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Posted: 4 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: JayashreeR

Will read it before going to bed

will comment later 😉


Happy friendship day twinne thank you for updating this as my friendship day gift 🤗🤗


happy friendship day 🤗

enjoy your gift 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
#52

Loved this part....

Waiting for the next one..


Highlight was Pallavi favorite bina tadke wali dhal 🤣🤣🤣🤣


Loved the way amma gave the support to Pallavi

Raghav cooking was really a surprise for me..

Loved the way she bonded with Raghav family amma and keerthi.. 😆



Excited for next part expecting a tashan between Vijay deshmukh and Raghav



Looking forward how will Raghav prove Pallavi's innocence

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Posted: 3 years ago
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this update was lovely--eager for the next one

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Posted: 3 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: JayashreeR

Loved this part....

Waiting for the next one..


Highlight was Pallavi favorite bina tadke wali dhal 🤣🤣🤣🤣


Loved the way amma gave the support to Pallavi

Raghav cooking was really a surprise for me..

Loved the way she bonded with Raghav family amma and keerthi.. 😆



Excited for next part expecting a tashan between Vijay deshmukh and Raghav



Looking forward how will Raghav prove Pallavi's innocence


Thanks twinnie 🤗

Yes why boys should not know cooking 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Chapter 5


At night


Everyone is sleeping peacefully. Pallavi is feeling restless in her sleep. She is disturbed and all those taunts from students were running in her sleep.


She is tossing here and there.


She is surrounded by students who is taunting her and making fun of her and showing her those photos. She is trying to run away from there but there is no place and all were blocking her way. She saw Mandar from far away. She forwarded her hand to ask help from him to save her but he is standing there helpless. Just looking at her without any expression. In running away process she was push by one of the student and about to fall down but two arms saved her from falling. She knows he is none other than her saviour.


“Mujhe pata tha mandar tum zaruraaoge mujhe bachane....”


Her words were stop in middle when she notices it is not mandar but Raghav who is here to rescue and giving her smile.


She is shocked in dream and woke in reality. She is all sweaty and look towards Keerti who is in deep sleep.


Pallavi to herself “what was that? Raghav in my dream. How it can be possible. Pallavi you are mad.”


“but pallavi it is him who savedyou and he doesn’t seem bad guy."


All thoughts were running in her mind. She just needs fresh air. When she came out from room she saw gallery. She is standing in balcony and spread her hand and enjoying chilli air. She wants to feel like free bird like earlier. She just breathes and enjoying but voice startled her


Raghav : nind nahi aa raha hai kya?


Pallavi who didn’t like this interruption plus she is already irritated with her dream specially raghav in her dream.


Pallavi : (rudely) tumse matlab?


Raghav was shocked with her rude behaviour.


Raghav : easy pallavi. Maine bas gallery ka door open dikha iske liye pucha ke sab theek hain. Tumko disturb nahi karne ka tha


Pallavi felt bad after her rude behaviour. She has no rights to be rude with him. He is nothing but good withher. Raghav was leaving but pallavi stop him.


Pallavi : Raghav I am sorry for my rude behaviour. Actually itna kuch hua hain na peechale kuch dino me pata nahi kya karu lekin yeh excuse nahi hain. I am really sorry. Tum yaha ruk sakte ho


Raghav : Its ok main samaj sakta hain. Mujhe hi aise nahi aana chahiye tha. You carry on main chalta hain


Pallavi : please raghav meri wajah se mat jao. Waise tum yaha aise hi aaye the


Raghav : actually mujhe bhi nind nahi aa raha tha iske liye main bahar aaya tha to dekha tum bhi idhar hi ho


Both were sitting on floor quietly. No one is speaking anything but both are comfortable in this which is miracle for them.


Raghav : pallavi main tum se ekbaat puchu?


Pallavi : haan

Raghav : tumne tumhari family kosab bataya ki nahi? I mean tumhare parents ko


Pallavi : mere parents nahi hain


Raghav : I am sorry I didn’t know that


Pallavi : no its ok. I don’t have parents but I do have brother and sister in law who are not less than my parents. I didn’t inform them anything.


Raghav : tumko un log ko batana chahiye


Pallavi : medal nahi mila hain mujhe ke unko khushi khushi batau. Agar tum nahi chahte ke main yaha rahu to bol do chali jaugi kal hi lekin mere matter me interfere mat karo


Raghav : sorry pallavi mera woh matlab nahi tha. Tum yaha jitney din rehne chaho reh sakti ho lekin unko bhi jan ne ka haq hain. Kisi aur se pata chale usse accha hain ke tum unko bata do. Please think about it.


Pallavi : lekin woh log toot jayege


Raghav : ya fir tumhari himmat banege. Pallavi they are your family and they will be your biggest strength now


Pallavi : hmmm


Raghav : at the end it will be your decision.


Both were again silent again.

In morning


Raghav & Keerti left for college and Amma for her work. They arranged everything for pallavi like lunch and other things so she won’t feel bad. Pallavi was feeling sad. If it was some other days she was also preparing for college but things are not same anymore and don't know it will be ever. She was alone in home. She remembered Raghav’s words. Should she call her brother or not? What will be his reaction? Will this break him? but Raghav is also right before he comes to know someone else it is her who should inform him. After gathering lots of courage she called her brother. In first ring he answer


Sid : hello


His one word and Pallavi started to crying


Sid : pallavi beta kya hua tu theek to hain na?


Pallavi : Dada kuch bhi theek nahi hain. Sab khatam ho gaya


Sid : kya hua hain bolo main abhi aata hoon


Pallavi : please jaldi aao mujhe aapki jarurat hain. Main bahut akele pad gayi hoon

In college


Few students were making cheap comments about pallavi and they felt someone hands on their shoulder. It was sunny


Sunny : kyun chup ho gaye? Bolo kya bol rahe the


Student : kuch nahi sunny bhai hum to bas


Sunny : kya bas! Sharam nahi aati kisi ladki ke bare me aise baat karte hain. Ladkiyo ki izzat karna shikho


Student: sorry bhai next time se nahi hoga


They ran away from there. This was witness by his friends. Ved, Harish & Farhad was looking at him with smirk and Raghav expression as usual unreadable


Sunny : aise kyu dekh rahe ho?Mujhe pallavi sawant pasand nahi hain iska matlab yeh nahi hain ke kisi ladki ke bare me koi kuch bhi bole to sunkar le luga


Raghav hug him which was follow by other friends


Raghav : wel come bhai. Really miss you


Sunny hug them back.


Sunny : same here miss you


Raghav : you guys carry on I have some work. I will catch you later.


In principle room


P : as you said I have arranged your meeting with Mr. Vijay Deshmukh. Are you sure you want to meet him?


R : yes Princi I want to meet him

In Deshmukh office


Vijay D : arre waah mere nasse bhi khul gaye Mr. Raghav Rao mujh se milne aaye hain. To batayiye kyu milna chahate the


Raghav : Pallavi ke bare me baat karne


Vijay : pallavi uske bare me? usko already college se nikal diya ab woh chapter close ho gaya hain.


Raghav : usi chapter to open karna hain


Vijay : matlab?


Raghav : matlab pallavi sawant innocent hain aur main chahta hoon ke aap usko ek aur mauka dijiye


V : usko maine mauka diya tha lekin woh kuch prove nahi kar payi. Tum kaise kar loge?


Raghav : that is upto me. Aap bas ek chance dijiye pallavi ko college attend karne ka aur exam dene ka


Vijay : theek hain deta hoon mauka lekin agar nahi kar paye to?


Raghav : to main yeh college chhod kar chala jauga


Raghav knows Vijay deshmukh hates him and wanted him out from college so he won’t let go of this opportunity


Vijay : interesting. Jaha tak mujhe pata hain woh to tumhari dushman hain aur ek dushman ke liye apna career daav pe laga rahe hain. Zarur kuch baat hain usme. Pehle mera beta mandar ab tum. Aakhir aisa kya kar diya ek raat me ke tum uske liye mujh se milne aaye jisko tum sabse jyada nafrat karte ho


Raghav is feeling angry. Yes he hates him to the core and he wants to punch him but he can’t. He is here for pallavi and he needs to end this as soon as possible


Raghav : because she is innocent and you very well know that I don’t like when innocent people get punish. Agar uski jagah aap bhi hote na to bhi main wohi karta


Vijay always hates his guts. He was trying to make him angry so he can reject his offer even though it was tempting. It is good chance to throw him out from this college


Vijay : theek hain diye tumko 30 din. Agar usko innocent nahi prove kar paye to 31st day ko tum aur woh pallavi mere college ke aas paas kabhi bhi nahi dikhane chahiye


Raghav : don't worry Mr. Deshmukh31st day ko hum log college ke gate ke ass paas nahi lekin andar lecture attend karte huye dikhege


After saying this he left before something else happen and he changed his mind. Vijay was hating him but wanted him to fail


Raghav was fuming in anger but he has to control


Princi : are you ok son?


Raghav : yes and thanks for supporting me


Princi : anything for my students. But you know right what challenge you gave him


Raghav : yes sir and don't worry nothing will happen to me and pallavi. I will prove her innocence


Princi : you always prove me why you are my favourite student

Raghav informed about his meeting with vijay deshmukh to his friends. All were socked to heard that.


Ved : did you lost your mind? aisi kaisi shart rakhi hain


Sunny : haan raghav tum jante ho ke woh buddha tujhse kitni nafrat karta hain aur tu khud usko chance dekar aaya


Farhad : Agar tum kuch prove nahi kar paye to ?


Harish : Raghav bhai aapne kuch socha hain kya ?


Raghav : i know guy what you all mean but I had no other option. I know without this challenge he won't accept this offer. Mujhe nahi pata ke main kya karuga lekin mujhe tum log ki help ki jarurat hain. Koi force nahi hain


He forwarded his hand. everyone join him in this mission. Sunny was last one to be ready but he also give in


All : anything for bhai anything. We will prove pallavi innocence




Precap :-

Scene 1 : pallavi in college andhappy she is back to college

Scene 2 : pallavi is with raghav. Mandar came and tell her it was raghav who took her pic and spreaded in college. He also show Raghav pic who was carrying her in his arms from that club. Pallavi looks at Raghav with teary eyes

Scene 3 : Siddhesh dada told Jaya Rao that he is taking away his sister because he doesn’t want his sister to live this kind of place

Edited by ...EhSaas... - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#56

Interesting story!! I am feeling that Madar’s dad did cheaply act. I hope ragav find soon culprit before pallavi misunderstanding.

Waiting for next part.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#57

Wen will u update next. Can't wait dear. Very nail biting chp

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Posted: 3 years ago
#58

Hi, are you going to continue with this story?

I would be lovely if you do!

Loving it so far 💜

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ZariSharma

Hi, are you going to continue with this story?

I would be lovely if you do!

Loving it so far 💜


Thanks dear 😊

I will start may be next week 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zaarzia

Wen will u update next. Can't wait dear. Very nail biting chp


Thanks dear 😊

Will try to update next week

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