This is not Love- MG || Thread II (*Epilogue* Page 137) - Page 62

Posted: 2 years ago

Part 93

 

Finally, he decides to break the door

 

With all his might he breaks the door and barges in

 

He finds laying on the bed, with a bottle of empty bottle of sleeping pills laying near her

 

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Maan rushes his mother to the hospital

 

Doctors say that her situation is critical and admit her into ICU

 

The doctors have put oxygen cylinders and attached life support into his mom

 

Maan is observing silently and helplessly from outside

 

His sense sanity and hope losing with every passing second

 

His phone rings

 

G- Hey, are you okay?

 

He melts hearing Geet’s soft concerned voice from the otherside

 

M-I don’t know...nothing is going well. Mom is again in hospital because of me. My deals are ruined because of me. I just don’t know

 

G-Don’t say that. That is not true. You are just stressed. it’s okay to be stressed and it's okay to not have everything perfect and it’s also okay to feel upset during these bad times. Important is to not lose hope and believe that every dark time will turn over. Just take one day at a time. You are doing good. Nobody could have done better than you during these situations

 

M-You think so?

 

G-I know so

 

Geet’s words comfort him

 

G-Which hospital are you in? I will grab some food and we will have dinner together.

 

Maan batata hai

 

Geet brings food, some hot towels, tea coffee flask mein, an I pad with his fav shows, a power bank, and comfortable clothes as she knows Maan won’t leave his mother’s side

 

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A few days pass by his mom has regained consciousness

 

But atmosphere puraa chaos ka hai coz ab hospital mein mom ke husband and unki family bhi aa gai hai aur saath mein Lisa bhi aa gai hai

 

His mum is irritating him in general

 

Pushing Lisa on him

 

Making stupid talk like

 

Mom-My wish before I die is to see you get married to a nice girl instead of that gold digger

 

There is general weirdness in atmosphere as Maan’s step-father and family has shown up

 

They are not used to spending so much time together

 

They don't get along and just feel unpleasant and uncomfortable all the time

 

Maan’s mom bhi keeps comparing him to kids from her current husband's family

 

Mom-Look at your (step) father's son (Maan ka step bro)…He is married to xyz …well settled has 2 kids. Last month he was invited dine withxx xx high class people. Got ghgghg award last year (Blah blah)

 

Then there was a little hint of some ugly talk regarding Maan ki mum ka will and inheritance

 

Which mum enjoyed leveraging and holding over Maan’s head and the feeling of being center of attention

 

But Maan didn't need his mum’s money or shares or house or property...

 

But the scene and emotions were still ugly

 

These are enough to make Maan grumpy

 

Mom never appreciates that he is well reputed builder. He has also got several businessman awards under his belt

 

But he doesn't participate much in high society and that's what mum is grumping about ki Maan has no high-class connections...Bade logo kes aath uthna baithna nahi hai

 

Mom ko kaun samjhaaye ki Maan ke saath uthne baithne ko log mar rahe hain

 

Maan despises all the showoff...specially coz his mom thrived on them

 

His stepfamily is also into the showoff scene

 

Maan khana laya toh they have to comment- “ki ye kya canteen se sasta khana le aye...I'll order form xx 5 star restaurant”

 

Fir order karke gate se khanna kaun lekar ayega? None.

 

Is the food from outside suitable for Maan’s mum? Who cares

 

But mum is like ki

 

Mom-Haan xx 5-star hotel ka hi khana khayungi main. I am not a beggar to eat this cheap food

 

Kal tak toh kha rahi thi mast. Aaj kisi ne comment kar diya toh maa ko ab problem hai

 

This type of better than you attitude even pissed off the orderlies and nurses attending to his mum

 

They wouldn't show a gentle attitude to her and only do basic minimum required of their duty

 

Udhar stepfamily says ki shift to better hospital (more expensive hospital)

 

Maan is pulling his hair ki this hospital is the best. It has the best doctors and staff care mum requires

 

Maan is stubborn ki nahi this hospital is best for her

 

So ab stepfamily ke saath Maan ki ladai

 

Faltu ka din raat discussion

 

Faltu mein koi naa koi aa jaata hai bakwas karne

 

Maan ka paara high rehta hai

 

All his patience and self-control are sucked dry by these people

Posted: 2 years ago

Great part 

Maan is s frustrated because of his mum and her family 

Just glad Geet is trying to be with him in this time 

Cont soon 

Posted: 2 years ago

Part 93 

His mother was not bad enough that his step family arrived with their arrogance 

& they are not helping matters , just adding to maan’s headaches 

Glad that at least he has geet who is concerned & offers him well needed support 

Thank you di 🤗

Posted: 2 years ago

Maan is about to hurt himself. All this unwanted energy is making him and his sick mother just back to her norm. I hope Geet hides him away because she can only save him.

Posted: 2 years ago

 Geet call make him good gave him strength otherwise he was to upset with current situation and after his mom's step family making him frustrated  they talk just like his mom showoff ppl and arrogance 

  They try to show him down only geet is concern about him and understand him 

Posted: 2 years ago

I don’t know why he just dies nor leave his mom. She is pushing him away. Seriously for a mom like that he should

Not stand by her.  

I would never ever say that but this woman cannot be his mom

Posted: 2 years ago

Oh shucks 😠 Maan ki mom kya kam thi ki uski nautanki family bhi aagayi. 

Frustration at its peak. 

Maan will blow up any time and I guess volcano ka phatna zaroori hai 😋 for the calmness to return. 

His mom needs to just buzz of and concentrate on her life. 

Posted: 2 years ago

Part 93

I really wish abhi Geet ki ek mast entry hojay woh bhi ek haath me Maan keliye khana and all the necessary items aur dusre haath me usski woh famous chainsaw the perfect biwi types. Taki koi muh khole uski jaban katta sakti. They're all too much... Ek ek ko zor se 4 kantap marenge na toh yaad aayega usski Nani... Arre aunty ji aap toh bekar me uss chipkali Lisa ko Maan ke upar thop rehi hai... Arre lisa kya duniya me koi ladki nahi jo Geet se zyada Maan ki khayal kare... Maan's mother's character toh giragit ki thara hi rang badal thi hai badi chalaki lomdi hai.... His step family is officially disgusting creatures in two feets.... Yuck 🤢... Hopefully Maan gets out of this sewer of a family.... Chi his doing so much for her but she is really ungrateful... Pura step family needs mental help... 🤗

❤️

Posted: 2 years ago

hi there. hope you are well.

thanks for updating


Part 93

emotional update.... greatly written

feeling for Maan

at least his mom his fine

glad that Geet was with him and provided support

liked how she assures him

hate his mom and his step family

his mom always makes him feel bad

they are all toxic for Maan

he needs to stay away from them

update soon

Posted: 2 years ago

93

poor maan stuck with psyco mother n her family 

geet is only peace in his life



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