Arjun FF - Amrita - Page 5

Awesome story.... loved it... I would love to read the next story....

Thanx for completing the story....

I would request you to write the next part of this story too....

Originally posted by: ishitadalal

Awesome story.... loved it... I would love to read the next story....

Thanx for completing the story....

I would request you to write the next part of this story too....

There is a 50-50 chance 🙂🙂🙂🙂

Namaste,

Firstly, let me congratulate you on a very well written story.

Crisp, consistent, dialogue oriented and gripping.

The length and style of writing is indeed commendable.

Few pointers that I have highlighted in most of my posts, although Arjun is the central character, the supporting characters ought to "support" adequately. Like in this case, Pushpa Anand is Sakshi and Arjun's mom. Sakshi is just as invested in solving the case. Being adamant in pursuing the task is not the only thing she has inherited, isn't it? She stayed with her mother and knew her far more than Arjun. Her reach is far more diverse (since was herself not part of the police department).

The Supporting characters are also intelligent and dedicated officers who can provide vital inputs to investigations.

Please consider these as constructive feedback not intended to hurt.

Reiterating the good work on this one. Keep writing. Stay safe.

Originally posted by: Bodhianveshika

Namaste,

Firstly, let me congratulate you on a very well written story.

Crisp, consistent, dialogue oriented and gripping.

The length and style of writing is indeed commendable.

Few pointers that I have highlighted in most of my posts, although Arjun is the central character, the supporting characters ought to "support" adequately. Like in this case, Pushpa Anand is Sakshi and Arjun's mom. Sakshi is just as invested in solving the case. Being adamant in pursuing the task is not the only thing she has inherited, isn't it? She stayed with her mother and knew her far more than Arjun. Her reach is far more diverse (since was herself not part of the police department).

The Supporting characters are also intelligent and dedicated officers who can provide vital inputs to investigations.

Please consider these as constructive feedback not intended to hurt.

Reiterating the good work on this one. Keep writing. Stay safe.

Firstly thank you so much for your feedback. Of course I am not hurt. I am aware of the fact that it will never be perfect you can always make it better. I will keep that in mind what you have said. 🙂🙂🙂🙂

I'm halfway through! Baaki ka adha bhi next weekend tak padh lungi😳

It's a very interesting and we'll written story.. sad that it didn't get proper response🥺 I understand how disheartening it feels.

🤗 keep writing tho!🤗

Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

I'm halfway through! Baaki ka adha bhi next weekend tak padh lungi😳

It's a very interesting and we'll written story.. sad that it didn't get proper response🥺 I understand how disheartening it feels.

🤗 keep writing tho!🤗

Koi nahi. These things happen. 🙂🙂🙂🙂

Hey dear please consider nominating this book in mystery category in fan fiction awards

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

Hey dear please consider nominating this book in mystery category in fan fiction awards

I don't know how to do that????

Originally posted by: stormfly13

I don't know how to do that????

It's a Global Announcement Thread

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/5240699/india-forums-fanfiction-awards-2020-nominations-closed

You can nominate any story written from Jan-Dec 2020 only. Consider giving the prequel of this story if it was written in 2020. 👍🏼⭐️