The Choice [A RaghVi OS] - Page 2

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Anushka, This didn't even for once look like its's been written by an amateur.

The way you wrote what Raghav's feelings are in this situation is PHENOMENAL👏

Oh dear! 😙🙈

You are too kind luv!

Thanks for reviewing. I aim to impress. I'm glad you liked it.

Wow! Got no words to describe what I felt while reading this. I could actually imagine Raghav going through all of this. His emotions were so beautifully portrayed.

This is a wonderfully written OS.

Wish you would make this into a TS and give us a bit of Pallavi's POV as well in the same situation.

It’s an art to express emotions in words and make the reader feel exactly what the writer wants to

And you have done that job brilliantly 👏

Thank you

Yes please give a POV of Pallavi too

From your note,to the last end - u just echoed my thought.

I just commented something similar in another post.That he is highly insecure of his worth.he trust pallu,her love but doesnt trust himself enough for that love or fortune.

RR had this issue always.U know,he keeps saying im rr sounds like he is convincing himself continously that he can get things done as he want.It always felt like a defense mechanism to me instead of him being an arrogant or show off.

but u elaborated whatever i felt rr must be feeling.

This was really really good.just whatever i was thinking, u wrote it so nicely.

And i feel super eager to read more.so at the risk of being demanding,i wish u can write pallu's take on that realisation of what rr is going through.

That's something i can't think of.

U can do a really good job on that Too

This made my heart ache with sadness and turmoil that Raghav is going through.

Also, this wasn't amateurish at all. It was very well written! Loved it!!

Very well written🤩

Could feel raghav's pain

Could u continue this os,with pallavi's pov?

Emotional one. Beautifully written

the feelings--so pure

Raghav will surely go through this

beautifully written