MG FF: The Innocent - Chapters 20-27 on p. 41 - Complete - Page 4

thanks for updating so soon

Chapter 3

Riveting update... splendidly written

as expected Geet is shocked seeing her surroundings

can understand her confusion and state of mind

at least Maan ensure she was taken care of

Pinky seems nice... oh she is married to Adi

Geet's questions were expected

I don't think that Maan is a gangster

not surprised that Pinky cannot tell Geet anything

oh Geet is in Maan's house

wonder why Maan wants to see Geet?

update soon

OH wow....poor geet, but so glad pinky is the one who came to geet and told her she is the one who changed her clothes....but waiting for her encounter with maan and to know what exactly and who they are

Thank you for another update. I appreciate that you are updating nearly every day as I understand it can take up a lot of time and thought. Poor Geet, even though she has woken up in a lovely room and luxurious bed, she just wants to get out in fear of being his next victim.

Geet after hours woken up in luxurious bedroom she not happy seeing all she just recall in her mind what happened she getting afraid pinky brought soup for her but geet want to know where she is and when she can leave but pinky told her she is in maan sir house and he want to talk to her

chapter 2

Poor thing was so scared she fainted. Will they just leave her there?

chapter 3

They could not risk leaving her there. So she was brought to Maan's mansion.

Thank you for continuing to write

Congratulations on your new FF

Title sounds Intriguing

Chapter 1

Captivating Start

Geet has been living in a shelter for homeless people

already that is sad

now the Headmistress has also threw Geet out

so something might have happened to Geet that the Headmistress

found out

as Geet walks down the alley she comes across a group of men

dressed smart and it seems like they might have been attacking

on another as Geet sees this she screams

so Maan is the boss or the leader of this group

Chapter 2

Indeed Thrilling !!!!

Maan seems so unaffected by the fact that Geet is scared

at the situation

all he wants is his answers on what she saw

while Adi seems gentle and considerate

Maan is firm and stern and cares for nothing

Geet seeing Maan's gun must have gotten even more scared

and she faints

Chapter 3

Fascinating and so Fabulous

Maan had brought Geet to his house

and wow Geet actually gave Geet new clothes to wear

Geet should just try and relax and stay a while at least she has

a comfortable bed with good food and nice clothes too

but I guess Geet is scared of Maan

and he now wants to talk to her , he will soon learn that she knows nothing

and he will let her go

then what will she do on the streets again

will be waiting for the next chapter