Shakhi FF "Ho Jaata Hai Kaise Pyaar" Chapter 39#updated# Pg101, Oct 18 - Page 35

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: GHKPM

These two are beyond adorable...and i am so glad they are actually talking...much needed but always ignored in itv world...

Nice one, Preet😊💖🌹...


Thank you so much 😘


I am glad you enjoyed their conversation 😊


More conversations to come.


Love Preet ♥️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Seriously?? Well, I need time to write as well in between, 2 updates a week are plenty.....

It takes you 10 minutes or less to read but to write it takes much longer.

Ohk

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Poojasharma5269

Seriously?? Well, I need time to write as well in between, 2 updates a week are plenty.....

It takes you 10 minutes or less to read but to write it takes much longer.

Ohk



Thanks for understanding 🙏

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow such a heartfelt conversation.

I could visualise them in the age without video calls or facetime pouring out their feelings after their confession.


Will Anokhi confess her love in their next meet.

Although SS know her feelings for him.

Thankyou for the tag

Looking forward to next update

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Posted: 4 years ago

Lovely update! Anokhi is quite shy. She will take some time to open up with her feelings. It will drive our SS crazy! 😆

I liked their phone conversation plus they both realise that the path is not going to rosy for them. A lot of hurdles to come their way! Keep writing Preet! Loving it ❤️


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Posted: 4 years ago


For this chapter I have chosen the following song. It's one of my favorites. You can play it in the background of you'd like. Enjoy😊


Here's the link to the song.


https://youtu.be/qQqpeoh41AI



Chapter 27


"Condition!! What condition??" Anokhi asked surprisingly.


"I want you to look up at me."


"Look up?? Oookay"


"Uh uh don't move away, stay as you are...keep hugging me, only turn your face up."


"Acha ji, meri billi mujhi se meow." (ok, using my own trick on me.)


Shaurya laughed hearing Anokhi and boasted "See, I'm a quick learner"


"Hmmm, I see that," teased Anokhi.


"Okay now just look up"


"Looking!!"


"Now keep looking at me and tell me when did you realize that you are in love with me??" Shaurya asked straight forward.


Kaisa Lagta Hai, Achha Lagta Hai

(How does it feel? It feels good)

Pyar Ka Sapna, Sacha Lagta Hai

(The dream about love, now seems true)


Anokhi fell silent hearing his question.


Shaurya waited for some time but when he didn't get any reply from Anokhi he added "Anokhi don't look down or close your eyes. This is my condition. I really want to know, then only I will answer your question." Shaurya put forth his condition hoping to hear what he was getting so desperate to hear from Anokhi.


Finding herself in a tough spot with no way out, Anokhi decided to answer his question.


"Ummm I always liked you but initially I was scared of you, I felt embarrassed because I uhhh bumped into you the first day. I thought you would think that I am too clumsy, careless, rude and what not. I was so nervous in the beginning that I even avoided direct eye contact with you, but when you praised me after the first exam I felt really happy and I thought now at least you would think good about me and then gradually I started liking your attention towards me."


"What??" Shaurya asked surprised "Why would I think shallow about you, you didn't bump into me on purpose..."


"Ohhh...You didn't think bad about me?? Wow, that's great!!! Then later due to the science & technology fair project we started talking and I loved being with you. I really enjoyed the time we spent together making the project. I can't forget that I got to ride with you on your scooter because of that project. That was very unexpected but just as amazing. I was very nervous at that time, I had never ever thought, not even in my dreams, that something like that would ever happen."


Tu Jo Kareeb Hai, Mera Naseeb Hai

(When You are near me, You are my good luck)


"Hmm that was unexpected, by the way do you know no girl has ever sat behind me on my scooter like that, other than family of course. I felt so happy, I was on cloud nine that day." Shaurya chipped in.


Hearing that Anokhi suddenly felt very happy and surprisingly asked in a low tone "Ohh really?!"


"Yes" replied Shaurya, hearing her innocent excitement a wide smile kissed his lips. "Then what happened??" he curiously asked.


"Then!! Hmmm then all my happiness went down the drain" Anokhi sadly confessed.


"What?? Why?? What do you mean??" Shaurya worriedly asked.


"Well you suddenly stopped talking to me, I know the reason now but at that time I was feeling so suffocated, my heart desired for your one mellow look at me but you were purposely ignoring me. I felt so gloomy and sad during those days. I was so confused at the sudden change in your behaviour towards me. I couldn't figure out why you were so mad at me and then that incident with Principal mam happened and it scared the hell out of me. But your behavior was totally opposite to what I'd imagined. I thought you would get even more mad at me but thank god you didn't, otherwise I don't know what I would have done. It was so comforting to know that you trusted me. Then after that everything was fine again, I had lots of fun at the fair, got to share my lunch with you, then you took us all to Sagar Ratna, basically I just loved how you were with me, so nice and caring...always smiling and happy and not mad at me at all. Those four days were just awesome. I will cherish those memories forever. I was feeling that I was in some different world at that time." Anokhi replied lovingly.


Dil Me Basi Hai Tu, Meri Khushi Hai Tu

(You reside in my heart, You are my happiness)

Tere Bina Ik Pal Mujhe Na Rehna

(Without You, I don't want to live for even a single moment)


"Ya by then I had left everything on GOD." Words came out of his mouth unknowingly.


"Meaning??" asked Anokhi in confusion.


"I will tell you later, first you finish telling." Shaurya insisted.


"Okay!! Then after the fair we talked frequently and I really loved that, by that time you captured my heart and thoughts completely. Day and night I was reminiscing about those beautiful four days of fair. I somewhat lost control over my heart and brain. Stupidly I was always looking for excuses to call you, I would come up with problems so I could talk to you" chuckled Anokhi.


Har Taraf Khushiyo Kaa Mausam Hai Yahaan, Hamne Pehli Bar Dekha Yeh Jahaan (x2)

(In every direction there is an atmosphere of happiness,

I've seen such a world for the first time)


"I also loved our evening talks, all day I used to wait for the evening and your call, sometimes when you wouldn't call I felt disappointed and sad" revealed Shaurya.


"I thought if I called you everyday, you would think that I am purposely coming up with problems." Then Anokhi mischievously added "But if you had said that you wanted me to call you everyday then I would've called you everyday. You never told me." Anokhi said in a complaining tone.


"Okay, I'm saying that now. I want to talk to you everyday!" Shaurya teasingly responded.


"Me too" replied Anokhi in a chirpy tone. "I mean of course we'll talk everyday."


"But when did you realize your feelings for me??" Shaurya asked curiously.


"The day you threw the bomb on me that you are going away from me forever to the USA!! It was a sudden shock, at first my brain got numb for a while and then I broke down with tears. That was the first time I realized that my feelings for you were not just attraction but something much more. I felt very sad at that time and I cried a lot. I thought you will go and I'll never see you again, you will forget all about me." Anokhi sadly revealed and paused, then with a deep sigh out she continued "But then I thought why am I crying?? Why is the news of you leaving is making me cry?? It was so confusing, I couldn't understand why I was feeling that way. I remember I just sat there pointlessly and cried for sometime until I realized that the phone fell from my hand. After seeing the phone I gathered myself and decided to act normal and happy as if nothing had happened. Realization occurred that you weren't gonna stay with me forever anyway. I thought I should be happy for you since you are getting such a big opportunity. I was extremely sad but didn't want you to know that I was sad. And while deciding all that I kept the phone back and it rang right away. I thought it must be you and took a deep breath in and picked up the phone and tried my best while talking to you and made sure that you didn't find out I was crying. I thought if you found out I was crying, you would ask me why I'm crying and I wouldn't be able to tell you the reason."


Shaurya was shocked knowing that Anokhi had been hiding her feelings so perfectly for sooo long. She was in as much pain as he was. He really cursed himself for almost letting her go, but then thanked god for giving him this chance to finally say what he wanted to. "Anokhi, I am so shocked. You very successfully hid your feelings from me, but to tell you the truth when I told you about me going to the USA, I thought your reaction to this will give me an idea about how you feel about me. But your reaction was not what i'd hoped for, you reacted all normal and happy for me, I felt so disappointed and heartbroken thinking that you don't have the same feelings for me."


Anokhi replied sadly "Ohhh, so you were heartbroken."


Gamm Ki Duniya Se, Hum Chale Aaye, Door Hain Humse Dard Ke Saaye

(We've come out from the world of sadness, the shadows of pain are away from us)


"Anyway, forget all that, I am really really glad that you called me today or else we would've never said anything to each other." Shaurya sighed out loud and said in a whisper "now all I want is to see you and..."


Aa Dua Maang Le, Kuchh Bhi Ho Ab Dukh Pade Na Sehna

(Let's pray that whatever happens now, may we never have to endure pain)


"See me??" Anokhi replied swiftly and nervously.

'How will I face him?? I would die with shyness' thought Anokhi feeling panicked.


"Yes!!! Why are you so surprised?? I want to see you, I would've come right now if I could. Don't you want to see me??" Shaurya asked, confused.


She replied all scared "No, no way, You can't see me."


"What?? Why not??" Shaurya confusingly asked.


"I mean...uhhh... I mean..." Anokhi stuttered while trying to think what to say. Suddenly an idea popped into her head and she said "Yeah, I mean don't we have holidays now, no school, no tuition so how will you see me?? You can't see me" sighed Anokhi in relief.


Kaisa Lagta Hai, Achha Lagta Hai

(How does it feel? It feels good)

Pyar Ka Sapna, Sacha Lagta Hai

(The dream about love, it seems true)


Deciphering Anokhi's panic in her tone, Shaurya calmly asked "Anokhi, why you don't want to see me??"


"No uhhh nothing like that, I was just saying how it will be possible." Anokhi tried to hide her panic.


Shaurya stayed quiet and thought for a minute and then asked "Are you feeling shy?? Is that why you don't wanna see me??" He wanted to know if shyness is the only reason Anokhi doesn't wanna see him and nothing else.


Anokhi was stunned hearing his question, she never thought he would so quickly figure out why she was denying meeting him and how she was feeling.

"Uhhh Yes" whispered Anokhi.


Shaurya smiled in relief and teased saying "hmmm lucky you we have holidays now." Then in a serious tone he asked "Okay but for now will you atleast talk to me on the phone everyday??"


"Yes of course I will" replied Anokhi excitedly.


Pyaar Ke Waade Kabhi Na Todna, Tum Kabhi Tanha Na Humko Chhodna (x2)

(Don't ever break the vows of love, don't ever leave me alone)

Aasuon Ko Hum Pee Na Payenge, Hum Juda Hoke Jee Na Payenge

(I won't be able to drink tears, I won't be able to live separated from You)


'There is still a week before school and tuition starts so in the meantime I can only talk on the phone with her. Hopefully this week will pass quickly and soon I will see her in front of me.' Shaurya dreamily thought.


'There's a week before school and tuition starts and even after that I don't really have to go to school since the course is finished and all the teachers told us to come only if we have any problem or questions to ask, so I need not go. What a relief. I don't have to go in front of him!!' Then she realized 'but sooner or later I'll have to face him, how am I going to do that??'


Aa Kasam Kha Lein Hum Maanenge Hamesha Ik Duje Ka Kehna

(Let's make a promise that we shall always agree to what the other one says)


"I can't wait for school to start." said Shaurya excitedly.


"Why??" asked Anokhi anxiously.


"So I can see you in front of me and wrap my arms around you and take you in my embrace just like we are hugging right now" said Shaurya openly.


Kaisa Lagta Hai, Achha Lagta Hai

(How does it feel? It feels good)

Pyar Ka Sapna, Sacha Lagta Hai

(The dream about love, now seems true)


Anokhi's eyes grew wider and she swallowed but stayed quiet.


When Shaurya didn't get any response from Anokhi he snapped at her "If you will stay shy like this on phone, what will you do when we'll meet?? I want to enjoy the feeling of you being in my arms, close to my heart just like now."


"Hmmm I would like that" Anokhi blurted dreamily. "I mean... I uhhh... I..." Anokhi closed her eyes and fell silent realizing she said it out loud.


Tu Jo Kareeb Hai, Mera Naseeb Hai

(When You are near me, You are my good luck)

Dil Me Basi Hai Tu, Meri Khushi Hai Tu

(You reside in my heart, You are my happiness)


Dreamy smile came on Shaurya's lips hearing her innocent blurt, then he lovingly replied "You are sooo sweet." Then mischievously he added "Don't worry. You have enough time Anokhi, we have a whole week to practice over the phone."


Anokhi asked, trying to change the topic "Earlier you said 'Yeah by then I had left everything on GOD...' What did you mean??"


"I meant...uhhh...remember I was telling you that I prayed to God to help me, to show me the right path the day I was gonna make you leave the project. But after the incident with Principal mam that day I decided I won't make you leave the project, well all that made me confused as to what path was God trying to show me??? I couldn't figure out anything, so I thought I would just leave everything to God and quietly walk on the path he is showing. I'm very happy I did that because it brought me here, TO YOU!!! I am very thankful to God and hope he keeps his blessings on us like this and one day you become mine officially with our families blessings."


"From your mouth to God's ear!! I hope so too" said Anokhi, feeling extremely emotional.


Tere Bina Ik Pal Mujhe Na Rehna

(Without You, I don't want to live for even a single moment)


"uh oh" whispered Anokhi suddenly.


"What happened??" Shaurya asked in panic.


"What time is it??"


"I don't know, what happened??" Shaurya asked frantically.


"I just saw Mumma going towards the Pooja (prayer) room, is it morning??" Anokhi asked, shocked. "We talked the whole night??"


Shaurya looked at the time and realized that the whole night had passed, it was 5:30 in the morning. "Wow yes we did talk all night" said Shaurya mirroring Anokhi's tone.


"I think we should hang up before Mumma hears me!!" said Anokhi quitely.


"Hmmm maybe we should" Shaurya replied disappointedly. "But I don't want to hang up."


"Me too." pouted Anokhi.


"When will we talk again??" Shaurya asked.


"Uhhh Tonight!! I will call maybe after everyone sleeps!!" Anokhi replied in a low tone.


"Will you be able to keep the phone with you??" Shaurya asked to make sure.


"I will try. I mean I will" whispered Anokhi.


Then both of them reluctantly hung up the phone. But they were both extremely happy, all day they both kept reminiscing about all their conversations and how things had suddenly taken this beautiful turn between them. All day they both had a sweet smile on their faces. They were eager for the night to come so they could talk to each other again.


Finally the night arrived.


Anokhi called Shaurya on his mobile.


"Hi" said Shaurya lovingly picking up the phone in one ring.


"Hi" whispered Anokhi as soon as she heard Shaurya. "Were you already holding the phone, I mean you picked it up in just one ring."


"Yes, I was waiting for your call." Shaurya replied honestly.


Anokhi smiled shyly and replied "hmmm" in a low tone.


"How was your day??" Shaurya asked casually.


"Uhhh Good." Anokhi replied.


"So what did you do all day??" asked Shaurya trying to start a conversation.


Kaisa Lagta Hai, Achha Lagta Hai

(How does it feel? It feels good)

Pyar Ka Sapna, Sacha Lagta Hai

(The dream about love, now seems true)


"Thought about you" Anokhi murmured silently.


"Huh!! What??" Shaurya asked annoyingly. He was feeling annoyed thinking 'either she stays quiet or she murmurs, in both cases I have no idea how she is feeling and what she is thinking, wish she was in front of me so I could at least see her expressions and get some idea of her feelings.'


"Uhhh!!!! Nothing... I uhhh I was just studying. What did you do??" Anokhi scrambled words nervously.


"I thought about you all day, wished I could see you, hug you, kis..." he stopped in the middle and swiftly asked, changing the topic "Have you had your dinner??"


Tu Jo Kareeb Hai, Mera Naseeb Hai

(When You are near me, You are my good luck)

Dil Me Basi Hai Tu, Meri Khushi Hai Tu

(You reside in my heart, You are my happiness)


"Yes" replied Anokhi.


"What did you eat today??" Shaurya asked casually.


"Today Mumma made paneer, do you like it??"


"Yes, who doesn't like paneer." Shaurya replied while eating something.


Hearing him eating, Anokhi surprisingly asked "You are eating now?? You haven't had dinner yet??? It's so late!"


Shaurya smiled hearing the concern in her voice and replied "I already had my dinner, I am just eating gajar ka halwa (sweet made with carrot, milk and sugar)"


"Hawww aap akele akele kha rahe ho, mujhe ek baar poocha bhi nahin (Ohhh you are eating it all by yourself, you didn't even offer me once) Anokhi sweetly complained.


"Par ye to mera jootha hai!!! Tum meri joothi katori chammach se khaogi???" (But I've been eating from it, will you eat from the same bowl and spoon??) Shaurya asked skeptically.


"Ya why not?? Kounsa pehli baar aapka jootha kha rahi huin!!! (It's not the first time I'm eating from your leftover!!!)" replied Anokhi without thinking.


"What??? When did you eat my leftovers???" Shaurya asked confusingly.


Hearing Shaurya's question Anokhi realized what she blurted in her excitement. She bit her tongue and slapped her forehead and murmured "oops".


"Anokhi, tell me when you ate my leftovers??" Shaurya asked Anokhi firmly to answer after waiting for her reply.


"Kabhi nahin?" (Never?) replied Anokhi unconvincingly as it sounded more like a question rather than an answer.


"Anokhi, I can tell you are hiding something from me, tell me" asked Shaurya persistently .


"Uhhh wo jab aap tution ke liye aate ho na ghar aur coffee peete ho..." (Uhhh when you come to my house for tuition and you have coffee...) Anokhi replied nervously and paused.


"Haan to??" (Ya so??) questioned Shaurya not understanding what Anokhi was implying.


"Arre aap coffee peene ke baad last mein thodi chod dete the na to wo bachi hui coffee main..." (Offo you used to leave some coffee in the cup after drinking so I used to...) Anokhi left her sentence unfinished for him to understand on his own.


Realizing what Anokhi was implying he shockingly asked "You drink the leftover coffee from my cup??"


"Hmmm" whispered Anokhi.


Shaurya felt really emotional knowing the depth of her love and said "Oh my god!!!! You love me so much and I never even realized."


He paused for a few seconds to control himself and then said "Come here, I want to hug you and kiss your forehead."


Anokhi smiled shyly and said "I'm here"


Tu Jo Kareeb Hai, Mera Naseeb Hai

(When You are near me, You are my good luck)

Dil Me Basi Hai Tu, Meri Khushi Hai Tu

(You reside in my heart, You are my happiness)

Tere Bina Ik Pal Mujhe Na Rehna

(Without You, I don't want to live for even a single moment)


"Mmmuuuaah" kissed Shaurya. "I love you sooo much."


"Hmmm" Anokhi said in a whisper.


Shaurya thought 'I was eagerly waiting for her to say I LOVE YOU to me but her actions speak louder, she doesn't have to say it. Anyway I already know she loves me.'


And like this they continued talking, sharing many things with each other every night.


During one of the nights, Shaurya once asked Anokhi "Is the light in your room off??"


"Uh no!" replied Anokhi feeling confused. "Why are you asking?"


"Just curious..." Shaurya replied in an impassive tone.


"Oookay"


"When will you turn it off??" He questioned.


"Uhhh after some time, why??"


"Okay let me know when you turn it off." He replied impassively.


"Anyway, I will have to put you on hold then only I can go and turn it off so you will definitely know" replied Anokhi still wondering why he was asking about the light.


"What are you studying??" Shaurya asked her casually.


"Uhhh I was studying business studies before calling you." Anokhi replied worriedly.


"Okay! When will you turn the light off??" He asked again.


"Light?? Why are you so concerned about the light??" asked Anokhi irritably.


"I'm not concerned about the light. I just wanted to know when you will come to lie down so I can open my blanket!" He said romantically


"What??? Open your blanket, what for??" She replied shockingly.


Dil Me Basi Hai Tu, Meri Khushi Hai Tu

(You reside in my heart, You are my happiness)

Tere Bina Ik Pal Mujhe Na Rehna

(Without You, I don't want to live for even a single moment)


"Umm because I am getting cold without you here, every night when you come and hug me, only then I feel warm." He mischievously said.


"What!!! Main kya heater huin???" (What!!! Am I a heater??) chuckled Anokhi.


"Hmmm yes, you're my very own personal heater!! I feel cold until you come and hug me every night." He whispered sensually.


Anokhi smiled shyly and fell silent.


Kaisa Lagta Hai, Achha Lagta Hai

(How does it feel? It feels good)

Pyar Ka Sapna, Sacha Lagta Hai

(The dream about love, now seems true)


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Hope you all enjoyed the chapter. It's too lovey dovey maybe but I want to show them opening up to each other and reveal what they went through.


So bear with me please.


Love Preet ♥️


Chapter 28 👇

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Edited by rishbala3018 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Hayee Shaurya khullam khulla Phone pe romance kar raha hai💜

So cute

Fantastic update Preet ❤👍🏻

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Posted: 4 years ago

Enjoy this so much Preet.

I was smiling all the time during reading this 😀😀. Blushing all the time 😊.

You wrote the conversation very well.

It shows their emotions, understanding each other and so on.

They are progressing slowly but steadily towards their future.

Its nice that you keep vacation at this time so they can use this time by talking with each other, knowing each other and ofcourse getting comfortable with each other in this newly formed relationship between them.

Waiting for the next update. Hope you give that in the mid of the weekdays not need to wait for the next weekend.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Another sweet chapter❤️

Loved how the love birds talked their way throughout the night, discussing details😇

That's how a relationship grows, I'm glad you are showing all the aspects 💗

Shaurya being the naughtiest and Anokhi is so shy lol🤭

Eagerly waiting for the day when they will meet each other🤍

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Posted: 4 years ago

Lovely update..

I was smiling throughout reading..

So sweet..

Mujhe lagta hai ki yeh dono long-distance relationship ko acche seh pull karenge... Full practice horai hai uski..

Kon I love you phone par bolta hai.Phone par hi hug aur forehead kiss aur flirty talks aur chadhar ke andar sona bhi wahhh..

Mai keh rahi hu.. full on practice mood pe hai..


Aap ki writing skills aur sochne ka andazz toh lajavab hai ..

Aap ki FF bohaut pyaari aur bohaut hi zyada intresting hoti ja rahi hai... Ab bas next update ki wait hai..


LOVED IT AND LOVE YOU.💗❤️❤️❤️

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