste. This shows that it doesn't matter what he has to face he is always ready for anything when it comes to his wife be it any problem or things he usually doesn't like. Rani is above everything for him.❤️

Everything was on its place today. Megha and Fahmaan were awesome like always. But it's high time they should start giving RanVeer's romantic moments including some physical touch. Its essentially required now.

Edited by LoveYourself_20 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#85

LoveYourself here you turned to LoveEveryone


Awesome write-up well worded .................. no word to express my thanks


Please put it up in the Review Thread, for sure the cast and crew will look it as their way forward and appreciation from you, hope they change their "not touch zone" heart to touch zone heart


Touch scenes and One frame fun and teasing scenes are also required

Miss Megha big almond eyes meet Fahmaan doe eyes in one frame




Originally posted by: LoveYourself_20

Today's episode was amazing.❣️

Loved Rani and Veer's conversation on call when he was going to the police station. Veer was behaving like a baby who is very much upset for not getting his favourite toy he wants to keep close to him. And here the toy is his own wife Rani.♥️

He was being too stubborn to get her back because he was hurt thinking that she wants space that too from him. His hurt as as person who loves her the most and dies to get her love all the time and on the other side his responsibility as a husband to give her space if she needs, he can't make her his slave, he can't tie her with him everywhere and everytime was shown quite in a good way.

Liking the changes Ranisa is showing be it because of mausajee or Devi. She was smiling when she was having a conversation with Devi. She never used to smile whenever she had to talk with her servents but for the first time she was looking at a person as a human being not as a servent or a owner, keeping aside the level of status. She is tolerating mausajee just because of Veer for sure but all these things which are bringing changes in her is not because of Veer or for Veer. I never wanted them to white wash Rajeshwari this much sooner but the way they are doing it is quite acceptable for me.💫

The way mausajee told Champa to clean the floor nicely and shifted couches aside was very realistic. We too sometimes leave some places while cleaning like under the bed or couches, corners and so many other places or we don't clean them on a regular basis. So, it was shown realistically.👍 And when he gave the list to Champa and told her to get all the things written in that otherwise you will be cursed by matarani not me was good, I liked that. And thank god he didn't fart today I would have died otherwise.🤢

Liked the way Rani thought that Vikram helped her unknowingly I too thought the same at that very moment. It reminded me of their "dever-bhabhi always available for eachother" bond. They really give devar-bhabhi vibes sometimes.😍

Today's Veer and Rani scenes were mind blowing. Them missing eachother in night, changing position continuously when they were on the bed, was so lovely. The way Veer said "Vapis aaiye aap, chhodunga nahi main aapko" it has my whole heart.♥️ And it can be taken in two ways, first as she has troubled him a lot so that he will show his full anger on her for leaving him alone whenever she will come back and second as whenever he will get her, he will keep her so close to him so that she can never leave him like the way she did this time.❤️

And when Devi gave him coffee it reminded him of Rani and the coffee made by her. In the flashback, when he first spit the coffee out of his mouth but then he looked at her and realised that she has made it only for him and with so much of love so he corrected himself and appreciated her efforts and here too first he spit it out but then he drank all of it even after knowing it's taste. This shows that it doesn't matter what he has to face he is always ready for anything when it comes to his wife be it any problem or things he usually doesn't like. Rani is above everything for him.❤️

Everything was on its place today. Megha and Fahmaan were awesome like always. But it's high time they should start giving RanVeer's romantic moments including some physical touch. Its essentially required now.

Edited by Shimmer_sault - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: LoveYourself_20

Today's episode was amazing.❣️

Loved Rani and Veer's conversation on call when he was going to the police station. Veer was behaving like a baby who is very much upset for not getting his favourite toy he wants to keep close to him. And here the toy is his own wife Rani.♥️

He was being too stubborn to get her back because he was hurt thinking that she wants space that too from him. His hurt as as person who loves her the most and dies to get her love all the time and on the other side his responsibility as a husband to give her space if she needs, he can't make her his slave, he can't tie her with him everywhere and everytime was shown quite in a good way.

Liking the changes Ranisa is showing be it because of mausajee or Devi. She was smiling when she was having a conversation with Devi. She never used to smile whenever she had to talk with her servents but for the first time she was looking at a person as a human being not as a servent or a owner, keeping aside the level of status. She is tolerating mausajee just because of Veer for sure but all these things which are bringing changes in her is not because of Veer or for Veer. I never wanted them to white wash Rajeshwari this much sooner but the way they are doing it is quite acceptable for me.💫

The way mausajee told Champa to clean the floor nicely and shifted couches aside was very realistic. We too sometimes leave some places while cleaning like under the bed or couches, corners and so many other places or we don't clean them on a regular basis. So, it was shown realistically.👍 And when he gave the list to Champa and told her to get all the things written in that otherwise you will be cursed by matarani not me was good, I liked that. And thank god he didn't fart today I would have died otherwise.🤢

Liked the way Rani thought that Vikram helped her unknowingly I too thought the same at that very moment. It reminded me of their "dever-bhabhi always available for eachother" bond. They really give devar-bhabhi vibes sometimes.😍

Today's Veer and Rani scenes were mind blowing. Them missing eachother in night, changing position continuously when they were on the bed, was so lovely. The way Veer said "Vapis aaiye aap, chhodunga nahi main aapko" it has my whole heart.♥️ And it can be taken in two ways, first as she has troubled him a lot so that he will show his full anger on her for leaving him alone whenever she will come back and second as whenever he will get her, he will keep her so close to him so that she can never leave him like the way she did this time.❤️

And when Devi gave him coffee it reminded him of Rani and the coffee made by her. In the flashback, when he first spit the coffee out of his mouth but then he looked at her and realised that she has made it only for him and with so much of love so he corrected himself and appreciated her efforts and here too first he spit it out but then he drank all of it even after knowing it's taste. This shows that it doesn't matter what he has to face he is always ready for anything when it comes to his wife be it any problem or things he usually doesn't like. Rani is above everything for him.❤️

Everything was on its place today. Megha and Fahmaan were awesome like always. But it's high time they should start giving RanVeer's romantic moments including some physical touch. Its essentially required now.

Dear, while you share your reviews here and reviews thread ,why don't you open up a new thread also to share your reviews? It will increase forum rank too.

Keep on sharing here and reviews thread too. I meant apart from that too open a new thread too. Other forum people do it too.

I like if all who writes reviews do it. It will help us to increase forum rank too. When new topics are opened it increases forum rank. I have seen many forums do regarding reviews this and I too had done in BB forum . Now I am busy . No time to write anything such.

It's just a suggestion . Do it if you like only .😉

Edited by caller123 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Shimmer_sault

LoveYourself here you turned to LoveEveryone


Awesome write-up well worded .................. no word to express my thanks


Please put it up in the Review Thread, for sure the cast and crew will look it as their way forward and appreciation from you, hope they change their "not touch zone" heart to touch zone heart


Touch scenes and One frame fun and teasing scenes are also required

Miss Megha big almond eyes meet Fahmaan doe eyes in one frame




Thankyou so much Shaila di.♥️

I too miss their eye contact and Rangrez Piya in the background.❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#88

Loved your review so much and agree with every word ❤️

Was missing these kind of reviews like AK used to post 😢

Originally posted by: LoveYourself_20

Today's episode was amazing.❣️

Loved Rani and Veer's conversation on call when he was going to the police station. Veer was behaving like a baby who is very much upset for not getting his favourite toy he wants to keep close to him. And here the toy is his own wife Rani.♥️

He was being too stubborn to get her back because he was hurt thinking that she wants space that too from him. His hurt as as person who loves her the most and dies to get her love all the time and on the other side his responsibility as a husband to give her space if she needs, he can't make her his slave, he can't tie her with him everywhere and everytime was shown quite in a good way.

Liking the changes Ranisa is showing be it because of mausajee or Devi. She was smiling when she was having a conversation with Devi. She never used to smile whenever she had to talk with her servents but for the first time she was looking at a person as a human being not as a servent or a owner, keeping aside the level of status. She is tolerating mausajee just because of Veer for sure but all these things which are bringing changes in her is not because of Veer or for Veer. I never wanted them to white wash Rajeshwari this much sooner but the way they are doing it is quite acceptable for me.💫

The way mausajee told Champa to clean the floor nicely and shifted couches aside was very realistic. We too sometimes leave some places while cleaning like under the bed or couches, corners and so many other places or we don't clean them on a regular basis. So, it was shown realistically.👍 And when he gave the list to Champa and told her to get all the things written in that otherwise you will be cursed by matarani not me was good, I liked that. And thank god he didn't fart today I would have died otherwise.🤢

Liked the way Rani thought that Vikram helped her unknowingly I too thought the same at that very moment. It reminded me of their "dever-bhabhi always available for eachother" bond. They really give devar-bhabhi vibes sometimes.😍

Today's Veer and Rani scenes were mind blowing. Them missing eachother in night, changing position continuously when they were on the bed, was so lovely. The way Veer said "Vapis aaiye aap, chhodunga nahi main aapko" it has my whole heart.♥️ And it can be taken in two ways, first as she has troubled him a lot so that he will show his full anger on her for leaving him alone whenever she will come back and second as whenever he will get her, he will keep her so close to him so that she can never leave him like the way she did this time.❤️

And when Devi gave him coffee it reminded him of Rani and the coffee made by her. In the flashback, when he first spit the coffee out of his mouth but then he looked at her and realised that she has made it only for him and with so much of love so he corrected himself and appreciated her efforts and here too first he spit it out but then he drank all of it even after knowing it's taste. This shows that it doesn't matter what he has to face he is always ready for anything when it comes to his wife be it any problem or things he usually doesn't like. Rani is above everything for him.❤️

Everything was on its place today. Megha and Fahmaan were awesome like always. But it's high time they should start giving RanVeer's romantic moments including some physical touch. Its essentially required now.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#89

Rani was in pure sense without degrading others capabilities, so it did not look manipulative


but they turned her as other FL so the effect of her Devi amma is not in tangent with Rani characteristics


She came telling she will tell Veer everything

It was just she had to be pushy like the Goa time she wanted to meet Veer to know why they parted so much that he did that marriage

she should have found ways to get him board with Vikram because if Veer backtracks or says I need time to think, Vikram will always be for Rani


Vikram is a lawyer, i would prefer them showing him hard hearted and Kiara winning over his hard heart

Kiara needs a different part now


on Champa will do a different post she excelled today



Originally posted by: Bluey71

Writers don't get it this is silly and basic disgusting pattern they follow in each shows... Be it preeta, pallavi, pragya.. So on now our rani not new... This is Worn out commonly used characteristics for FL...ok if they lack in New ideas then on the way twists it by giving fresh zest to the end results...

No need of showing same mistakes of FL again and again it will lose the purity of characters and the scenes...

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Posted: 3 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: Yaso1.0

Loved your review so much and agree with every word ❤️

Was missing these kind of reviews like AK used to post 😢

AK promised to come back soon.😉 It's she is so busy these days.😭

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