ShiVi OS- Stages (Epilogue updated on page 19) - Page 6

Originally posted by: Transference

It triggered some painful thoughts. My Mom was widowed within two months of her marriage, and she went into similar lunacy for two years till life happened again to her in the form of her husband’s best friend. My Baba!

Very realistic! And beautiful

Say Hi to ua mom from me. She is a sweetheart. I love her jolly nature. And thank you so much T.

🖤

Do u think I should delete it?

All of them r upset😔

Not ur best??..this was extremely good..it touched my heart on so many levels..really👏..the flow was beautiful..the description of shivas insecurity especially the mention of mirror showing their differences..I so loved it....the ending was so heartbreaking..but yet so apt for a story where one looses her love....it was sad and beautiful.. loved loved loved it so much..

Mahii 💔💔💔💔

This hit really hard

It was so painful and heartbreaking..and it felt so reall.

Poor raavi, just imagining what she is going through makes me shiver.someone just take away her pain.plzz , she can't just get through with life this way.

I can't man, shiva dying is 💔.I imagined that the show shiva is no more,and I kind of felt so empty for a moment..I actually cried in this, usually reading something emotional makes my eyes misty, but this was...

It was really good, your writing has the Power to make it seem real and that just makes the impact so much stronger.i had hope till the last maahi.....

Originally posted by: deeps07

Not ur best??..this was extremely good..it touched my heart on so many levels..really👏..the flow was beautiful..the description of shivas insecurity especially the mention of mirror showing their differences..I so loved it....the ending was so heartbreaking..but yet so apt for a story where one looses her love....it was sad and beautiful.. loved loved loved it so much..

Thank you so much dear.

It means a lot to me that u liked it.🖤🖤

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Say Hi to ua mom from me. She is a sweetheart. I love her jolly nature. And thank you so much T.

🖤

Do u think I should delete it?

All of them r upset😔

Hey 🤗

I don't think so. It's a beautiful story with grief!

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

Mahii 💔💔💔💔

This hit really hard

It was so painful and heartbreaking..and it felt so reall.

Poor raavi, just imagining what she is going through makes me shiver.someone just take away her pain.plzz , she can't just get through with life this way.

I can't man, shiva dying is 💔.I imagined that the show shiva is no more,and I kind of felt so empty for a moment..I actually cried in this, usually reading something emotional makes my eyes misty, but this was...

It was really good, your writing has the Power to make it seem real and that just makes the impact so much stronger.i had hope till the last maahi.....

Priyanka🖤

He is still alive in the show.

Please don’t cry.

Thank u so much for reading it and liking it.

There will be an epilogue. A short one.

And just to take this pain away I am gonna write a happy OS too. Just dunno when. But soon hopefully.

Wow Mahii... this is just... wow

It was heartbreaking but beautiful. I think I am grieving for Raavi and Shiva.

I just read the first line.. no tomatoes potatoes eggs shoes and heavy objects allowed??? 😲

iska matlab shiva ko duniya se vida kar diya, hai na? 😲

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Priyanka🖤

He is still alive in the show.

Please don’t cry.

Thank u so much for reading it and liking it.

There will be an epilogue. A short one.

And just to take this pain away I am gonna write a happy OS too. Just dunno when. But soon hopefully.

Will wait maahi❤️

Especially for this one's epilogue.

Caught you in one hour! 🤣
you said this would make us laugh, I’m going in with that expectation 😆