I STILL LOVE YOU - until my last breath (✅) - Page 24

Originally posted by: coderlady

Neither understands what the other is feelings and both will not admit their side either.

Yes neither of them was ready to accept their feelings as they couldn't understand it clearly but at the end finally both of them had realised 😁😁...

A long update.... Hash.! And a wonderful one 😍

Finally we got to see the love brewing between localgunda and chipkali.! I loved the jealousy track you have put in between, it always works, wink wink.!

Hopefully Prithvi and Sanyogita don't have a huge misunderstanding and they get to confess their feelings with each other. I must say they have a company of great friends, who are always ready to guide them in almost everything.

Loved Sanyogita and Mrs Adhikari's bond, beautiful it was. Also the part where Prithvi and Sanyogita were texting each other gave me the feeling of college romance slash school romance, sweet and cute 🥰

Raghav's dialogue- dekh tere karan ko kaise mar raha hai, cracked me up.! I laughed so hard 😂 also when he defined his "namune" friends as ashiq, serial killer and roadside majnu, this was too good 😂😂 Raghav is literally a joker.!

Overall a wonderful update, waiting for the confession part.❣️

After a long time we got an update, yipee! It was too good. I am loving this school romance, love story. Ritwik is making Prithvi jealous while Maria is making sanyogita jealous. And here these two are not able to confess each other. Quite understanding because of their tender age. But loved the cute and sweet talks.

I hope in next update we got to see some confession from Prithvi, atleast that he like sanyogita. Very eager to read further.

Love,

Sammy

Originally posted by: Saumya96

A long update.... Hash.! And a wonderful one 😍

Finally we got to see the love brewing between localgunda and chipkali.! I loved the jealousy track you have put in between, it always works, wink wink.!

Hopefully Prithvi and Sanyogita don't have a huge misunderstanding and they get to confess their feelings with each other. I must say they have a company of great friends, who are always ready to guide them in almost everything.

Loved Sanyogita and Mrs Adhikari's bond, beautiful it was. Also the part where Prithvi and Sanyogita were texting each other gave me the feeling of college romance slash school romance, sweet and cute 🥰

Raghav's dialogue- dekh tere karan ko kaise mar raha hai, cracked me up.! I laughed so hard 😂 also when he defined his "namune" friends as ashiq, serial killer and roadside majnu, this was too good 😂😂 Raghav is literally a joker.!

Overall a wonderful update, waiting for the confession part.❣️

Thank you Saumya dear ❤️😊..I am glad you liked it 🤗...I am trying my best to add some comdey here😂...After reading the FF of your of Ramayana based on modern style..the part when all the Rajshri girls are angry at the Raghuvanshi boys I get the inspiration from their so trying my best to write some funny dialogues 😂..

Yes PrithviSanyo indeed they are good friends ,jhagre te bhi hai but Pyaar bhi karte ..

Yes Raghav is a funny fellow and he definite his friendzone accurately as it's Obvious Prithvi in the upcoming chapter turned out to be an Ashiq 😂😂...Dharam is a silent killer who didn't understand the feelings of Meghna where Arjun looked after every girl who didn't give him a bhao😂😂

Originally posted by: Sammy04

After a long time we got an update, yipee! It was too good. I am loving this school romance, love story. Ritwik is making Prithvi jealous while Maria is making sanyogita jealous. And here these two are not able to confess each other. Quite understanding because of their tender age. But loved the cute and sweet talks.

I hope in next update we got to see some confession from Prithvi, atleast that he like sanyogita. Very eager to read further.

Love,

Sammy

Thank you Sammy ❤️❤️...I am glad you liked it 🤗...Yes Prithvi was jelous seeing Rittwik talking with Sanyogita 😂..other side Sanyo irked by the presence of Mariya around Prithvi😂😂... Stay tuned for confessions part

Originally posted by: Priyo0143139

Thank you Saumya dear ❤️😊..I am glad you liked it 🤗...I am trying my best to add some comdey here😂...After reading the FF of your of Ramayana based on modern style..the part when all the Rajshri girls are angry at the Raghuvanshi boys I get the inspiration from their so trying my best to write some funny dialogues 😂..

Yes PrithviSanyo indeed they are good friends ,jhagre te bhi hai but Pyaar bhi karte ..

Yes Raghav is a funny fellow and he definite his friendzone accurately as it's Obvious Prithvi in the upcoming chapter turned out to be an Ashiq 😂😂...Dharam is a silent killer who didn't understand the feelings of Meghna where Arjun looked after every girl who didn't give him a bhao😂😂

Glad my story could inspire you 😉😉 specially the comedy and funny parts.!

Loved it Priya dear

Awesome and interesting part🤗🤗

I really loved the innocent reactions of teenagers who are just to realize their feelings for each other well penned 🙂

I loved the meet of Prithvis mother & Sanyogita she got a sweet second mother figure other than her granny👵 😊

Her attempts & her frustrations were nicely depicted when new mariya enters the picture & she gets insecure

Same goes for Prithvi when Ritwik is near Sanyogita & it made them realize that what they ment to each other

Friends are really good & how well these 4 read each other was really good👍

So after that frustration & bashing both let out their pent up feelings thou not I'm open words but the feel became more strong💪

So now prithvi is going to talk to Sanyogita this would really be interesting

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon😍

Ohkkkkk.. The longest update I had ever read till date... But it was altogether amazing, not got bored of reading for even once . Well now I understand why you took soo long to update, but it's like sabr ka phal meetha hota h , so is the episode... I would have infact asked you for the next part immediately if you had divided this part in two sections, because one thing was leading to another and dropping it in the middle was not possible. It's like Maha episode😊😊... But I thoroughly enjoyed.

So finally Chipkali aur Local Gunda ek ho hi gaye... Yippeeee... You know what I love their banter too much and enjoy it to the fullest... Aur waise bhi jalan ki chingari jahan jahan uthi h wahan pyaar ke diye zaroor jale h , to yahan kaise yeh dono peeche reh jaate😜😜🤪🤪🤪.. well jealousy track are always fun to read...

But ... Ek taraf pyaar dikhaya to dusri taraf misunderstanding kyu😟😟.. udhar bhi pyaar ka band Bajwa deti..par koi nhi jab inke itne awesome yaar ho saath to darne ki kya h baat , for sure inki toli koi na koi tigdam bhidayegi zaroor...

Ahhaan kahin koi bonding strong kr raha h kisi ki family ke saath with spice of cute college romance .. well I must say that these two are really cutie pie.

But wait why is Prithvi spinning jalebi, I mean I can not understand what's wrong with Prithvi, seems like something is going on in his mind.. hopefully he gets all his confusion clear soon...

Episode stealing moment was of Raghav yaar... He is a joker... I must say he is too funny.. I was laughing so hard that my stomach started paining... O God the ending was super fun...

All in all fantastic episode dear...

Eagerly waiting for the next part 🥺🥺🥺🥺

Originally posted by: golden_aura

Loved it Priya dear

Awesome and interesting part🤗🤗

I really loved the innocent reactions of teenagers who are just to realize their feelings for each other well penned 🙂

I loved the meet of Prithvis mother & Sanyogita she got a sweet second mother figure other than her granny👵 😊

Her attempts & her frustrations were nicely depicted when new mariya enters the picture & she gets insecure

Same goes for Prithvi when Ritwik is near Sanyogita & it made them realize that what they ment to each other

Friends are really good & how well these 4 read each other was really good👍

So after that frustration & bashing both let out their pent up feelings thou not I'm open words but the feel became more strong💪

So now prithvi is going to talk to Sanyogita this would really be interesting

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon😍

Thank you Goldie dear 🤗❤️❤️...I'm so much glad you liked it...yes you are right they are innocent still kids from heart toh islye mujhe todha use hi soch samajh kar likhna padh raha...hmm Sanyo got jelous seeing Maria around Prithvi who another side got jealous too😂😂...bechare .. correctly said Sanyogita get a second mother in Prithvi's mother who made her to learned how to cook the dish like the way own mother deed...

Aap yeh Chipkali aur Localgunda ka confessions hone hi wala ...

I hope so you liked it too🤗🤗...

Yesterday I was checking my phone Why Goldie didn't give an update then I hv realized you had work🥺🥺...I hope your work is going well like the way u hv write story ❤️❤️...

Originally posted by: Priyo0143139

Thank you Goldie dear 🤗❤️❤️...I'm so much glad you liked it...yes you are right they are innocent still kids from heart toh islye mujhe todha use hi soch samajh kar likhna padh raha...hmm Sanyo got jelous seeing Maria around Prithvi who another side got jealous too😂😂...bechare .. correctly said Sanyogita get a second mother in Prithvi's mother who made her to learned how to cook the dish like the way own mother deed...

Aap yeh Chipkali aur Localgunda ka confessions hone hi wala ...

I hope so you liked it too🤗🤗...

Yesterday I was checking my phone Why Goldie didn't give an update then I hv realized you had work🥺🥺...I hope your work is going well like the way u hv write story ❤️❤️...

Priya dear 💕

Well my updates will be having a gap this time might be by end of this month once my entire draft is done ... My sister & nieces are here so that's why likhne ka time nahi hai 😞 upar se office to hai he uska kya kahu 😣

But surely will try as fast as I can

Love Goldie