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Posted: 4 years ago
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@ MA1970 - Thanks for reading and commenting, please stay tuned!


@ aparna3011 - Glad you liked the update, thanks!


@ UmaDevi97 - Aww, thank you for such a kind and thoughtful comment! Much appreciated! <3


@ khwaishfan - Thank you so much! So grateful for your enthusiasm and feedback. :)


@ Alamelu - I appreciate you reading and commenting, thank you! Pinky definitely helped!


@ simranDi - Many thanks for such a sweet comment! And great point that you raised about Geet’s surroundings!


@ sanum23 - Thank you for reading and commenting! Let's see what Maan wants... :)


@ coderlady - I appreciate you reading and giving feedback on both chapters, thank you!


@ taahir004 - Aww, thank you so very much for reading and leaving such lovely comments! Really appreciate you taking the time to write out such nice and thorough feedback on each chapter! :)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hello all! So happy to see you checking out the story and giving feedback, it means a lot! Chapter 4 is below. :)

(Link to chapter index)

Chapter 4


Geet tugged the sleeves of her tunic down over her hands as she followed Pinky outside of the bedroom and into a long corridor. After being advised that Maan wanted to see her immediately, Geet had stood up from the bed on shaky legs. She was innocent in all this, couldn’t Maan see that?


The women’s footsteps were muffled as they walked down the plush carpet. Pinky led Geet to the end of the hallway and then up a staircase. They exited onto a landing adjacent to a large kitchen, where Geet could see a chef’s coat draped on a hook. Geet’s appetite had completely vanished. She thought of the soup, untouched, that Pinky had brought her.


They made their way up another staircase, then another, and down two twisty halls. The house was practically a maze, but an opulent one. Geet caught glimpses of undoubtedly expensive artwork framing the walls and carefully weaved rugs covering the hardwood floors. “How do you know where you’re going?” Geet whispered.


Pinky waved her hand. “Adi is Maan Sir’s right-hand man, so we are over here at the house all the time. Don’t worry, we’re almost at Maan Sir’s office.”


After a few more paces, Pinky stopped in front of a set of large wooden doors. Geet took a deep breath, steeling herself as Pinky knocked.


“Come in,” came a gruff voice from behind the doors. Even though she had only spent moments with him, Geet would recognize Maan’s deep, authoritative voice anywhere.


Pinky opened the left hand door. Her nerves practically shredding in real time, Geet followed Pinky inside.


Maan’s office, dim and brooding, matched its owner. An enormous mahogany desk dominated the room, which was paneled with dark wood walls. Maan himself was sitting behind the desk, a thin stack of papers in front of him. Geet noticed that he had changed into new, dry clothes, nearly identical to his previous outfit. He was wearing reading glasses, which somehow only made him look more ominous.


The gun beside the stack of files wasn’t helping matters.


A woman in a short black dress was perched on Maan’s desk, and she was twirling a strand of her waist-length black hair. Her lips, painted fire-engine red, immediately twisted into a frown when the two women entered.


Maan looked up at Pinky and Geet, then leaned backward in his high-backed chair. “Finally,” he said shortly. “Pinky, the driver is waiting to take you home now.” He laid his hand on the bare thigh of the woman sitting on the desk. “And you also go home, Sameera. The driver will take you.”


Sameera pouted. “But I just got here.” Her voice was husky, full-bodied.


Maan squeezed her thigh. “Out,” he said simply.


Looking annoyed, Sameera lowered herself from the desk and sauntered to the doorway. She ran her gaze down Geet’s body, then rolled her eyes and brushed rudely past Pinky.


Giving Geet’s hand a squeeze before following Sameera out the door, Pinky whispered, “Good luck.”


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Thanks for checking out this chapter. :)

Edited by kumari3 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#43

Geet went with pinky she saw how expensive everything around and at last enter maan office he send pinky sameera out so he have talk with geet

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Ch 3 & 4 .. amazing!! I am getting so eager to read more! Maan & Sameera together.. Geet the innocent. Maan brought her home n she’s still yet to face him.. eager to know what happens next

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Oh man slimy sameera here eh. And yes ma’am is tough with her but still with her. Yuck


Glad pinky is helpful to a point but it is all upto maan

let’s see what the man has in store for geet considering his power should he not have gotten her full Bio by now. Isn’t that what adi does for him being his right hand person


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Congrats on the new story.

Geet an orphan kicked out of orphanage.

Wrong time in a wrong place witnesses a murder.

Looks like Beauty and the Beast.

Geet is Maans den.

Waiting for next.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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very nice

geet is thinking seeing big house that any one will lost in it also share it with pinky

pinky good luck geet before going out of room who is scare seeing gun near maan

sameera is not happy to go away getting order from maan to leave

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Posted: 4 years ago
#48

Sameera must be involved with Maan. She wasn't happy with Geet's entry.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#49

What will Maan say to her? She has nowhere to go, so maybe she will stay.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is getting interesting. Pinky takes Geet to Maan where Sameera is already there and Maan asks both Pinky and Sameera to go she is wished luck. Geet is scared.

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